-----/// Tum naa kehte the /// ------ Hriday

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tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaoge
tum naa kehte the ki tanha jee naa paaoge
rehna pade agar ek pal bhi duur mujhse to
tum naa kehte the ki kabhi reh naa paaoge

ab jee rahe ho kisi aur ke sangh khushi se
kya huwa vaadaa saath nibhaane ka tumhaaraa
paagal main hi thaa jo aaj bhi tanhaa hoon
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaaoge

wo raatein mulaquaatein kyun bhool gaye tum
wo pyaar bhari baatein kyun bhool gaye tum
karke saath nibhaane ka vaadaa mujhse
kyun mujhe yun tanhaa chhod gaye tum

tum naa kehte the ki ye duniyaa bahut buri hai
ab tum ki kaho kyun duniyaa jaise ban gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki mohabbat haseen khwaab hai
kyun us haseen khwaab ko bhalaa tod gaye tum

kyun mere haathon me liya haath bhool gaye tum
kyun un haseen palon kaa saath bhool gaye tum
kyaa bhoolne ke liye hi mile the tum mujhse
kyun mujhse ki huyi har ek baat bhool gaye tum

tum naa kehte the ki mujhe na bhulaa paaoge
tum naa kehte the ki har pal saath nibhaaoge
kya huwaa aaj tumhaari kahi un baaton kaa
tum naa kehte the ki har vaadaa nibhaaoge

tum naa kehte the ki main tum bin mar jaaungaa
tum naa kehte the ki main tut ke bikhar jaaunga
chalo tumhaari kahi baat hi maan lete hain
ab tum bin main ye duniyaa hi chhod jaaungaa

khush raho tum apne naye sansaar me
main tum bin tanhaa hi chaalaa jaaungaa
duua karunga ki bas khushiyaan hi mile tumhe
aur main ab mitti ke sangh mil jaaungaa

tum naa kehte the ki.....
tum naa kehte the ki.....

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2012, 03:36:01 PM »
Bahut khoob Kapil jee
jaise baarish ka bahta huaa paani. aage badhta jaata hai..apna raasta khud bana leta hai usi tarah aap jo likhte hai use padho to, dil me tarange si uthti hai. jab taar jhanjhanaate hai, vo vaakiye jo gujar chuke hote hai use padh kar dil me ek hoonk si uthti hai.. kabhi positive to kabhi negative..
Dard ka dariya to aise hi bahta hai na.
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2012, 04:04:13 PM »
very nice n touching...last 2 paragraphs are so painful!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2012, 04:25:32 PM »
aapki is peshkash par jyada kuch kehne ko nahi hai mere pass.....kapil bhai bas yahi kahunga jo tum likhte ho apne dil se likhte ho ..jo sidhe hi hamare dil mein utar jati hai .......

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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2012, 06:40:37 PM »
Kapil Jee Aadaab!

WaaH waaH kia baat hai Kapil Jee gazab kar diyaa aapne
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 01:33:24 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob shaandaar
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 08:25:43 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 21, 2012, 03:24:39 PM
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaoge
tum naa kehte the ki tanha jee naa paaoge
rehna pade agar ek pal bhi duur mujhse to
tum naa kehte the ki kabhi reh naa paaoge

ab jee rahe ho kisi aur ke sangh khushi se
kya huwa vaadaa saath nibhaane ka tumhaaraa
paagal main hi thaa jo aaj bhi tanhaa hoon
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaaoge

wo raatein mulaquaatein kyun bhool gaye tum
wo pyaar bhari baatein kyun bhool gaye tum
karke saath nibhaane ka vaadaa mujhse
kyun mujhe yun tanhaa chhod gaye tum

tum naa kehte the ki ye duniyaa bahut buri hai
ab tum ki kaho kyun duniyaa jaise ban gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki mohabbat haseen khwaab hai
kyun us haseen khwaab ko bhalaa tod gaye tum

kyun mere haathon me liya haath bhool gaye tum
kyun un haseen palon kaa saath bhool gaye tum
kyaa bhoolne ke liye hi mile the tum mujhse
kyun mujhse ki huyi har ek baat bhool gaye tum

