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kya khoya maine hai kya khoya usne hai kya paayaa maine hai kya paayaa usne hai toota dil kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai
kal wo meri khaas thi main bhi uska khaas tha kal wo mere paas thi main bhi uske paas tha aaj rishte kuch aur hai kuch mera kuch uska hai dil jo aaj tuta hai mera hai ya uska hai
kaanch ka tha dil mera usne jisko toda hai saath reh ke kuch pal usne hi muh moda hai aaj sooni baahen hain tanha har ek rasta hai jaane kya aaj mehenga hai par pyaar bahut sasta hai toota dil kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai
bheed me bhi tanha hoon saath uska chhoota hai jaane kya wajah hui jo yaar mera rootha hai kasme kuch jo tuti hain vaade kuch jo tute hain dhundne chalaa hoon main kya mera kya uska hai toota dil ye kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai.....
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2012, 07:52:57 PM » |
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bahot bahot khoob Hriday sahab kamaal ki nazm hai daad daad daaad
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2012, 07:54:26 PM » |
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kya khoya maine hai kya khoya usne hai kya paayaa maine hai kya paayaa usne hai toota dil kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai
kal wo meri khaas thi main bhi uska khaas tha kal wo mere paas thi main bhi uske paas tha aaj rishte kuch aur hai kuch mera kuch uska hai dil jo aaj tuta hai mera hai ya uska hai
kaanch ka tha dil mera usne jisko toda hai saath reh ke kuch pal usne hi muh moda hai aaj sooni baahen hain tanha har ek rasta hai jaane kya aaj mehenga hai par pyaar bahut sasta hai toota dil kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai
bheed me bhi tanha hoon saath uska chhoota hai jaane kya wajah hui jo yaar mera rootha hai kasme kuch jo tuti hain vaade kuch jo tute hain dhundne chalaa hoon main kya mera kya uska hai toota dil ye kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai.....
BAHUT KHUBSURAT NAZM LIKHI HAI HRIDAY VERIIIIII NAAAAAICE
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2012, 01:16:20 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2012, 03:37:29 AM » |
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bahut khoob Hriday ji dheon daad aur ek rau qubool karen
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2012, 06:10:24 AM » |
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Nice.Worth a Rau.
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2012, 08:57:21 AM » |
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nyc effort....
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2012, 10:16:02 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2012, 11:41:28 AM » |
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kya khoya maine hai kya khoya usne hai kya paayaa maine hai kya paayaa usne hai toota dil kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai
kal wo meri khaas thi main bhi uska khaas tha kal wo mere paas thi main bhi uske paas tha aaj rishte kuch aur hai kuch mera kuch uska hai dil jo aaj tuta hai mera hai ya uska hai
kaanch ka tha dil mera usne jisko toda hai saath reh ke kuch pal usne hi muh moda hai aaj sooni baahen hain tanha har ek rasta hai jaane kya aaj mehenga hai par pyaar bahut sasta hai toota dil kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai
bheed me bhi tanha hoon saath uska chhoota hai jaane kya wajah hui jo yaar mera rootha hai kasme kuch jo tuti hain vaade kuch jo tute hain dhundne chalaa hoon main kya mera kya uska hai toota dil ye kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai.....
Bahut Bahut Khoob!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2012, 04:53:58 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2012, 06:38:59 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sarfira ji....!!! bahot bahot khoob Hriday sahab kamaal ki nazm hai daad daad daaad
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Mashhur Shayar
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2012, 03:23:24 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa K_A ji....!!! BAHUT KHUBSURAT NAZM LIKHI HAI HRIDAY VERIIIIII NAAAAAICE
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2012, 04:00:33 PM » |
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Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much Ripan ji for your sweeet comments....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 30, 2012, 04:03:12 PM » |
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kya khoya maine hai kya khoya usne hai kya paayaa maine hai kya paayaa usne hai toota dil kiska hai mera hai ya uska hai
wooow toching lines... bahut khoob.
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