Tum achhi ho... (NM)

by vb on May 05, 2010, 01:17:20 PM

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Re: Tum achhi ho... (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2010, 03:27:12 PM »

Bohat Bohat Bohat khoobsoorat peshkash hai aap ki taraf se vb ji. bohat hi behtareen..... Applause

kya jazbaat likhein hain aapne. dil ko gahraai tak chhoo gaye. hamesh aise hi likhte rahiye. : icon_salut:


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Re: Tum achhi ho... (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2010, 03:29:18 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob V.b Ji..

bahut Hi Dilchasp Aur Dil Ko Chuune wale jazbaat..

Bahut Ache..


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Re: Tum achhi ho... (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2010, 11:02:15 PM »

Ab main is soch me hoon ki kin shabdon me aapke is geet ki taarif karun. Bahut mohabbat bhare shabdon me aapne apne dard ko pesh kiya hai. Dil ko andar tak chhoo gayi aapki ye geet. Bahut bahut pyaara likha hai. Sachche aashiq ke dil se nikle dard ke geet hain ye. Bahut achcha likha hai aapne. Lambi kavitaon ko bahut kam log padhte hain pad jo aapka likha hua ye geet ek baar padh lega use aapke geeton ka intzaar hamesha rahega. Sach bahut khoob likhte hain aap. Bahut khoob.

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