tum naa kehte the ki mujhe na bhulaa paaoge
tum naa kehte the ki har pal saath nibhaaoge
kya huwaa aaj tumhaari kahi un baaton kaa
tum naa kehte the ki har vaadaa nibhaaoge

tum naa kehte the ki main tum bin mar jaaungaa
tum naa kehte the ki main tut ke bikhar jaaunga
chalo tumhaari kahi baat hi maan lete hain
ab tum bin main ye duniyaa hi chhod jaaungaa

khush raho tum apne naye sansaar me
main tum bin tanhaa hi chaalaa jaaungaa
duua karunga ki bas khushiyaan hi mile tumhe
aur main ab mitti ke sangh mil jaaungaa

tum naa kehte the ki.....
tum naa kehte the ki.....

*****HRIDAY*****


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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2012, 07:28:30 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 21, 2012, 03:24:39 PM
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaoge
tum naa kehte the ki tanha jee naa paaoge
rehna pade agar ek pal bhi duur mujhse to
tum naa kehte the ki kabhi reh naa paaoge

main jhoothi hoon mujh pe yaqeen kyon kiya. kya mujhe aur kaam nahin hai sirf tumhaari baat sunti rahoon . mere peeche hi chipak gaye the to kya karti Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
ab jee rahe ho kisi aur ke sangh khushi se
kya huwa vaadaa saath nibhaane ka tumhaaraa
paagal main hi thaa jo aaj bhi tanhaa hoon
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaaoge

ab meri apni bhi to majboori thi jo tum kabhi sunn ne ke liye tayaar hi naa the.
aur haan kisne kah diya main kisi aur ke saath hoon. jab se tum gaye ho abhi bhi akeli hoon. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

wo raatein mulaquaatein kyun bhool gaye tum
wo pyaar bhari baatein kyun bhool gaye tum
karke saath nibhaane ka vaadaa mujhse
kyun mujhe yun tanhaa chhod gaye tum

kuch memory loss ka bhi problem hai. treatment chall raha hai dheere dheere puraani baatein yaad aa rahi hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
tum naa kehte the ki ye duniyaa bahut buri hai
ab tum ki kaho kyun duniyaa jaise ban gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki mohabbat haseen khwaab hai
kyun us haseen khwaab ko bhalaa tod gaye tum

tumhaari harkat hi aisi thi ki jaana padaa. koi kaam dhaam dhang se karte nahin the ghar mein pade rahte the . zindagi bhalaa mohabbat ke sahaare to guzarti nahin paise bhi chahiye hotye hain. zimmedaariya hain....etcetc Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

kyun mere haathon me liya haath bhool gaye tum
kyun un haseen palon kaa saath bhool gaye tum
kyaa bhoolne ke liye hi mile the tum mujhse
kyun mujhse ki huyi har ek baat bhool gaye tum

kahaan na baat yaad aane pe bataao.n gi kyon bhooli thi Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

tum naa kehte the ki mujhe na bhulaa paaoge
tum naa kehte the ki har pal saath nibhaaoge
kya huwaa aaj tumhaari kahi un baaton kaa
tum naa kehte the ki har vaadaa nibhaaoge
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tum naa kehte the ki main tum bin mar jaaungaa
tum naa kehte the ki main tut ke bikhar jaaunga
chalo tumhaari kahi baat hi maan lete hain
ab tum bin main ye duniyaa hi chhod jaaungaa
na babaa aisa mat karna varna duniya mujhe jeene nahin degi. main apni baat vaapas leti hoon ji..tum 1000 saal jiyo aur likhte raho. main tumhein padoo.n gi, sunoon gi per ab boloo.n gi nahin Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
khush raho tum apne naye sansaar me
main tum bin tanhaa hi chaalaa jaaungaa
duua karunga ki bas khushiyaan hi mile tumhe
aur main ab mitti ke sangh mil jaaungaa
arrrrrrrrrrrrey ye kya kah rahe ho. main bhi abhi tanhaa hoon acha zara sabr karo. main vapas aao.n gi. itni iltejah ke baad to mann paseeeeeeej jataa hai. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
tum naa kehte the ki.....
tum naa kehte the ki.....

