Tute Sapne

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Din rehta nahi sambhal ke
Raat aa gayi halke halke

Aankhon se aansu chalke
Jab yaad aaye sapne kal ke

Naseeb so gaya karvat badal ke
Aur ek jeevan khatm hua jal ke..!
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2016, 07:29:41 AM »
Din rehta nahi sambhal ke
Raat aa gayi halke halke

Aankhon se aansu chalke
Jab yaad aaye sapne kal ke

Naseeb so gaya karvat badal ke
Aur ek jeevan khatm hua jal ke..!



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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2016, 10:46:44 AM »
Nice
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«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2016, 01:55:08 PM »
Thank you.
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«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2016, 02:02:27 PM »
Bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2016, 11:34:01 PM »
bahut bahut khoob, dheron daad.
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2016, 07:34:58 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2016, 05:26:08 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut achchaa likhaa hai...!!!
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