-----/// Tumhaari yaad bahut aayegi ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on December 17, 2012, 05:00:26 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 17, 2012, 05:49:51 PM »
Wah kya baat hai, very nice...
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«Reply #16 on: December 17, 2012, 06:17:00 PM »
hmmmmm I know ki aapne bahut din baad aisa likha hai aur bahut bahut khoob likha hai... aap ke lekhni me alag hi jaadu hai...  padh ke mujhse likhe binaa nahi rahaa jaataa... jaadugarni... Usual Smile thanks for the sweet reply...!!! uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuufffffffffffffffffff heheheheheehehe


mumkin nahi hai ki bich raah me saath chhod jaaunga main
tum to samajh jaaogi, par khud ko kaise samjhaaunga main

ye aur baat hai ki sambhal gayaa tha pichhli baar main
par ab tum nahi rahoge, to kaise sambhal paaunga main

maaloom hai ki kisi ke sapne sajaane hain mujhko, lekin
kisi aur ke sapne tum hi kaho, kaise tod paaungaa main

tutaa thaa dil meraa pehli baar to tumhaaraa sahaaraa thaa
ab apne sahaare se duur jaake kaise thahar paaunga main

jaanaa, rishtaa meraa tumse kuch is tarha se jud gaya hai
ki judaa ho ke tumse shayad bemaut hi mar jaaungaa main

sach kehtaa hoon, mumkin nahi mere liye tumse duur rehnaa
bin tumhaare toofaan me tinke ki tarhaa main udd jaaungaa

'Kasak' to aaj bhi is 'Hriday' me bas tumhaare liye hi hai
tumko naa paake, kaanch ki tarha tutke bikhar jaaungaa main


*****HRIDAY*****
NAHIN MANOGE NA TUM. cussing cussing..  are baba samjha karo kabhi to.... bar bar kaise reply dun main  Feared. Feared......... uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuffffffffffff .... jadugarni kehte ho mujhe aur khud hi jadu chalte ho love4... jaanbujh ke tum aise post karte ho k mujhe reply dena pade  notworthy........ par ab iske baad kuch kaha na to  DOH DOH BangHead BangHead

Tujhse bichhadne ke khyal se bhi darti hun
Par ye baat main khud se bhi nahin karti hun

Janti hun main ke mujhe tumse dur rehna hai
Dard ye judaai ka har pal haste hue sehna hai

Teri takat ki tarah mujhe teri rooh me basna hai
Ek lamha bhi tujhe kamzor ho tottne na dena hai

Kuch din ki hai bechani fir sab thik hi hona hai
Fir  to tumhe humsafar k pyaar me hi khona hai

KasaK ko to hamesha Hriday k dil me hi rehna hai
Bheegi hui palkon se ashqon ki tarah behna hai

Tere aankhon  me mujhe ashq banke na rehna hai
*KasaK* ko bas teri muskaan ban labon pe sajna hai..!!!


main naa tab manaa thaa na ab maanungaa.... aakhir pyaar kiyaa to darna kyaa? achcha ji mujhe bhi jaadugar keh rahe ho. koi baat nahiwahi sajhi.. haan meri koshish to shuru se hi aisi rahi hai ki aapse firse likhwaa sakun.. par kaamyaab nahi ho paayaa... aur aapko bhi to achchi tarha maaloom hai ki mere best poems aapke saath aur aapke liye hi likhe gaye hain.. to kyaa aap nahi chaahte ki main achcha likhun??? Jealosus.. heheheheheh. uuuuuufffff.. ab likh bhi lo jawaab mere is post kaa... aisi bhi kya naraazgi... heheheheeh.....



badi bholi ho tum, jo is tarhaa ki baat karte ho
dil pe chalaa ke khanjar khilkhilaane ki baat karte ho

kehti ho khud hi ki darte ho khayaal se bichhadne ke
khud hi mujhe tumse duur chale jaane ki baat karte ho

karti ho baatein senhe ki dard-e-judaai mujhse, aur
khud se alag karke mujhe meri khushi ki baat karte ho

basnaa chaahte ho meri rooh me meri saanson me tum, aur
chhinke sahaaraa mera, sambhal jaane ki baat karte ho

maaloom hai ye baat kuch dino ki hai aur bhool jaanaa hai
tum bhulaa paaogi? jo mujhe bhool jaane ki baat karte ho

agar 'Kasak' ko 'Hriday' ka ashq banke rehna hai to sahi
mujhe ro lene do, kyun mujhse muskuraane ki baat karte ho

rotaa rahunga zindagi bhar main agar tum aansu ho mere
chaahne do tumhe, kyun kisi gair ko chaahne ki baat karte ho



