Udaas Eid

by mazHur on September 15, 2009, 12:56:02 AM
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Udaas Eid
by mazHur

EID AA KAR GUZAR GAYEE AISEY
KOI GUZREY JAHAN SEY JAISEY

ZINDAGI TOE GUZAR HEE JAATI HEY
EID KO BHI GUZAAR LO WAISEY

CHAAND KA MOONH CHOOM HEE LAITA
GAR ULAJHTA NA ABR PANCHI SEY !

DER SEY EIDI LAINE AAYE HO
KHATM HUEE EID KHATM HUAY PAISEY
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2009, 02:20:27 AM »
Quote from: mazHur on September 15, 2009, 12:56:02 AM


Udaas Eid
by mazHur

EID AA KAR GUZAR GAYEE AISEY
KOI GUZREY JAHAN SEY JAISEY

ZINDAGI TOE GUZAR HEE JAATI HEY
EID KO BHI GUZAAR LO WAISEY

CHAAND KA MOONH CHOOM HEE LAITA
GAR ULAJHTA NA ABR PANCHI SEY !

DER SEY EIDI LAINE AAYE HO
KHATM HUEE EID KHATM HUAY PAISEY

bahut khoob. Yeh shayari aapne bahut accha likha.
But dil ne yahi dua ki k EID aaye aur sab ka tamanna poori ho jaye  love9
Kabhi dil udas na ho...
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2009, 12:50:54 PM »
Quote from: mazHur on September 15, 2009, 12:56:02 AM


Udaas Eid
by mazHur

EID AA KAR GUZAR GAYEE AISEY
KOI GUZREY JAHAN SEY JAISEY

ZINDAGI TOE GUZAR HEE JAATI HEY
EID KO BHI GUZAAR LO WAISEY

CHAAND KA MOONH CHOOM HEE LAITA
GAR ULAJHTA NA ABR PANCHI SEY !

DER SEY EIDI LAINE AAYE HO
KHATM HUEE EID KHATM HUAY PAISEY

Bohot Khoob Mazhur Ji..last line padh ke thodi si hansi aayi ! Keep writing.
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