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tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaoge
tum naa kehte the ki tanha jee naa paaoge
rehna pade agar ek pal bhi duur mujhse to
tum naa kehte the ki kabhi reh naa paaoge
ab jee rahe ho kisi aur ke sangh khushi se
kya huwa vaadaa saath nibhaane ka tumhaaraa
paagal main hi thaa jo aaj bhi tanhaa hoon
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaaoge
wo raatein mulaquaatein kyun bhool gaye tum
wo pyaar bhari baatein kyun bhool gaye tum
karke saath nibhaane ka vaadaa mujhse
kyun mujhe yun tanhaa chhod gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki ye duniyaa bahut buri hai
ab tum ki kaho kyun duniyaa jaise ban gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki mohabbat haseen khwaab hai
kyun us haseen khwaab ko bhalaa tod gaye tum
kyun mere haathon me liya haath bhool gaye tum
kyun un haseen palon kaa saath bhool gaye tum
kyaa bhoolne ke liye hi mile the tum mujhse
kyun mujhse ki huyi har ek baat bhool gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki mujhe na bhulaa paaoge
tum naa kehte the ki har pal saath nibhaaoge
kya huwaa aaj tumhaari kahi un baaton kaa
tum naa kehte the ki har vaadaa nibhaaoge
tum naa kehte the ki main tum bin mar jaaungaa
tum naa kehte the ki main tut ke bikhar jaaunga
chalo tumhaari kahi baat hi maan lete hain
ab tum bin main ye duniyaa hi chhod jaaungaa
khush raho tum apne naye sansaar me
main tum bin tanhaa hi chaalaa jaaungaa
duua karunga ki bas khushiyaan hi mile tumhe
aur main ab mitti ke sangh mil jaaungaa
tum naa kehte the ki.....
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2012, 03:36:01 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Kapil jee
jaise baarish ka bahta huaa paani. aage badhta jaata hai..apna raasta khud bana leta hai usi tarah aap jo likhte hai use padho to, dil me tarange si uthti hai. jab taar jhanjhanaate hai, vo vaakiye jo gujar chuke hote hai use padh kar dil me ek hoonk si uthti hai.. kabhi positive to kabhi negative..
Dard ka dariya to aise hi bahta hai na.
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2012, 04:04:13 PM » |
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very nice n touching...last 2 paragraphs are so painful!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 01:33:24 AM » |
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waah waah bahut khoob shaandaar
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 08:25:43 AM » |
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2012, 07:28:30 AM » |
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ab kuch nahin kahoon gi hriday. tum bahut khoob likhte ho ji. maza aa gaya.per dekho mujh se naraaz mat rahna |
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2012, 02:32:13 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji... bahut achcha lagta hai ye jaanke ki meri rachnaayein aapke dil ke itne kareb rehti hai.. aap use mehsoos kar paate hain.... main kisi bhi bahaane se aapke dil ke kareeb pahuch paataa hoon , ye mera soubhaagya hai... bahut bahut shukriyaa sirji....!!! Bahut khoob Kapil jee
jaise baarish ka bahta huaa paani. aage badhta jaata hai..apna raasta khud bana leta hai usi tarah aap jo likhte hai use padho to, dil me tarange si uthti hai. jab taar jhanjhanaate hai, vo vaakiye jo gujar chuke hote hai use padh kar dil me ek hoonk si uthti hai.. kabhi positive to kabhi negative..
Dard ka dariya to aise hi bahta hai na.
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2012, 03:40:51 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Sps ji....!!! very nice n touching...last 2 paragraphs are so painful!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 01, 2012, 06:46:39 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji.....!!! |
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«Reply #12 on: September 01, 2012, 07:20:27 AM » |
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tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaoge
tum naa kehte the ki tanha jee naa paaoge
rehna pade agar ek pal bhi duur mujhse to
tum naa kehte the ki kabhi reh naa paaoge
ab jee rahe ho kisi aur ke sangh khushi se
kya huwa vaadaa saath nibhaane ka tumhaaraa
paagal main hi thaa jo aaj bhi tanhaa hoon
tum naa kehte the ki meraa saath nibhaaoge
wo raatein mulaquaatein kyun bhool gaye tum
wo pyaar bhari baatein kyun bhool gaye tum
karke saath nibhaane ka vaadaa mujhse
kyun mujhe yun tanhaa chhod gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki ye duniyaa bahut buri hai
ab tum ki kaho kyun duniyaa jaise ban gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki mohabbat haseen khwaab hai
kyun us haseen khwaab ko bhalaa tod gaye tum
kyun mere haathon me liya haath bhool gaye tum
kyun un haseen palon kaa saath bhool gaye tum
kyaa bhoolne ke liye hi mile the tum mujhse
kyun mujhse ki huyi har ek baat bhool gaye tum
tum naa kehte the ki mujhe na bhulaa paaoge
tum naa kehte the ki har pal saath nibhaaoge
kya huwaa aaj tumhaari kahi un baaton kaa
tum naa kehte the ki har vaadaa nibhaaoge
tum naa kehte the ki main tum bin mar jaaungaa
tum naa kehte the ki main tut ke bikhar jaaunga
chalo tumhaari kahi baat hi maan lete hain
ab tum bin main ye duniyaa hi chhod jaaungaa
khush raho tum apne naye sansaar me
main tum bin tanhaa hi chaalaa jaaungaa
duua karunga ki bas khushiyaan hi mile tumhe
aur main ab mitti ke sangh mil jaaungaa
tum naa kehte the ki.....
tum naa kehte the ki..... very pure simple and touching |
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2012, 12:41:11 PM » |
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2012, 06:15:46 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Saini ji...!!! waah waah bahut khoob shaandaar
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