TUM GHAR LOUT AANA...SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on July 23, 2013, 01:49:31 PM
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jab dhalti shaam mein dil ghabaraye , tum ghar lout aana
jab dil mein koi baichini se badh jaye, tum ghar lout aana

palkein bichhaye aaj bhi intzar mein rehti hai teri maa
tujhe kabhi bhule se maa ki yaad aaye, tum ghar lout aana

bachpan guzara tha jis aangan mein  tumne khel khel kar
jo yaad kr us aangan ko ashk beh jaye, tum ghar lout aana

maa aaj bhi bana kar rakhti hai teri pasand ke pakwan
bahar khane se jo bhukh na mit paye, tum ghar lout aana

rakhi ka dhaga le bhai ke intzar mein gumsum baithi hai behna
gar yeh dhaga apnepan ka ehsas dilaye, tum ghar lout aana

kandhe bitha jisne dunia dikhai wo aaj bhi teri raah takte hain
jab dunia ki chakachoundh se dil bhar jaye,tum ghar lout aana

maa baba ki zuban kuch na kahe par nam aakhein sab kehti hai
in aansuon ki jab tumhe qadr samjh aaye , tum ghar lout aana

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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2013, 01:56:21 PM »
waah waah laajawaab dheron daad aur blessings
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2013, 01:58:42 PM »
wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2013, 02:01:54 PM »
silently, ek rau le jaaiye aap, jo bhi ghar se door hoN, unhe bahut chooyega ye kalaam aapka...
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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2013, 02:25:16 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on July 23, 2013, 01:49:31 PM
jab dhalti shaam mein dil ghabaraye , tum ghar lout aana
jab dil mein koi baichini se badh jaye, tum ghar lout aana

palkein bichhaye aaj bhi intzar mein rehti hai teri maa
tujhe kabhi bhule se maa ki yaad aaye, tum ghar lout aana

bachpan guzara tha jis aangan mein  tumne khel khel kar
jo yaad kr us aangan ko ashk beh jaye, tum ghar lout aana

maa aaj bhi bana kar rakhti hai teri pasand ke pakwan
bahar khane se jo bhukh na mit paye, tum ghar lout aana

rakhi ka dhaga le bhai ke intzar mein gumsum baithi hai behna
gar yeh dhaga apnepan ka ehsas dilaye, tum ghar lout aana

kandhe bitha jisne dunia dikhai wo aaj bhi teri raah takte hain
jab dunia ki chakachoundh se dil bhar jaye,tum ghar lout aana

maa baba ki zuban kuch na kahe par nam aakhein sab kehti hai
in aansuon ki jab tumhe qadr samjh aaye , tum ghar lout aana

Bhut acha likha hai ap nay
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Dil ko shu gai ap ki yeh poem
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2013, 03:03:52 PM »
jab dhalti shaam mein dil ghabaraye , tum ghar lout aana
jab dil mein koi baichini se badh jaye, tum ghar lout aana

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palkein bichhaye aaj bhi intzar mein rehti hai teri maa
tujhe kabhi bhule se maa ki yaad aaye, tum ghar lout aana

 tearyeyed tearyeyed miss my mom  .... touching sher

bachpan guzara tha jis aangan mein  tumne khel khel kar
jo yaad kr us aangan ko ashk beh jaye, tum ghar lout aana

yaad bht aata hai us ghar ka aangan baba
tune jis ghar se mujhe bidaa kiya tha
 sad5 sad5

maa aaj bhi bana kar rakhti hai teri pasand ke pakwan
bahar khane se jo bhukh na mit paye, tum ghar lout aana

mom k banaye khane ki yaad dila di saudagar

rakhi ka dhaga le bhai ke intzar mein gumsum baithi hai behna
gar yeh dhaga apnepan ka ehsas dilaye, tum ghar lout aana

rakhi ka tyohaar paas hai... aur hum dur bht dur bhaiya....

kandhe bitha jisne dunia dikhai wo aaj bhi teri raah takte hain
jab dunia ki chakachoundh se dil bhar jaye,tum ghar lout aana

hmmmmmmmmm.......... sad7 sad7 sad7

maa baba ki zuban kuch na kahe par nam aakhein sab kehti hai
in aansuon ki jab tumhe qadr samjh aaye , tum ghar lout aana

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saudagar  hats off..... itne ache mood ki band baja di tumne.....
ab tumko hi sahi bhi karna padega ...
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2013, 03:21:17 PM »
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ek dam lajawaab peshkash soudagar ji. bahut dil ko chhooo gayi yeh rachna aapki. sabhi ashaar ne aankhein nam kar diye. aapko hazaron dili daad is rachna par aur ek rau bhi...
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2013, 06:20:25 PM »
sach me soudagar ji... ghar ki yaad dila di yaar aapne.. sad5

missing everything..... maa baap se, ghar se door rehne ka gham humse behtar aur koun jaan sakega... jo ek anjaan sehar me bilkul akela ho bilkul akela... meri tanhayi ko maano jaise aansoon ki sougaat mil gayi ho...

but realy heart touching soudagar ji..

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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2013, 06:48:43 PM »

waqai lajaawab kardiya apne soudagar ,

khhushiyon ka sauda gham se kardiya ye kalaam kehker,

taish ji ne Rau diya main thodi der ruk ker deta hun..

bemissal kamaal kamaal ,ghazab kahin hai.

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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2013, 08:37:59 PM »
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bahut sundar rachna, Soudagar bhaai.. chhoo gayi aapki yeh rachnaa hamaare dil ko... bahut bauhut pyaaraa likha hai aapne, hum me se aise bahut log hain jo kaam kaaj ke kaaran ghar se duur hain aur apne maataa pitaa ko waqt nahi de paate, ghar se bahut duur rehte hain aur saal mein bas ek do baar hi mumkin ho paataa hai milne jaanaa...aapki yeh rachnaa dil mein andar tak asar kar gayi... !!! bahut bahut khoob janaab....!!!

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2013, 10:55:51 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2013, 11:05:00 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB SOUDAGAR JI
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«Reply #12 on: July 23, 2013, 11:11:43 PM »
waah waah Saudagar jee, bahut hi khoob, ham jaise ghar se baahar rehne waaloN ke liye kaafi emotional kalaam hai. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
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«Reply #13 on: July 23, 2013, 11:57:38 PM »
So Nice.
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«Reply #14 on: July 24, 2013, 01:41:27 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob soudagar jee..ekdum dil me utar gayi ye ghazal apki..mera to haal hi bayaan kar diya..dili daad deta hun iss behatareen kalaam pe..happy9

Hats off to you!
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