tutay huay dil k tutay huay khuab

by sidushale on July 30, 2008, 05:29:35 AM
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tutay huay dil k tutay huay khuab
kismat ki jhoti lakiron mein dobay huay hath

honto pe rukti hai dil ki wo har bat
senay mein wo uthta dard chubhta hai bar bar

uski yad akay rulati hai har rat
is andheri zindagi mein shayad kabhi na milsake ga uska sath!!!
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2008, 05:36:36 AM »
tutay huay dil k tutay huay khuab
kismat ki jhoti lakiron mein dobay huay hath

these r nice lines sid
keep writing
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sidushale
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2008, 05:52:50 AM »
thank U
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Muhammed
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2008, 11:43:50 AM »
one by one Nice lines...sidu ji..yuhin likhte rahiye
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2008, 02:21:03 PM »
First two lines are really amazing.
too good.
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2008, 02:44:52 PM »
Very good work Sidushale ji.. Applause
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sidushale
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2008, 06:37:10 PM »
thx guys mujhe bht acha laga k apko meri yeh shayari bht achi lagi kaffi hurt hui v thi ustime  tab likhi thi
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