Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....:Shayri-E-Dard

Pooja

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Khayalo ke angan main
Kab haqiqat tum ban jaate ho
Dekh kar mujhe door se
Kis andaz mai muskurate ho

Bheegte hai hum barsaat main
Sath humare bheege chale jaate ho
Tham kar hath humara
Sath sath chale atte ho

Khamoshi se hume apne gale lagate ho
Karti hai humari dhadkane baatein
Apne ussi andaz main tum
Dil ko dill ki baat sunate ho

Madhoshi mai hum jab kuch kahte hai
Sargoshio mai jawab tum de jaate ho
Thundi thundi in hawao mai
Ek garam chadar se ban jaate ho

Khulati hai jab bhi phir ankhia
Gayab tum phir se ho jaate ho
Reh jaata hai bas ek tera ahsaas
Barsaato mai bahoot tum mujhko rulate ho !!!!


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Roja

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2008, 01:59:02 AM »

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Khulati hai jab bhi phir ankhia
Gayab tum phir se ho jaate ho
Reh jaata hai bas ek tera ahsaas
Barsaato mai bahoot tum mujhko rulate ho !!!!

Bahut accha likha hai didi.


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_Vicky_

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2008, 12:35:48 PM »

Wah Kya Baat Hai POOJA JI.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. dil Ko Chhoo Jane wale
Ehasaas Pesh Kiye Hain aapne...!!! Great Work..!!


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mehhekkk

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2008, 01:07:12 PM »

bahut lajawab

barsaato mein yaadon ke badal ghir ghir aate hai
apne apne sang sang,tere pyar mein hame bhi rulate hai.


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Pooja

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2008, 04:05:21 PM »

thanks Rosa, Vicky and Mehekkk!!

her ek mosam teri yaad ka bahana hai
teri yaadon se hi is dil behlana hai
kabhi ro de kabhi hans de teri yaadon main
chalati zindagi ka bas yahi rah gaya afsana hai!!


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Shikha12

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2008, 01:16:40 PM »

Waah... bahut khoob likha hai Pooja di aapne...

Nice one.. Mehhekkk


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Pooja

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2008, 04:48:31 PM »

thanks shikha


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MAKMUS

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2008, 04:11:29 PM »

tht ws a cool shayri from yaa pojaa......
never ever had heard that ..............
tht one ws coolgal......
keep it up......


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faiiz_76

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2008, 07:09:13 PM »

nice work pooja ji..


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Pooja

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2008, 05:44:39 PM »

thanks Faiiz!!


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niraj_191

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2008, 06:05:05 PM »

are yar itna lamba mat likha karo ki padhne ka man na kare.
phir bhi tumne likha hai isliye padhna hi padega...

nice wording...

but mujhe ye poem thodi romentic jyada lagi..

phir bhi tumne ise dard section me rakhi hai to phir to dard ki
hi hogi.


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Pooja

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2008, 06:28:14 PM »

shukaria niraj apne yah padi...

Her ek najar hai apni
her ek ke apne ehsaas hai
dard mai jab yaad aa jaaye unka payar
to her taraf khumar hi khumar hai

haqiqat magar hai zalim
na jaane bich mai kyun aa jaati hai
Ehsaas hota hai jab kadvi suchai ka
wo dard ban, rula jaati hai.....

janati hu first three part mai khumar tha magar app jab 4th part pardege tab shayad dard ka ehassa samjh aa sake!! jo yah lines hai

Khulati hai jab bhi phir ankhia
Gayab tum phir se ho jaate ho
Reh jaata hai bas ek tera ahsaas
Barsaato mai bahoot tum mujhko rulate ho !!!!


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shaizy

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #12 on: February 08, 2008, 07:16:16 AM »

kya baat hai pooja loking great shayari...i like this,,,,,,,


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Pooja

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Re: Tumhara Ahsaas barsaato main....

«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2008, 05:21:41 PM »

Thanks shaizy


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