~~"UDAASI KA PEHRA"~~

by k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
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Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…


Shally.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2009, 09:22:48 AM »
Bohat khoob Shally bohat achcha likha hain tumne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley main bhi is thread me zarur kuch likhuga jab waqt milega.
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2009, 09:29:18 AM »
wonderful creation shally
bohut acha likha hai
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salma786
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2009, 10:08:20 AM »
Very nice shally Thumbs UP
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2009, 10:16:23 AM »
Koi wada nahi koi rishta nahi koi naata nahi
Phir q tera har zakhm muje bhi GHAYEL karta hain

-SG-
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k.shael
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2009, 10:19:28 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 25, 2009, 09:22:48 AM
Bohat khoob Shally bohat achcha likha hain tumne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley main bhi is thread me zarur kuch likhuga jab waqt milega.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sajid,

Aapne hamare kalam ko saraha bahut badi baat hai.

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2009, 10:20:22 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on February 25, 2009, 09:29:18 AM
wonderful creation shally
bohut acha likha hai


Shukriya Kaushik dear,

Aacha laga aapko apne thread me dekhkar,

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2009, 10:21:07 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on February 25, 2009, 10:08:20 AM
Very nice shally Thumbs UP

Shukriya Salma Dear,

Aacha laga aapko apne thread me dekhkar,

Shally.
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ANAAM
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2009, 10:22:18 AM »
good lines Shallyji.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Koi tou aysi baat kho na
K udaasi ka kohra chhate
Pighle wo dard ka lava
Beh nikle wo sailab jo
Aakhon mai thehra sa lagta hai


 
Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…


Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2009, 10:23:24 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 25, 2009, 10:16:23 AM
Koi wada nahi koi rishta nahi koi naata nahi
Phir q tera har zakhm muje bhi GHAYEL karta hain

-SG-

Ho chahat agar tere dil me mere dard dekhne ki,
Aaine pe jara jorr se ek pathar faikhna...

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2009, 10:26:51 AM »
Quote from: ANAAM on February 25, 2009, 10:22:18 AM
good lines Shallyji.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Koi tou aysi baat kho na
K udaasi ka kohra chhate
Pighle wo dard ka lava
Beh nikle wo sailab jo
Aakhon mai thehra sa lagta hai


 
Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…


Shally.






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Shukriya Anaam Ji,

Aur aapne bhi aacha likha hai,

Kaise karo zahir khud ki pareshaniyoon ko,
Aab batane ke kabil kuch na raha,

Wo to 2 pal ki khushiyaan thi Dost,
Aab gammo ke siwa paas kuch na raha../
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2009, 11:51:48 AM »
Waah waah Shally, Kya Khoob Yaar, Bohat Bohat Achche, Nice One Yunhi Likho,.

And Nice Lines Sajid Bhaiya, And Anaam Ji,.
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«Reply #12 on: February 25, 2009, 04:12:01 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…


Shally.


Hamesha Ki Tarah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2009, 08:50:05 AM »
very nice lines shally...good..keep writing dear...
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2009, 09:01:32 AM »
 Applause Applause

Waah waah shally bohat khoob dear ..

Bohat khoob sajid ji

Bohat khoob anaam ji...
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