Tumse Bichad Ke Hum "Khwaish"

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Alwida kehte hue Jab Maine Uss Shaks Se Pucha Ke Koi Nishaani To Do...
Woh Muskuraate Hue Bole, "Daag-e-Judai Hi Kaafi Hai Agar Yaad kar Sako To"


Sirf Yaadon Mein Bas Ke Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum
Kya The Aur Kya Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Koi Pukaare Jab Naam Tera Hum Daude Chale Jaate Hai!!!
Kaheen Bhi Sukoon Naa Paa Sake Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Khaali Si Deewaro Ko Peharo Baithkar Dekhte Rahe..!!!!
Ek Dhoondli Si Tasvir Bankar Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Koi Puche Haal Apna To Keh Dete Hai "Haan, Theek Hai"
Ab kehte Hai 'Khaak' Theek Hai Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Uss Taraf Andhera Hi Andhera Hai, Jahan Roshni Hai
Ab Itna Hi Samaj Paaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Kaheen Se To Aajao Aur Gale Se Laga Lo Humein
Kaheen Mar Naa Jaaye Ab Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

         
            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2012, 12:12:46 PM »
Bahut khoob Khwaish ji
Applause Applause
Sabhi ash'aar behad khoob hai.
antim sher khoob bhaaya hamen.
Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2012, 12:16:01 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 28, 2012, 12:07:20 PM
Alwida kehte hue Jab Maine Uss Shaks Se Pucha Ke Koi Nishaani To Do...
Woh Muskuraate Hue Bole, "Daag-e-Judai Hi Kaafi Hai Agar Yaad kar Sako To"


Sirf Yaadon Mein Bas Ke Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum
Kya The Aur Kya Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Koi Pukaare Jab Naam Tera Hum Daude Chale Jaate Hai!!!
Kaheen Bhi Sukoon Naa Paa Sake Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Khaali Si Deewaro Ko Peharo Baithkar Dekhte Rahe..!!!!
Ek Dhoondli Si Tasvir Bankar Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Koi Puche Haal Apna To Keh Dete Hai "Haan, Theek Hai"
Ab kehte Hai 'Khaak' Theek Hai Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Uss Taraf Andhera Hi Andhera Hai, Jahan Roshni Hai
Ab Itna Hi Samaj Paaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Kaheen Se To Aajao Aur Gale Se Laga Lo Humein
Kaheen Mar Naa Jaaye Ab Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

         
            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~









bahut khoob.................!
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2012, 12:32:24 PM »
bahut bahut khoob khwaish ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2012, 12:50:18 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2012, 12:50:52 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2012, 12:55:18 PM »
waah lajawab khwaish....
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2012, 01:34:29 PM »
bahottt bahott khoob Khwaish ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 28, 2012, 02:22:18 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 28, 2012, 12:07:20 PM
Alwida kehte hue Jab Maine Uss Shaks Se Pucha Ke Koi Nishaani To Do...
Woh Muskuraate Hue Bole, "Daag-e-Judai Hi Kaafi Hai Agar Yaad kar Sako To"


Sirf Yaadon Mein Bas Ke Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum
Kya The Aur Kya Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Koi Pukaare Jab Naam Tera Hum Daude Chale Jaate Hai!!!
Kaheen Bhi Sukoon Naa Paa Sake Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Khaali Si Deewaro Ko Peharo Baithkar Dekhte Rahe..!!!!
Ek Dhoondli Si Tasvir Bankar Reh Gaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Koi Puche Haal Apna To Keh Dete Hai "Haan, Theek Hai"
Ab kehte Hai 'Khaak' Theek Hai Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Uss Taraf Andhera Hi Andhera Hai, Jahan Roshni Hai
Ab Itna Hi Samaj Paaye Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

Kaheen Se To Aajao Aur Gale Se Laga Lo Humein
Kaheen Mar Naa Jaaye Ab Tumse Bichad Ke Hum

         
            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~








Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Ab iss se jyada kya kahein iss kalaam ke liye hum
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«Reply #9 on: March 28, 2012, 03:23:58 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2012, 08:25:15 AM »
wow very nice.very good poem
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2012, 09:38:08 AM »
Quote from: mkv on March 28, 2012, 12:12:46 PM
Bahut khoob Khwaish ji
Applause Applause
Sabhi ash'aar behad khoob hai.
antim sher khoob bhaaya hamen.
Applause Applause

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mukeshji icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2012, 09:42:51 AM »
Wooooow.aapke poem toh hamesha dil ko chu jaati hai Khwaish ji.superb.hats off to you. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2012, 05:42:35 PM »
roshni mein bhi andhera.....sach..ye dard-e-judayi bhi jaanleva hi hai...
bahut khoob khwaish ji....aapne kha samet liya itna dard  sad7
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2012, 10:06:50 AM »
Khwaish Bhai Bahut bahut Khoooooob... Dard Bhari yeh aapki Nazm dil Loot Le gai.. Lafzon me dard Ko Bahut Khubsoorati se utaara hai aapne... Applause Applause

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