Tumhaari chahat phir kheech laatee hai mujhe....

by KOYAL46 on February 12, 2010, 12:19:40 PM
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Kis mod pe ye zindagi le aayee hai mujhe
Chhod chale they jin rishto ko hum pechhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech layi hai mujhe
Darrti hu zamaana de-de na koi sazaa tujhe

Socha tha jee lenge tum bin hum O-sanam
Khaltee rahi teri judaayee kadam-der-kadam
Bhool na paaye har pal yaad karte rahe tujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe

Ab chahe kinaara mile ya mile majhdhaar mujhe
Tere saath kaisa bhee safar manjoor hain mujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
Tere nayno-ne yahi raah sujhayee hai mujhe

Ab tu he naiya tu he kheewaiya saajan mere
Tere bharose chhod aayi hu main apne dere
Jeevan mai nayee roshni dikh aayee hai mujhe
Tumhari chahat aaj phir kheech laaye hai mujhe


             ----koyal----
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2010, 12:23:07 PM »
Bahut badiya Koyal ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.great work.excellent.hats off
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riyaz106
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2010, 01:42:08 PM »
Wah wah Koyal ji badi achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Dil ki kaifiyat aur jazbaat ki ek kahani hai isme. Bahut sunder tareeqe se takhayyul ki tarjumaani ki hai. Nice creatioin. Ye lines khas taur par achhi lagi.

Ab tu he naiya tu he kheewaiya saajan mere
Tere bharose chhod aayi hu main apne dere
Jeevan mai nayee roshni dikh aayee hai mujhe
Tumhari chahat aaj phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2010, 01:57:23 PM »
Moved to appropriate section!

Thnx...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2010, 01:58:57 PM »
waah sweetu bahut hi badhiya likha hai...tooo gud..keep it up....

Vaade pe vaade karti hai ye hawaye mujhse,
har bar chupke se achank chhu jati mujhe,
kuch smjhne se pehle hi tumhare kareeeb..
tumhari chahat kheech lati hai mujhe.....
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2010, 02:08:36 PM »
Amazing , Waaah Waah Kya baat hai... Tumari Iss Nazm se pata chalta hai ki tum kitna acha likhti hun aur kitni jaldi seek rahi ho.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai..

Well Done Sweetheart !
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2010, 05:40:24 AM »
Bahut khoob Riyaz ji n Geet ji.lovely lines.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2010, 05:56:29 AM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Geet !
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2010, 06:28:58 AM »
Thanks a lot Madhu-di....you always encourage me.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: madhuwesh on February 12, 2010, 12:23:07 PM
Bahut badiya Koyal ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.great work.excellent.hats off
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2010, 07:18:44 AM »
Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya Aakaash-ji.....

Quote from: @kaash on February 12, 2010, 12:27:33 PM
bahut umda likha hai Koyal ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2010, 07:22:18 AM »
Tahe Dil se aapka Dhanaywaad Riyaz-bhai.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Aapne etne gaur aur gehrahee se padha aur samiksha ki..saraha
Mujhe aanand ki anubhuti hui....

Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai...... Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: riyaz106 on February 12, 2010, 01:42:08 PM
Wah wah Koyal ji badi achhi nazm likhi hai aapne. Dil ki kaifiyat aur jazbaat ki ek kahani hai isme. Bahut sunder tareeqe se takhayyul ki tarjumaani ki hai. Nice creatioin. Ye lines khas taur par achhi lagi.

Ab tu he naiya tu he kheewaiya saajan mere
Tere bharose chhod aayi hu main apne dere
Jeevan mai nayee roshni dikh aayee hai mujhe
Tumhari chahat aaj phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #11 on: February 13, 2010, 07:26:20 AM »
Geet-di bas aapke prohhatsaan se he likh leti hu....
Dhanaywaad...Aabhaar...Shukriya...sab keh deti hu... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Aapki lines bhi bahut achhi hai....Geet-di

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 12, 2010, 01:58:57 PM
waah sweetu bahut hi badhiya likha hai...tooo gud..keep it up....

Vaade pe vaade karti hai ye hawaye mujhse,
har bar chupke se achank chhu jati mujhe,
kuch smjhne se pehle hi tumhare kareeeb..
tumhari chahat kheech lati hai mujhe.....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2010, 08:03:22 AM »
Divya-di shabd kam pad rahe hai aapka aabhaar maanne ko....
its all because of your encouragement and teachings.....
You are my mentor...Thanks a lot di...... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Quote from: Sophi on February 12, 2010, 02:08:36 PM
Amazing , Waaah Waah Kya baat hai... Tumari Iss Nazm se pata chalta hai ki tum kitna acha likhti hun aur kitni jaldi seek rahi ho.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai..

Well Done Sweetheart !
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2010, 10:25:19 AM »
Bahut Khub Koyal Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause



Chahe Jo Saja Do Meri Khata Ki Mujko
Per Khata Kya Hai Zara Itna Bata Do Mujhko

Meine Tumhe Chaha Apni Jaan Se Bhi Badhkar
In Wafaoon Ke Siley Ki Aisi Wafa Do Mujhko

Bhulna Tumko Humare Liye Na Mumkin Hai
Jo Ho Sake To Sanam Tum Hi Bhula Do Mujhko

Maloom Hai Hume Ab Kabhi Baat Na Karogi Humse
Per Yu Khamosh Rahkar Aisi Saza Na Do Mujhko
 
Ab Agar Soch Hi Liya Hai Mujhse Dur Jane Ko
Mein Mar Hi Jaaon Koi Aisi Saza Do MujhKo
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #14 on: February 13, 2010, 11:46:48 AM »
Thanks Rishi-bhai.... nice support by you....good lines by you.. Applause Applause Applause

Khata na tou teri thi naa he meri thi
Kismat ka he khel main ise samjhi thi

Bhulana tujhko mumkin nahi tha mere liye  
Himmat na hari main chali aayi tere liye

Yu es tarah maayoos naa ho kasam tujhe
Teri chahat phir kheech layi hai mujhe



Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 13, 2010, 10:25:19 AM
Bahut Khub Koyal Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause



Chahe Jo Saja Do Meri Khata Ki Mujko
Per Khata Kya Hai Zara Itna Bata Do Mujhko

Meine Tumhe Chaha Apni Jaan Se Bhi Badhkar
In Wafaoon Ke Siley Ki Aisi Wafa Do Mujhko

Bhulna Tumko Humare Liye Na Mumkin Hai
Jo Ho Sake To Sanam Tum Hi Bhula Do Mujhko

Maloom Hai Hume Ab Kabhi Baat Na Karogi Humse
Per Yu Khamosh Rahkar Aisi Saza Na Do Mujhko
 
Ab Agar Soch Hi Liya Hai Mujhse Dur Jane Ko
Mein Mar Hi Jaaon Koi Aisi Saza Do MujhKo
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