*****HRIDAY*****
tumse narazgi mumkin nahin ye tumko bhi pata hai  cussing cussing cussing.. and u know how to make me write  icon_scratch icon_scratch....... sach me bht hi bekaarr insaan ho tum  sad5 ... jis bat ko mana karo wahi karte ho  DOH.... koi nahin lo tum bhi apna jawab padh lo  happy3........ aur is bar tumhari poem ka reply diya hai zyada khush mat ho samjha....  Winking Winking Winking NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa

Haan tumse dur jane ki main baat karti hun
Gum me bhi muskurane ki main baat karti hun

Reh na paungi ek lamha bhi main ab to tum bhi
Fir bhi ruthhi zindagi ko manane ki baat karti hun

Ye rishta hamara hai ek khwaab aadha adhura sa
Main iss khwaab ko na pura karne ki baat karti hun

Samjho meri baat ko aur maan lo apno ka kaha
Main bhi to tumhari khushi ki hi baat karti hun

Mujh sang pyar karke kya haasil hona hai tumhe
Isiliye na main tumhari ruswaai ki baat karti hun

Hai gar pyaar sachcha tumhara aur yakeen bhi
Main tumhare pyaar ko aazmane ki baat karti hun

Chale jao mujhse dur aur sametlo uske pyaar ko
Main ek maa k ashqon ki duhaai ki baat karti hun

Hriday k ashqon se mil KasaK k ashq  behte hain
Apne is dard ko kisi tarah mitane ki baat karti hun

Mar chuki hun main iss jahan k liye ae yaar mere
Bas isiliye teri yaadon me jeene ki baat karti hun….!!!

Oh my god
Hriday jee aur kasak jee
itni khoobsurat nazm aap dono likhte ho ki padh ke maza aa jaata hai. indradhanushee rango se saji ye nazme, bas dekhte hi banta hai..koi kisi se kam nahee..
mai to chaahta hun ki in javaaboN ka silsila kabhee khatma hi na ho..bas padhte jaao,,padhte jaao..
bas aap dono likhte raho..
aapki kalam ka jaadu hamesha barqaraar rahe.
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«Reply #17 on: December 17, 2012, 06:58:09 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause lajawaab jawaab... hmmmm.... mannaa padegaa.. ab bhi wo baat hai aapke lekhni me... ek dum masssttt raapchik... uksaaaate jo jawaab likhwaane ke liye... emotional atyachaar?Huh?? tongue3... chalo koi baat nahi... maan li maine aapki baat.... ab do mere in sawaalon ke jawaab....  Winking NaNaNa Giggle DOH Feared. Usual Smile

maan letaa hoon main tumhaari baat , chalo thik hai
tumhaaraa dil todke ghar basaa letaa hoon, chalo thik hai

mitaa denaa har nishaani meri, saare khat jalaa denaa
naam tak meraa mitaa denaa har jagah se, chalo thik hai

par wo naam jo tumhaare dil pe likhaa huwaa hai
bolo use tum kaise mitaa paaoge?
jis chehre ko dekhne ke liye, intezaar karti ho
us chehre ko kaise bhulaa paaoge?

bhool jaaungaa main tumhaari har baat, chalo thik hai
bhulaa dungaa tumhaari har mulaquaat, chalo thik hai

tumse milne se pehlee bhi tanhaa thaa, koi baat nahi
ab bhi guzaar lungaa tanhaa har raat, chalo thik hai

par tumhaari saanse jo bas mere naam se chalti hai
unko tum bataao na ... kaise rok paaoge?
tumhaare ragon me lahu banke jo mohabbat behti hai
usko behne se tum kaise rok paaoge?

badi asaani se tumne keh diyaa ki main bhulaa dun tumko
bhulaa diyaa.....chalo thik hai

khaake kasam mere sar ki keh do bas ek baar
kyaa ek bhi lamhaa mujhse judaa ho ke reh paaoge?


