Udaas:Shayri-E-Dard

~princess~

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Mere dil ko behlao k mein bohot udaas hu aj
akar koi nayi baat sunao mein bohot udas hu aj
yaad ayegi ab ispar teri to jaan lewa hogi humdam
Raat mere paas hi baitho k bohot udaas hu aaj

Najane kyu phir yeh Tanhai dasne lagi tadpane lagi
Waje isse poocho aur mujhko batlao k bohot udaas hu aaj
Mere dil ko aajaab si baatein khayalon mein ayi thi
k chaht k mausam mein tanhai ki suagat meine payi thi
mujhe kuch is tarah chaho k yeh bhuljaun
sirf mujhe dekho mujhse baat karo k bohot udaas hu aaj

Waqt bewaqt hume satate ho aap hum maana kiya karte hai
par ab kuch Khoob chaht jatao k bohot udaas hu aaj
Meri tareef karo,taare tod k lao k bohot udaas hu aaj
Sajdo mein duao mein hume mango k bohot udaas hu aaj
Suna hai prem nagar main khushiyan hi khushiyan hain
mujhe yaqeen dilao k bohat udas hu aaj

~Roshni~


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Roja

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Re: Udaas

«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2007, 02:40:54 PM »

Quote from: "~princess~"

Hi Roshni..

Welcome to Yo India.
Nice 1 but Kya ye aapka likha hua poem hai?
if not plz mention NOT MINE[/color]


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~princess~

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Udaas

«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2007, 04:14:52 PM »

Thanks a lot Roja but y should i mention not mine if this poem is written by me!? Huh?


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palkhi

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Udaas

«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2007, 05:32:58 PM »

.....Roja ji yeh Meri Mom ki Original poem hai!

Shes a fantastic writer......so sumtimes it might seem as if someone else has written it but it is actually hers!!!


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~princess~

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Udaas

«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2007, 09:03:30 PM »

Quote from: "palkhi"

.....Roja ji yeh Meri Mom ki Original poem hai!

Shes a fantastic writer......so sumtimes it might seem as if someone else has written it but it is actually hers!!!

:lol: :lol: haye mera bacha...thxx a lot my baby...mwah........


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Roja

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Udaas

«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2007, 02:42:23 AM »

Quote from: "~princess~"

Thanks a lot Roja but y should i mention not mine if this poem is written by me!? Huh?

What to say Princess... no need to say NM if it is your creation...
I read this in some forum hence asked...
Now i would say k lajawab likha hai aapne Princess.....
Keep flowing... =D> [/color]


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Roja

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Udaas

«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2007, 02:44:48 AM »

Quote from: "palkhi"

.....Roja ji yeh Meri Mom ki Original poem hai!

Shes a fantastic writer......so sumtimes it might seem as if someone else has written it but it is actually hers!!!

Palkhi.. Aapka mummy ka hai to b yahi kahungi k poem
bahut khoob likha hai unhone. Shayad Princess aapki
maa ho... Jinka bi hai dear... bahut khoob really very good.[/color]


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Rajbir

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Udaas

«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2007, 07:44:10 AM »

Roshu

Behtareen kalam likha hai gudiya =D> =D> =D>

It is so nice to see u writing back here :D

Roja

Roshni (pyar se main Roshu bulata hoon) is a very old Yoindia member.
She writes excellent.
You will see lots of good poetry from her.
All her work is original. :D

Palkhi....he he he...iske baare mein sirf itna kahoonga. :D:P


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Udaas

«Reply #8 on: September 25, 2007, 09:30:37 AM »

bahut ache roshni


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«Reply #9 on: September 25, 2007, 09:51:25 AM »

thxxxxxx roja

Palki ki baat ka bura nahi manna...she loves me alot and cant bear anything against me...yes this creation is my own and just like my big daddy(rajbir bhaya) said mein yo ki bohot purani member hu...

thxxxxxxxxxxxx re sam......!


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Udaas

«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2007, 09:56:32 AM »

welcome back roshni


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~princess~

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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2007, 09:57:36 AM »

Yeh wali big daddy ko bohot pasand hai....!

Mehfil mein phir apna tamasha bana rahi thi zindagi....
roshniyo ko chod kar andero mein lamhe bita rahi thi zindagi

Kitni thokre khayi isne...kitne zakhm sahe hain
Apni hi mohobbat ka ab janaza utha rahi thi zindagi

Suna tha k logon ko kuch waqt bad dard sehne ki adat hojati hai
dekho aaj apne hi haal pe mushkura rahi thi zindagi

Gham k badal se ghiri hui kuch sehmi si dari hui
sab kuch har kar bhi kis ada se umeed jaga rahi thi zindagi

sab par aitbaar karti gayi sab luta thi gayi
ankhon mein ansun liye khaali haath ab dikha rahi thi zindagi

Uski surat dekh kar maan ghabrane lagta hai
rooh bhi kanp uthi k,apni luti zindagi ki dastan suna rahi thi zindagi

Mohobbat kisise beinteha karti thi khabi wo bhi aye dost
Ab is dil ko gawane ki saza utha rahi thi Zindagi

Mehfil mein phir apna tamasha bana rahi thi zindagi....
roshniyo ko chod kar andero mein lamhe bita rahi thi zindagi

~Roshni~


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Udaas

«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2007, 10:03:21 AM »

wah... bahut badhya hai roshni


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~princess~

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Udaas

«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2007, 10:07:06 AM »

thxxxxxx sam.............aur batao kaise ho.......aap bhi kuch likhdete to khushi hoti!


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Udaas

«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2007, 10:11:17 AM »

Roshu

Wah ! wah ! wah ! =D> =D> =D>

Hugggssss

Mazaa aa gaya !

Welcome back with a bang :D


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