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«Reply #15 on: February 13, 2010, 01:18:43 PM » |
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Thnx Koyal Ji Ek Choti C Koshish And Nice Creation By U  Khata Meri Thi Tabhi To Ye Saza Mili Humko
Humse Dur Jane Ki Koi Wajah To Mili Tumko
Mana Ki Hum Tumhare Kabil Na Tehre Sanam
Per Kya Mujhse Bhi Kabil Mila Kya Tumko
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«Reply #16 on: February 13, 2010, 04:55:27 PM » |
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ur welcme sweetu n thnx alot..keep writtng n keep improving... |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #17 on: February 14, 2010, 01:25:24 PM » |
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«Reply #18 on: February 14, 2010, 01:41:07 PM » |
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Kis mod pe ye zindagi le aayee hai mujhe
Chhod chale they jin rishto ko hum pechhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech layi hai mujhe
Darrti hu zamaana de-de na koi sazaa tujhe
Socha tha jee lenge tum bin hum O-sanam
Khaltee rahi teri judaayee kadam-der-kadam
Bhool na paaye har pal yaad karte rahe tujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
Ab chahe kinaara mile ya mile majhdhaar mujhe
Tere saath kaisa bhee safar manjoor hain mujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
Tere nayno-ne yahi raah sujhayee hai mujhe
Ab tu he naiya tu he kheewaiya saajan mere
Tere bharose chhod aayi hu main apne dere
Jeevan mai nayee roshni dikh aayee hai mujhe
Tumhari chahat aaj phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
----koyal----
Nice. seedhe dil main utar gai yeh line to. Nice again |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #19 on: February 14, 2010, 02:39:30 PM » |
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Thanks Vikash-bhai...... Nice. seedhe dil main utar gai yeh line to.
Nice again
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cara
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«Reply #20 on: February 15, 2010, 04:39:43 PM » |
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KYA BAAT HAI KOYAL JI......
TUMHARI CHAHAT PHIR KHEECH LATEE HAI MUJHE
BIN TERE RAHE NAHI SAKHTA KAISE BATAUN TUJHE
LAAKH KOSHISH KI BHUL JAAUN TUJHKO
IK PAL BHI TERI YAADEN CHODTI NAHI MUJHKO
KAISE SAMJHAUN TERE BIN JEENE KI TAMANNA NAHIN HAI MUJHE
KI HAR WAQAT TUMHARI CHAHAT PHIR KHEECH LAATEE HAI MUJHE..
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«Reply #21 on: February 15, 2010, 05:34:20 PM » |
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bahut khoob cara ji...
Jab bhi sochti hu ki bhul jau tujhe,
terri aahat hamesha tadpati hai mujhe,
chah k bhi nhi chhod paa rhi terre khayal ko..
tujhse milne terri chaht har bar kheech lati hai mujhe......
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #22 on: February 15, 2010, 06:41:56 PM » |
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Aaj phir kyu machal outhi hai tabiyat meri
Rok k bhi nahi rok pa rahi me yaadein teri
Jane kya kashish hai piya mohabbat mai teri
Kheechyi chali aaye hu main chahat mai teri
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #23 on: February 15, 2010, 07:15:14 PM » |
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very nice..
Tu chali aa saare bandhan todke,
main wada karti hu sath nibhaungi,
hum basayenge apna khuabo ka ashiyana..
jahan main tujhe kabhi na chhod k jaungi.....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2010, 06:41:00 AM » |
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Thanks Caraji.... Nice lines by you too....keep it up.... KYA BAAT HAI KOYAL JI......
TUMHARI CHAHAT PHIR KHEECH LATEE HAI MUJHE
BIN TERE RAHE NAHI SAKHTA KAISE BATAUN TUJHE
LAAKH KOSHISH KI BHUL JAAUN TUJHKO
IK PAL BHI TERI YAADEN CHODTI NAHI MUJHKO
KAISE SAMJHAUN TERE BIN JEENE KI TAMANNA NAHIN HAI MUJHE
KI HAR WAQAT TUMHARI CHAHAT PHIR KHEECH LAATEE HAI MUJHE..
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2010, 06:49:20 AM » |
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Kis mod pe ye zindagi le aayee hai mujhe
Chhod chale they jin rishto ko hum pechhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech layi hai mujhe
Darrti hu zamaana de-de na koi sazaa tujhe
Socha tha jee lenge tum bin hum O-sanam
Khaltee rahi teri judaayee kadam-der-kadam
Bhool na paaye har pal yaad karte rahe tujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
Ab chahe kinaara mile ya mile majhdhaar mujhe
Tere saath kaisa bhee safar manjoor hain mujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
Tere nayno-ne yahi raah sujhayee hai mujhe
Ab tu he naiya tu he kheewaiya saajan mere
Tere bharose chhod aayi hu main apne dere
Jeevan mai nayee roshni dikh aayee hai mujhe
Tumhari chahat aaj phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
----koyal----
Bahut khoob Koyal Ji |
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«Reply #26 on: February 16, 2010, 06:51:13 AM » |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #27 on: February 16, 2010, 07:06:49 AM » |
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Chali tou main aaun sab kucchh chhod k abhi didi
Par jab wo mere Jiju aayenge tab tera kya hoga di
Wo tou tujhe chhod k apni Sali se he batiyaayenge
Chhedenge tujhko,jaan-bujh kar tera jiya jalaayenge
very nice..
Tu chali aa saare bandhan todke,
main wada karti hu sath nibhaungi,
hum basayenge apna khuabo ka ashiyana..
jahan main tujhe kabhi na chhod k jaungi.....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #28 on: February 16, 2010, 07:11:52 AM » |
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Thanks a lot Rajeshji......  Bahut khoob Koyal Ji
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«Reply #29 on: February 16, 2010, 11:32:08 AM » |
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Chali tou main aaun sab kucchh chhod k abhi didi
Par jab wo mere Jiju aayenge tab tera kya hoga di
Wo tou tujhe chhod k apni Sali se he batiyaayenge
Chhedenge tujhko,jaan-bujh kar tera jiya jalaayenge
Jiya jalayenge merra vo per main nhi jalungi,
unke piche main unke bhai se baate karungi,
phir pata chalega mujhe chhidane ka anjaam..
jab unke saamne unhi k bhai ki taraf daari karungi...... |
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on eTI community..
