Tum bhi , Hum bhi -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: June 15, 2009, 06:32:21 AM »

Quote from: Rajbir on June 15, 2009, 06:15:43 AM

Popat,

Bahut khoob Applause

Nice creation Usual Smile

Keep going

thanx a lot......Raj ji


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Re: Tum bhi , Hum bhi

«Reply #16 on: June 15, 2009, 06:38:29 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 15, 2009, 06:11:11 AM

Bahut Kam Hi Insaan Hote Ho Hai, Jo Aisi Soch Rakh Paate hai,warna Iss Duniya Mein Galtiyan Sirf Dusra Insaan Hi karta Hai..Aapki Iss Soch Ko Salaam Hai Mera..

ab mai kya kahu aapse Khwaish ji......... notworthy


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Re: Tum bhi , Hum bhi

«Reply #17 on: June 15, 2009, 07:56:16 AM »

bahut achche Pop ji


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Re: Tum bhi , Hum bhi

«Reply #18 on: June 15, 2009, 08:55:34 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on June 15, 2009, 08:36:50 AM

Wah Wah Jitni Tareef Karun Kum Hai
Kya Khoob Shabdon Ko Peeryona Hai
Pooja Ji Aapne,Har Line Bas Kamaal Hai
Par Ye Line To Sidha Dil Main Hi Utar Gayi Ji
Bohat Hi Umda Keep It Up.

Aapke Is Kalaam Pe Faraz Ji Ki
Kuch Liens Yaad Aa Gayi Mujhe.

Jab koi zakhm bhara daagh bana
Jab koi bhool gaya yaad aaya

Ye mohabat bhi kiya roag hai Faraz
Jiss ko bhoolay wo sada yaad aaya.

bahu bahut shukriya Shihab ji....aapne bakhubhi smjha is tadap ko....shukriyan
bahut khub......jiss ko bhoolay wo sada yaad aaya......


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Re: Tum bhi , Hum bhi

«Reply #19 on: June 15, 2009, 08:56:24 AM »

Quote from: shab on June 15, 2009, 07:56:16 AM

bahut achche Pop ji

thanx shabana


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Re: Tum bhi , Hum bhi

«Reply #20 on: June 16, 2009, 07:25:35 AM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 14, 2009, 04:02:53 PM

Haalaton se majbur hue tum bhi,hum bhi
Apni hi ana me chur hue tum bhi

Ek waqt tha hoti thi pyar ki baatein
Us waqt se dur hue tum bhi,hum bhi

Pheli ek chingari jisne jla diya aashiyaan
Us aag ko hwa dene wale tum bhi,hum bhi

Gairon ko sunai apni nakaam mohabbat ki dastaan
Ek duje ki najron me gire tum bhi,hum bhi

Khuch is tarah se jali nafrat ki shma
Us shma me jal gaye tum bhi,hum bhi

Wow.. Kya Baat hai Pooja... Lafzon Ko Dard Ke sath Behad Khubsoorati se Yahan Pesh Kiya Hai Dear.. Behad Touching & Khubsoorat Rachna Hai.. Dil Ko Chhoo gaya ek ek Lafz...!! Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Pooja.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Tum bhi , Hum bhi

«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2009, 07:27:24 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB HAI AAPKI MOHABBAT KI DAASTAAN


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Re: Tum bhi , Hum bhi

«Reply #22 on: June 16, 2009, 10:15:41 AM »

Quote from: Mann on June 16, 2009, 07:25:35 AM

**~** Mann **~**

shukriyan Mann ji......lafjoon me chipe dard ko aapne mehsus kiya...Khub Mann ji.


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Re: Tum bhi , Hum bhi

«Reply #23 on: June 16, 2009, 10:17:45 AM »

Quote from: poppoetry on June 14, 2009, 04:02:53 PM

Very beautiful work...very very nice Pops..Bohot Khoob Clapping Smiley


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