Tukda tukda hua..... manjum

by manjum on May 16, 2011, 08:58:19 AM
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Ek dil tha mera tukda tukda hua.
Ek jahan tha mera tinka tinka hua.

Pahle alfaj mujh se mere chhine gaye,
Fir sitam mere sath rafta rafta hua.

Haadse the bahut mushkilen thi kai,
Aur dil tha mera tadpa tadpa hua.

Bas yahi mere khwabon ki taabir thi,
Mera har  khwab hai bikhra bikhra hua.

Sinchkar apne aansu sanwara tha jo,
Rah gaya wo chaman ujada ujada hua.


Manju  "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2011, 09:02:55 AM »
Quote from: manjum on May 16, 2011, 08:58:19 AM

Ek dil tha mera tukda tukda hua.
Ek jahan tha mera tinka tinka hua.

Pahle alfaj mujh se mere chhine gaye,
Fir sitam mere sath rafta rafta hua.

Haadse the bahut mushkilen thi kai,
Aur dil tha mera tadpa tadpa hua.

Bas yahi mere khwabon ki taabir thi,
Mera har  khwab hai bikhra bikhra hua.

Sinchkar apne aansu sanwara tha jo,
Rah gaya wo chaman ujada ujada hua.


Manju  "mann"



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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2011, 09:16:00 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya adilji....

sath rahie....
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2011, 09:16:48 AM »
bahut bahut Khoob Anjuji..

Jazbaaton Se Bharpoor!!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2011, 09:22:20 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji..... aapne pasand kia...
bas dil ki baat hai....

sath rahie...
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2011, 11:26:39 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
Wah..Khoob..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2011, 12:07:59 PM »
Manjum Jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne aapke waah janab... Aap ki har kalaam
aik se badhkar aik aane lagi hai ... waah
aapki kalam ka kamaal behad khubsurti se ubhar kar
aa raha hai... Usual Smile

Aise hi khoob kalaamoN ke saat aate rahiye...
Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         



Quote from: manjum on May 16, 2011, 08:58:19 AM

Ek dil tha mera tukda tukda hua.
Ek jahan tha mera tinka tinka hua.

Achcha Matla kaha hai aur bhi khub ban sakta tha humare khayaal se... jaise Dil ko tukda tukda kahna kuch ajeeb sound karta hai... us lihaaz se?         

Pahle alfaj mujh se mere chhine gaye,
Fir sitam mere sath rafta rafta hua.

Waah jee waah kia baat hai bahut khoob
bahut umdaa janab Usual Smile daad daad daad Usual Smile         

Haadse the bahut mushkilen thi kai,
Aur dil tha mera tadpa tadpa hua.

Yeh sher bhi behad khoob raha daad Usual Smile         

Bas yahi mere khwabon ki taabir thi,
Mera har  khwab hai bikhra bikhra hua.

Waah jee waah bahut khoob bahut umdaa Usual Smile achchi bayani rahi daad Usual Smile         

Sinchkar apne aansu sanwara tha jo,
Rah gaya wo chaman ujada ujada hua.

Behad khoob Manjum jee behad achchi shayari kar rahiN hai aap... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa khayaal aur achchi bayaani meiN kalaam kahte rahiye.... Aapki kalam meiN behad fun hai ...

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2011, 04:06:32 PM »
Dard se bharpur apki ye kavita behad khubsurat hai manju mann ji...
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2011, 05:53:56 PM »
nice………

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gam e furkat me jiske nyochawar tha jo…
milta hai ab kuch ukhda ukhda sa wo

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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2011, 04:12:06 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya rahimji....

aapka sath bana rahe....
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2011, 04:15:17 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya parwazji....

aapki cmnts aur daad milti rahe... issi ummeid main....

sath rahie....
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2011, 04:16:54 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya geetji....

aap doston ka sath bana rahe.....

sath rahie...
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2011, 04:18:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sarfiraji.... khub kaha aapne

sath rahie....
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2011, 04:20:31 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya shihabji....

yun hi sath rahie...... duaye dete rahie....
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2011, 05:24:46 AM »
 manjumji,Khoobsurat Shairy ke liye Mubarakbad aur Daad Qubool Faarmaei.n.FHSiddiqui
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