tumse koi shikayat nahin hai...

by Meena on December 10, 2004, 04:03:30 PM
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Meena
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mujhe tumse koi shikayat nahin hai aye dost,
mujhe gila hai zindagi se,
kyu woh anmol motti bhi cheen leti hai humse,
jo mitle hai badi mushkil se?
enth enth rakh kar pyar se banaya tha apna mahal,
kyu tood diya woh ek hawa ke ek chonke se?
himmat na hare te jab buj gaya tha diya pyar ka,
par kyu jalta nahin yeh doobara mere in ashkon se?
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KaMaL
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2004, 04:08:54 PM »
good one Meena ji.......
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2004, 04:10:15 PM »
na ashako se bana hai, na aaho se banega
jo dil toot gaya, wo na jeewan bhar jurega!!!!

Mana ki teri duniyan mai bandon ki kami nahi hai
per mai kaya karu, muje to tune dil bas ek hi diya hai!!!

mari nahi, marugi bhi nahi, per bas itani iltaza hai
akar rah mere sang, dekh har roj, tune mujko kaya jeewan diya hai!!!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2004, 04:51:12 PM »
thanx kamal ji!

wahhhhhhhhhhhh pooja! bohot acha likha! liked it!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2004, 08:18:32 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
na ashako se bana hai, na aaho se banega
jo dil toot gaya, wo na jeewan bhar jurega!!!!

Mana ki teri duniyan mai bandon ki kami nahi hai
per mai kaya karu, muje to tune dil bas ek hi diya hai!!!

mari nahi, marugi bhi nahi, per bas itani iltaza hai
akar rah mere sang, dekh har roj, tune mujko kaya jeewan diya hai!!!!!!


wah!!!! Excellent Meena...........Poojaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.. ...

Ye Ab Maloom Hua Hai Mujhe Ki Koi Bhi Manzar Mera Na Tha
Main Jis Mein Rah Rahaa Tha Vahi Ghar Meraa Na Thaa...............
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2004, 04:50:48 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhh waheed ji! and shukriya  Usual Smile
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2004, 08:14:06 AM »
It was cool written by all specially Meenaji...

Soch ko badlo sitare badal jaayenge,
Nazar ko badlo nazarien badal jaayenge,
Kashtiyaa badalne ki jaroorat nahi,
Dishaaon ko badlo kinare badal jayenge.
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2004, 05:20:03 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhh just ji bohot khub

thanx!  :D
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Suhas
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2004, 05:14:11 AM »
Wow... Bahoot Khoob, Meena ji n Pooja ji.  Usual Smile  Usual Smile

Where are you, Pooja ji??  We are missing your shayaris and comments!! Come back yaar.... sad5
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2004, 06:42:58 AM »
welcome back suhas........:lol:

ur welcome meena.............   :lol:
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2004, 03:39:19 PM »
very nice meena g and pooja ji! Usual Smile !

i wud like 2 support Suhas.We r really missing ur stuffs as they are reducing.So,b here daily for us!
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2005, 01:44:50 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
mujhe tumse koi shikayat nahin hai aye dost,
mujhe gila hai zindagi se,
kyu woh anmol motti bhi cheen leti hai humse,
jo mitle hai badi mushkil se?
enth enth rakh kar pyar se banaya tha apna mahal,
kyu tood diya woh ek hawa ke ek chonke se?
himmat na hare te jab buj gaya tha diya pyar ka,
par kyu jalta nahin yeh doobara mere in ashkon se?


Wah Meena ji.... sari ki sari rachna bhut hi sunder hai... Aur aap ki is kalam ko ped ker Zindgi per kuch likhne ja rha hun. umeed hai Aap ko pasand aaye..

zindagii kii raunaq ko yuuN sajaanaa padataa hai
dard sahanaa padataa hai Gam chhupaanaa padataa hai

dil kii har tamannaa ko umr bhar ke armaaN ko
masalehat ke chauKhaT par bhuul jaanaa padataa hai


kis liye tumhein 'HumTum' justajuu-e-tuufaaN hai
ishq mein to saahil pe Duub jaanaa padataa hai...

HumTum
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pandit
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«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2005, 02:36:14 PM »
wah hum tum ji.....kya baat hai..........really nice,..
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HumTum
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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2005, 02:58:05 PM »
Quote from: "pandit"
wah hum tum ji.....kya baat hai..........really nice,..



ohh... Shukriya Pandit ji Shukriya....
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«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2005, 03:01:00 PM »
dewaangi kya hoti hai jaana hai humne abhi-abhi,
q ki is k pehle zuda nahi huye the hum kabhi,
dard e judai ab sah rahe hai hum,
ab to ye khuda hi hai jis k sahare jee rahe hhai hum.
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