Udaas Na Raha Karo....

by Aryaan on April 15, 2006, 04:14:22 AM
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Pooja
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«Reply #15 on: April 17, 2006, 02:56:28 PM »
wah Jsheen ji bahoot khoob!!! KAMAL KA LIKH RAHE HAI AJKAL APP!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #16 on: April 18, 2006, 02:39:15 AM »
Bohat khoob Jaanasheen...
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nikki
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«Reply #17 on: April 19, 2006, 09:32:01 AM »
too gud Jaanasheen ji...here is my reply Aryaan ji..

jise padhne se gum ubhar aate hain
jiske panno par harf nahi mere dil ke chale nazar aate hain
jisko likha gaya hai mere khoon ki siyahi se
jise rakha gaya hai kisi dard-e-dil mein
aisi kitaab hun main...mera dard be-itihaa hai
kabhi na mitne wala daag hun main...

tum to suraj ho kal ke
jo auron ko roshan karta hai.. khud badlon se nikal ke
auron ka dard batane wale...tum udaas na raha karo
hai agar koi baat dil mein hum gareebon se kaha karo
maana gum dor to na kar payenge hum tumhara..
magar de to sakte hain hum tumhein apne kandhe ka sahara
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«Reply #18 on: April 19, 2006, 10:25:46 AM »
Shukriya Pooja Ji Nikki Ji And Aryaan Bhai,..
Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Nikki Ji Apne To,..


Koun Pardta hai Kisi ke Zindagi Ke Kitaabon Ko,..
Jab Ke Unke Hi Panne Ghamon Se Bheege Hote Hain,..
Sab Apne Apne Panno Aur Lafzon Ko Bachaane Mein Rehte Hain,..
Aur Jab Saare Panne Khatam Hojaaye To Mout ke Beestar Mein Sote Hain,..
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«Reply #19 on: April 19, 2006, 11:16:56 AM »
thanx n too gud Jaanasheen ji....
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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2006, 11:36:08 AM »
Ur Welcome Nikki Ji,..


Meri Zindagi Ki Kitaab Ko Koi Ghamon Ki Sihaai Se Likh Gaya,..
Jisne Bhi Isko Pardhna Chaha Iske Dard Dekhkar Thak Gaya,..
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«Reply #21 on: April 19, 2006, 01:57:45 PM »
bahut khoob ji ....

yeh maana teri kitaab ke har panne par tere dil ka lahoo hai
magar meri taraf bhi dekh likhne wale ne...har akshar mein meri maut likhi hai
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«Reply #22 on: April 19, 2006, 02:23:37 PM »
bahut khoob!!!!
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Wihite Fairy
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«Reply #23 on: April 19, 2006, 02:30:52 PM »
dil dukha ke wo bole uddas na raha karo
usdin haath thama tha ke rahenge hum sada
bewafai de ke bole aaj uddas na raha karo
gum he gum hai, kya mohabbet kya wafa
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Aryaan
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«Reply #24 on: April 21, 2006, 01:44:09 AM »
Bohat khoob Jaanasheen, Nikki & Wihite Fairy ...
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«Reply #25 on: April 21, 2006, 05:33:11 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"


good good Aryaan as usual......keep it up.....kamal ka likha hai

sab na achaa likha waise!!!!
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«Reply #26 on: April 22, 2006, 02:06:54 PM »
bahot  khoob......White  Fairy...... Nikki...........Jansheen
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nikki
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«Reply #27 on: April 23, 2006, 05:39:31 PM »
thanx everyone...

kitaab-e-zindagi ke panne palte to pata chala
panne fatne lage hain
jo kabhi hasaya karte the gairon ko
abb to khud dukh ke saagar mein dhasne lage hain
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Aryaan
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«Reply #28 on: April 24, 2006, 01:25:45 AM »
Thanks a lot Isha...

Good One Nikki...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #29 on: April 24, 2006, 01:36:25 AM »

Harr Ek Shab Meri Taaza Azaab Mein Guzri
Tumhare Baad Tumhare Hi Khwaab Mein Guzri
Main Ek Phool Hoon Woh Mujh Ko Rakh Ke Bhool Gaya
Tamaam Umr Ussi Ki Kitaab Mein Guzri...






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