*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #18 on: December 18, 2012, 07:29:11 AM »
uuuuuuuuuuuuuffffffffffff kp.................
ek try kiya hai ... dekho kaisa bana hai..... bht din baad aisa kuch likha... hope u like it


Samjahkar bhi tum nasamjh ban rahe ho
Apne dil ke hathon hi to tadap rahe ho
Maan jao baat ab bhi main jo kehti hu
Maanti hun main tere dil hi me rehti hun

Pyaar ke liye par ye bhi zaruri hai yaara
Kuch waqt ke liye apne pyaar se dur ho jana
Hai tumhe apna naya sansaar basana
Ek bar tum bas usme rach bas jaana

Rahungi main paas tumhare har pal
Bula lena mujhe jab chahe tum kal
Lekin abhi waqt hai mujhe jana hoga
Pehle tujhe apne apno ko manana hoga

Mujhse pehle jo aaye hain tumhari duniya me
Unke bhi to kuch sapne hain tumse
Chaha hai unhone tumhare liye koi unka apna
Bolo kaise chhin lun main unse unka ye sapna

Jao mere sapne… karo pure unke sapne
Sambhalo khudko bula rahe tumhe apne
Main hun tumhari aur ye dil bhi tumhara
Bula lena jab bikharne lago tum yaara….!!!






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«Reply #19 on: December 18, 2012, 07:33:17 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

bahut sunder kapil ji
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«Reply #20 on: December 18, 2012, 01:12:02 PM »
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«Reply #21 on: December 18, 2012, 01:40:15 PM »
waah hridhay ji
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«Reply #22 on: December 18, 2012, 02:12:11 PM »
bohat achi nasree nazm ,....boha c daad,.............
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«Reply #23 on: December 19, 2012, 03:27:52 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mishra ji.....!!!


bahot khoob
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«Reply #24 on: December 19, 2012, 11:00:09 PM »
Kya Baat...Kya Baat...Kya Baat..
Kamal ~Hriday~ Ji...
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«Reply #25 on: December 20, 2012, 06:19:21 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Parwaaz ji.....!!!

Kapil Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab.. ahsaasoN se sarabor khoob kalaam kahi
hai aapne... dil ke ahasaas ko achche lafz diye haiN..


humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Kasak jee aapka jawaab bhi bahut khoob raha... jis andaaz
meiN Kapil jee ne ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai usi andaaz meiN
aapne bhi khoob jawab diya hai.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #26 on: December 20, 2012, 06:20:05 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji.....!!!

hoti hai kuch majboori ki har kisi ko
har kisi ka saath nahi mil paataa lekin
ye bhi to zaruri nahi ki jise chaahen
us se itne duur chale jaayen ki
chaahne se bhi mil naa sake

ye baat sahi nahi hai tumhaari
chhod jaane kaa faislaa galat hai tumhaaraa
na milo mujhse, par paas to raho mere
ki chaahu jab bhi milna, main mil loon
kare mann mera baat karne ka to kar loon

bahut bahut accha likha hai..
laakh take ke sawaal uthaaye haiN..
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«Reply #27 on: December 20, 2012, 06:21:37 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

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kya baat hai hriday jee lajawab peshkash uspar kasak jee ka jawab sone par suhaaga. apki reply bhi bahut khoobsoorat  hai dheron daad qubool kare
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«Reply #28 on: December 21, 2012, 04:24:20 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Ritesh ji....!!!

Wah kya baat hai, very nice...
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«Reply #29 on: December 21, 2012, 04:25:50 PM »
Mukesh ji main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne is thread ko fir se visit kiyaa aur fir se padhaa ... bahut bahut shukriyaa ise waqt dene, padhne aur pasand karne ke liye....!!!

Oh my god
Hriday jee aur kasak jee
itni khoobsurat nazm aap dono likhte ho ki padh ke maza aa jaata hai. indradhanushee rango se saji ye nazme, bas dekhte hi banta hai..koi kisi se kam nahee..
mai to chaahta hun ki in javaaboN ka silsila kabhee khatma hi na ho..bas padhte jaao,,padhte jaao..
bas aap dono likhte raho..
aapki kalam ka jaadu hamesha barqaraar rahe.
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