....~~Tumko bhi rona hoga~~....

by HumTum on April 06, 2005, 09:28:44 AM
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DostoN ...

maiN "HumTum" phir hazir huN aap sabke samaksh apne dil ke kuch khayalon ko liye... jo kahiN na kahiN dil-o-dimag pe chaye hue the .. ab ke halatoN ke roobroo.. kyunki har kisi ki life ab saaf nahi .. sab kisi na kisi mushkiloN ka saamna kar rahe hai.. Meri ik dost se parso net pe kuch baat hui  na jane kyuan uske kuch batoN ne mujh par gehra asar kiya hai .. ye kalaam maiN usi ke naam karta huN .. shayad use ise padh kar kuch apne dardoN se ladne ki prerna mile ... ki jee tabhi payegi jab jeena chahegi... ,,, bas yahi kuch likhna chahta tha aap sabke nazar kar raha huN ... umeed hai aapko pasand aayega ..ye khayal bhi ... aapke pyar ka talabgaar rahuNga ...



Ye muqaddar bhi kahan la ke khara kerta hai
Mere qatil pe mujhe jaan bhi dena hoga

Ek ana thi jise lahron se bachaane ke liye
Kya pata tha keh mujhe khud ko dubona hoga

Hum palangon pe unhen aaj bure lagte hain
Aankh to band karo khaak bichona hoga

Tum hanse ho mere choote se ghiraunde pe magar
Ye ghiraunda tere mahlon se bhi ooncha hoga

Waqt darkaar hai her cheez badal jaati hai
Aaj hum roye hain kal tumko bhi rona hoga


HumTum
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2005, 10:35:15 AM »
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Ye muqaddar bhi kahan la ke khara kerta hai
Mere qatil pe mujhe jaan bhi dena hoga

Ek ana thi jise lahron se bachaane ke liye
Kya pata tha keh mujhe khud ko dubona hoga

Hum palangon pe unhen aaj bure lagte hain
Aankh to band karo khaak bichona hoga

Tum hanse ho mere choote se ghiraunde pe magar
Ye ghiraunda tere mahlon se bhi ooncha hoga

Waqt darkaar hai her cheez badal jaati hai
Aaj hum roye hain kal tumko bhi rona hoga

"
Good one HumTum..

Ques....
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2005, 03:49:53 PM »
hmmmm yeh apki do lines mujhe samajh me nahin ayi, can u explain pls

"Hum palangon pe unhen aaj bure lagte hain
Aankh to band karo khaak bichona hoga "

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2005, 03:51:36 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
hmmmm yeh apki do lines mujhe samajh me nahin ayi, can you explain pls

"Hum palangon pe unhen aaj bure lagte hain
Aankh to band karo khaak bichona hoga "

 :D


palangon pe = sleeping on A BED
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nikki
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2005, 03:53:26 PM »
very nice Hum Tum....

mujhe bhi yeh lines samajh nahi ayi...jo Meena sis ne likhi hain....ho sake to explain kar do pls.....
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HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2005, 03:55:58 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
very nice Hum Tum....

mujhe bhi yeh lines samajh nahi ayi...jo Meena sis ne likhi hain....ho sake to explain kar do pls.....

oke the mean here is .. unko hamari yeh khusi rass nhi aa rhi ke hum bed ( plang) pe sotey hain, jab woh ankh band krengey to unke liye sirf khaak ka bistar hoga.

hope u understand sad5
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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2005, 03:58:24 PM »
thanx a lot ji......
abb samajh aa gaya.....bahut khoob........................
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2005, 03:59:44 PM »
acha ab samajh  aya sab kuch!!!!!!! kya baat hai really nicee!!!

dikhate hai sab door se rasta,
koi do kadam saath chalta nahin,
jalati hai duniya to jalte hai dil,
koi apni marzi se to jalta nahin!!! (NM)
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2005, 04:00:00 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
thanx a lot ji......
abb samajh aa gaya.....bahut khoob........................


Shukriya ji ... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2005, 05:14:12 PM »
wonderful work by everyone........... :D .......................... really superb humtum.
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2005, 07:16:00 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
wonderful work by everyone........... :D .......................... really superb humtum.


Shukriya Nidhi ji
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sanya310
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2005, 08:08:12 PM »
wahh nice everyone!!!

pyaar karke humein aise chhod diya
zindagi ka rukh aise mod diya
basa gaye apna pyaar dil mein hamare
aur usi dil ko ab aise tod diya!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2005, 09:01:57 PM »
very nice Sanya......

pyaar ka raasta kathin hai,
yeh chalne se pehle sochna tha.
dil tumne mujhse lagaya,pyaar karna tumne sikhaya
abb chal diye ho jo chor kar..
to kehte ho ki aisa karne se rokna tha.
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2005, 05:31:01 AM »
Well said Meena..

"
dikhate hai sab door se rasta,
koi do kadam saath chalta nahin,
jalati hai duniya to jalte hai dil,
koi apni marzi se to jalta nahin!!!
"

Kay baath hai.. Koi Apni Marzi se to Jalta Nahin.. Very Well..  Bohut Khoob...

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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2005, 10:41:47 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
acha ab samajh  aya sab kuch!!!!!!! kya baat hai really nicee!!!

dikhate hai sab door se rasta,
koi do kadam saath chalta nahin,
jalati hai duniya to jalte hai dil,
koi apni marzi se to jalta nahin!!! (NM)


thank u ji.
lekin koi baat nhi hai  

Jahaan se alag ho par khud se bhi juda ho kaise
Mere toote dil ko bar bar sada dete ho kyon aise

Yaqeen karna kahaan tha mumkin tere liye 'Meena'
Loot jate hain jo, hote hain bholay bhaalay chehre kucch aise



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