udaas

by jindagi on March 11, 2005, 01:10:50 AM
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jindagi
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ae haasil-e-khaloos batla main kya jawab dun
duniya ye poochti hai ki main kyon udaas hun
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2005, 01:17:48 AM »
TERI UDAASI KYUN HAI JINDGI KUCH TU BTLAOO
YUN SAD SAD SAD LIKH K HUM KO TU NA RULAO
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dhadkan
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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2005, 05:00:25 AM »
Wah Jindagi aur Faree dono ne khoob kaha...

Ab aap ko kya bataye ki hamara  kya hai gham,
Hum akele hi jhel rahe hain kya ye hai kam...
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thycreator
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2005, 05:25:15 AM »
Quote from: "jindagi"
ae haasil-e-khaloos batla main kya jawab dun
duniya ye poochti hai ki main kyon udaas hun


Wah jindagi....well said!
Ayi jindagi tere har mod pe ye udasi kyu hai,
Tu mujhko ji rahi hai ya mai tujhko jiya karu...
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sandhaya
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2005, 05:33:41 AM »
zindagi udas hai na jane kyun aaj meri
maine tuh bachana chaha tha kisiko
lekin koi bhi na baat samaja meri
sabne mujhe hi galat thehraya kyun
koi tuh bataye ki aakhir kya thi galati meri
kya kissiki jaan bachane ke liye usse baat karna
ye insaniyat dikhana hi hai kya galati meri
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dhadkan
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2005, 05:36:37 AM »
Bhaut khoob sandhya..
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thycreator
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2005, 05:46:27 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
zindagi udas hai na jane kyun aaj meri
maine tuh bachana chaha tha kisiko
lekin koi bhi na baat samaja meri
sabne mujhe hi galat thehraya kyun
koi tuh bataye ki aakhir kya thi galati meri
kya kissiki jaan bachane ke liye usse baat karna
ye insaniyat dikhana hi hai kya galati meri


hmmm sandhaya ji,
Insaniyat ke naam pe jo kuch tumne gawaya hai,
Uska gam na karo aye dost jo tumne lutaya hai,
Kuch jajbat aise hai jo sabke samajh mein nahi aate,
Par insaan bane jo toh jahan ne sir bhi jhukaya hai..
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sandhaya
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«Reply #7 on: March 11, 2005, 06:53:50 AM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
zindagi udas hai na jane kyun aaj meri
maine tuh bachana chaha tha kisiko
lekin koi bhi na baat samaja meri
sabne mujhe hi galat thehraya kyun
koi tuh bataye ki aakhir kya thi galati meri
kya kissiki jaan bachane ke liye usse baat karna
ye insaniyat dikhana hi hai kya galati meri


hmmm sandhaya ji,
Insaniyat ke naam pe jo kuch tumne gawaya hai,
Uska gam na karo aye dost jo tumne lutaya hai,
Kuch jajbat aise hai jo sabke samajh mein nahi aate,
Par insaan bane jo toh jahan ne sir bhi jhukaya hai..


thank u creator ji
nice reply.............

insaniyat ke naam pe vo bhi gavaya hai
uska gum na chahte hue bhi ho raha hai
kyunki jiske liye kiya hai ye sab kuch
vo bhi tuh mujhe na samaj paya hai
mahobat ki nahi aur bewafa ban gai hun main
kaise batau ki maine kitna dukh uthaya hai
maine tuh jaan bachi hai uski lekin
uske ghar walon ko lagta hai ki sayad
maine hi use iss mukaam tak pahunchaya hai
kya karun main, maine tuh bas insaaniyat kar farz nibaya hai
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2005, 06:12:28 AM »
very nice sandhya, dhadkan, amit and faree! Usual Smile

keep it up. lol, amit
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2005, 06:13:01 AM »
oh! sorry,

nice one jindagi too! :-p
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thycreator
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2005, 06:24:14 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
Quote from: "thycreator"
Quote from: "sandhaya"
zindagi udas hai na jane kyun aaj meri
maine tuh bachana chaha tha kisiko
lekin koi bhi na baat samaja meri
sabne mujhe hi galat thehraya kyun
koi tuh bataye ki aakhir kya thi galati meri
kya kissiki jaan bachane ke liye usse baat karna
ye insaniyat dikhana hi hai kya galati meri


hmmm sandhaya ji,
Insaniyat ke naam pe jo kuch tumne gawaya hai,
Uska gam na karo aye dost jo tumne lutaya hai,
Kuch jajbat aise hai jo sabke samajh mein nahi aate,
Par insaan bane jo toh jahan ne sir bhi jhukaya hai..


thank you creator ji
nice reply.............

insaniyat ke naam pe vo bhi gavaya hai
uska gum na chahte hue bhi ho raha hai
kyunki jiske liye kiya hai ye sab kuch
vo bhi tuh mujhe na samaj paya hai
mahobat ki nahi aur bewafa ban gai hun main
kaise batau ki maine kitna dukh uthaya hai
maine tuh jaan bachi hai uski lekin
uske ghar walon ko lagta hai ki sayad
maine hi use iss mukaam tak pahunchaya hai
kya karun main, maine tuh bas insaaniyat kar farz nibaya hai
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Nino
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«Reply #11 on: March 12, 2005, 10:19:56 AM »
Kuch to gham hoga koi to baat hogi
Gham ka din kitna hi lamba kiyu na ho
mager kabhi to is gham ki raat hogi

Phir se sawera hoga phir se suraj niklega
gham ka to pata nahi per kabhi to khushi se mulakaat hogi
Maussi se Zindagi nahi chalti na hi mohabat

Unki bewaafi mein bhi to koi baat hogi
tab manga tha saath tere to inkar kiya tune
kiya aaj meri qaber ke liye tere paas do muthi khaak hogi
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2005, 11:11:25 PM »
THANX DHADKAN&, AMIT


QABAR MEIN TU JAB UTARA GYA MUJHKO
WOH IS HAAL MEIN DEKHNE AYA MUJH KO

JISE MEIN NEY CHAHA SARI ZINDGI APNA
WOH IZ MOD PE MILNE AYA MUJH KO
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sandhaya
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«Reply #13 on: March 15, 2005, 09:08:17 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
very nice sandhya, dhadkan, amit and faree! Usual Smile

keep it up. lol, amit


thank u myheart for appericiating me
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sandhaya
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«Reply #14 on: March 15, 2005, 09:12:06 AM »
Quote from: "dhadkan"
Bhaut khoob sandhya..


thanx dhadkan
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