Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

by Talat on May 22, 2007, 09:24:57 AM

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«Reply #15 on: July 25, 2007, 07:58:26 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Manzil jise samjha bana wo meel ka pathar
Nayi manzil, naye raaste manzoor ho gaye

beautiful lines!!!!!


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Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

«Reply #16 on: July 27, 2007, 08:31:12 AM »

Quote from: "Bharat"

Hi Talat,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!

kuch lamho ka tera sath, sirf ek ehsaas sa raha
us pal se aaj ke is pal tak, main udaas sa raha

ab door hai tera ashiyana, alag hai teri duniya
par tasawwur mein tera chehra, mere paas sa raha

aarzuu to na thi ki har raat ho chandani raat
meri hayaat ka har ek lamha, amaas sa raha

nasuur hote gaye, dil par lage har ek zakham
par hothon pe mere, muskano ka libaas sa raha

basa rakhi hai teri yaaden, dil ke ek kone mein
mere badan ka wo hissa, kuch khaas sa raha!!!

wha.. bharat aap ne to nayaab sa likh diya


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Talat

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Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

«Reply #17 on: July 27, 2007, 09:13:24 AM »

Thanks Rajbir, Shikha, Bharat, Khwaish and Meena.

Bharat,

Sorry, could nt read it before...aajkal shayari forums main aana nahin hota, infact Yoindia pe hi aana nahin hota.

You have written amazing...This is one of the best work I have ever seen on Yoindia !


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Bharat

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Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

«Reply #18 on: July 28, 2007, 07:19:44 PM »

Khwaish, Meena, paani & Talat,

Thanks to all of you for the nice appreciation !!!


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Aryaan

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Re: Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

«Reply #19 on: August 01, 2007, 01:16:22 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Kya kahen hum kaise tujhse door ho gaye
Haalaat se, kuch khud se majboor ho gaye

Mohhabbat rula deti hai, kab ye maana tha
Apne dil ke afsaane wohi dastoor ho gaye

Manzil jise samjha bana wo meel ka pathar
Nayi manzil, naye raaste manzoor ho gaye

Hadd se barh jaaye jo ghum, deta nahin dard
Muskura rahe hain, aise hum ranjoor ho gaye

Dil tera reza reza hai, kaise sambhale tujhko
Khudaya humse kaise yeh qusoor ho gaye !!!

Excellent Talat...


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Talat

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Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

«Reply #20 on: August 02, 2007, 09:52:05 AM »

Shukriya Aryaan Usual Smile


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Talat

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Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

«Reply #21 on: August 28, 2007, 06:26:57 PM »

Kuch palon ka saath, umar bhar ki yaad
Kaise hote hain yeh dilon ke riwaaj

Zindagi ke safar milte hain kuch log,
Bhoolte nahin, hote hain wo khaas,

Apni apni dunya main khoye se hain
Phir bhi milne ki rehti hai ek aas


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Pooja

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Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

«Reply #22 on: August 28, 2007, 07:03:58 PM »

Very True Talat!!! Good lines!!!

Ho kar door tujhse, ek pal bhi chain na paya
Na hi koi khat, na hi tu laut kar ayya

Samjha lete kisi tarah se khud ko hum e dost
Is toote dil ko magar tere bin chain kahin na ayya!!!

Ho kar door tujhse, ek pal bhi chain na paya
Na hi koi khat, na hi tu laut kar ayya..............