tum ghazal ban jaoge

by saahill on June 08, 2011, 05:38:30 PM
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dadhkan bana loge muje soch ke dil tume diya tha .

Khayalon mein mujko paoge soch ke apni soch ko tume diya tha .

Apne khawabon mein mujko paoge soch ke neendon ko tume diya tha.

Apni jaan muje banaoge yeh soch ke saanson ko tume diya tha .

Meri pehchaan tum banjaoge soch ke saahil naam tume apna diya tha.

Meri ghazal tum banjaoge soch ke main Shaayar bana tha .

Tum chandani ban kar aoge soch ke raat ko dhalne se roka tha .

Yeh soch ke tum bhi parhoge kabhi har shayari mein naam tera likha tha
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2011, 05:44:21 PM »
sahil g aapke sher mei to gazel shabd  hhai he nahi
shayed adhura sher hai ye
dadhkan bana loge muje soch ke dil tume diya tha .

Khayalon mein mujko paoge soch ke apni soch ko tume diya tha .

Apne khawabon mein mujko paoge soch ke neendon ko tume diya tha.

Apni jaan muje banaoge yeh soch ke saanson ko tume diya tha .

Meri pehchaan tum banjaoge soch ke saahil naam tume apna diya tha
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2011, 05:53:01 PM »
manoj ji cmplete kar diya hai . Gaur kijiyega
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2011, 02:35:01 AM »
thx manoj ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2011, 03:15:06 AM »
Gd Saahill  jee
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2011, 03:22:02 AM »
thx sanjeev ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2011, 12:10:15 PM »

Saahill Ji,

Khayal to achchhe hain thoda aur behtar
tareeka apnaayen baandhne ka to jyada maza
aayega.

All the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2011, 01:14:44 PM »
shukrya satish ji
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