Tum bhi , Hum bhi

by poppoetry on June 14, 2009, 04:02:53 PM
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Haalaton se majbur hue tum bhi,hum bhi
Apni hi ana me chur hue tum bhi

Ek waqt tha hoti thi pyar ki baatein
Us waqt se dur hue tum bhi,hum bhi

Pheli ek chingari jisne jla diya aashiyaan
Us aag ko hwa dene wale tum bhi,hum bhi

Gairon ko sunai apni nakaam mohabbat ki dastaan
Ek duje ki najron me gire tum bhi,hum bhi

Khuch is tarah se jali nafrat ki shma
Us shma me jal gaye tum bhi,hum bhi
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2009, 04:07:10 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Pooja ji.
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2009, 04:14:36 PM »
Beautiful creation Pop Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2009, 04:56:21 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Pooja ji.
shukriya Sophi ji.Aap mere naam k aage ji nhi lgayengi to acha lagega
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2009, 04:57:27 PM »
Beautiful creation Pop Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
shukriya Sarvesh ji......
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2009, 06:46:32 PM »
Beautiful creation Pooja ji,kamaal ke likhti ho aap. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2009, 08:09:47 PM »
    WOW POOJA BAHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2009, 03:00:39 AM »
Bahut achhe PoPz...
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2009, 05:23:55 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Pooja Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"Pehli Ek Chingari Jisne Jala Diya Aashiyan,
Uss Aag Ko Hawa Dene Wale tum bhi, Hum Bhi..

Gairon ko Sunai APNE Nakaam Mohabbat Ki Dastaan,
Ek Duje Ki Nazron Mein Gire Tum bhi, Hum Bhi..."

Aapne Shikayte Bhi Karli Aur Saath-Saath mein khud Ko Bhi Gunehgaar Bata Diya.
Andaz-E-Bayaan Bahut Khhob Tha..Great work Pooja Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2009, 05:59:26 AM »
Beautiful creation Pooja ji,kamaal ke likhti ho aap. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
shukriya Madhu ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2009, 06:00:39 AM »
Bahut achhe PoPz...
Thanx a lot Angel ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2009, 06:01:26 AM »
    WOW POOJA BAHUT KHOOB
thanks Shabana
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2009, 06:04:10 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Pooja Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"Pehli Ek Chingari Jisne Jala Diya Aashiyan,
Uss Aag Ko Hawa Dene Wale tum bhi, Hum Bhi..

Gairon ko Sunai APNE Nakaam Mohabbat Ki Dastaan,
Ek Duje Ki Nazron Mein Gire Tum bhi, Hum Bhi..."

Aapne Shikayte Bhi Karli Aur Saath-Saath mein khud Ko Bhi Gunehgaar Bata Diya.
Andaz-E-Bayaan Bahut Khhob Tha..Great work Pooja Thumbs UP

Sahi kha aapne khwaish ji....shikayat bhi h aur khud ki galtiyon ka afsos bhi.......shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2009, 06:11:11 AM »
Sahi kha aapne khwaish ji....shikayat bhi h aur khud ki galtiyon ka afsos bhi.......shukriya

Bahut Kam Hi Insaan Hote Ho Hai, Jo Aisi Soch Rakh Paate hai,warna Iss Duniya Mein Galtiyan Sirf Dusra Insaan Hi karta Hai..Aapki Iss Soch Ko Salaam Hai Mera.. icon_salut icon_salut notworthy
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2009, 06:15:43 AM »
Popat,

Bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause

Nice creation Usual Smile

Keep going Thumbs UP
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