*****HRIDAY*****


ab kuch nahin kahoon gi hriday. tum bahut khoob likhte ho ji. maza aa gaya.per  dekho mujh se naraaz mat rahna
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2012, 02:32:13 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji... bahut achcha lagta hai ye jaanke ki meri rachnaayein aapke dil ke itne kareb rehti hai.. aap use mehsoos kar paate hain.... main kisi bhi bahaane se aapke dil ke kareeb pahuch paataa hoon , ye mera soubhaagya hai... bahut bahut shukriyaa sirji....!!!

Quote from: mkv on August 21, 2012, 03:36:01 PM
Bahut khoob Kapil jee
jaise baarish ka bahta huaa paani. aage badhta jaata hai..apna raasta khud bana leta hai usi tarah aap jo likhte hai use padho to, dil me tarange si uthti hai. jab taar jhanjhanaate hai, vo vaakiye jo gujar chuke hote hai use padh kar dil me ek hoonk si uthti hai.. kabhi positive to kabhi negative..
Dard ka dariya to aise hi bahta hai na.
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2012, 03:09:13 PM »
wah excellant  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2012, 03:40:51 PM »
Thanks a lot Sps ji....!!!

Quote from: Sps on August 21, 2012, 04:04:13 PM
very nice n touching...last 2 paragraphs are so painful!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 01, 2012, 06:46:39 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji.....!!!

Quote from: soudagar on August 21, 2012, 04:25:32 PM
aapki is peshkash par jyada kuch kehne ko nahi hai mere pass.....kapil bhai bas yahi kahunga jo tum likhte ho apne dil se likhte ho ..jo sidhe hi hamare dil mein utar jati hai .......

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«Reply #12 on: September 01, 2012, 07:20:27 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 21, 2012, 03:24:39 PM
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaoge
tum naa kehte the ki tanha jee naa paaoge
rehna pade agar ek pal bhi duur mujhse to
tum naa kehte the ki kabhi reh naa paaoge

ab jee rahe ho kisi aur ke sangh khushi se
kya huwa vaadaa saath nibhaane ka tumhaaraa
paagal main hi thaa jo aaj bhi tanhaa hoon
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaaoge

wo raatein mulaquaatein kyun bhool gaye tum
wo pyaar bhari baatein kyun bhool gaye tum
karke saath nibhaane ka vaadaa mujhse
kyun mujhe yun tanhaa chhod gaye tum

tum naa kehte the ki ye duniyaa bahut buri hai
ab tum ki kaho kyun duniyaa jaise ban gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki mohabbat haseen khwaab hai
kyun us haseen khwaab ko bhalaa tod gaye tum

kyun mere haathon me liya haath bhool gaye tum
kyun un haseen palon kaa saath bhool gaye tum
kyaa bhoolne ke liye hi mile the tum mujhse
kyun mujhse ki huyi har ek baat bhool gaye tum

tum naa kehte the ki mujhe na bhulaa paaoge
tum naa kehte the ki har pal saath nibhaaoge
kya huwaa aaj tumhaari kahi un baaton kaa
tum naa kehte the ki har vaadaa nibhaaoge

tum naa kehte the ki main tum bin mar jaaungaa
tum naa kehte the ki main tut ke bikhar jaaunga
chalo tumhaari kahi baat hi maan lete hain
ab tum bin main ye duniyaa hi chhod jaaungaa

khush raho tum apne naye sansaar me
main tum bin tanhaa hi chaalaa jaaungaa
duua karunga ki bas khushiyaan hi mile tumhe
aur main ab mitti ke sangh mil jaaungaa

tum naa kehte the ki.....
tum naa kehte the ki.....

*****HRIDAY*****

very pure simple and touching
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2012, 12:41:11 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji... yunhi saath dete rahiye.... aap sabhi ka saath hi hai ki kuch na kuch likh lete hain... bahut bahut shukriyaaa...!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 21, 2012, 06:40:37 PM
Kapil Jee Aadaab!

WaaH waaH kia baat hai Kapil Jee gazab kar diyaa aapne
is khoob kalaam meiN... aik se badhkar aik khayaal aur
behad khoob aur umdaa adaygi... Usual Smile

Behad khoob Kapil jee... humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2012, 06:15:46 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Saini ji...!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on August 22, 2012, 01:33:24 AM
waah waah bahut khoob shaandaar
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