~~"UDAASI KA PEHRA"~~

by k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #15 on: February 26, 2009, 12:31:49 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 10:23:24 AM
Ho chahat agar tere dil me mere dard dekhne ki,
Aaine pe jara jorr se ek pathar faikhna...

Shally.

Chahet to hain chum lu labo ko tere
Par darta hu tu phool hain aur main khiza hu

-SG-
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k.shael
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«Reply #16 on: February 27, 2009, 06:06:49 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 26, 2009, 12:31:49 PM
Chahet to hain chum lu labo ko tere
Par darta hu tu phool hain aur main khiza hu

-SG-


Galti se bhi kabhi mere kareeb na aana,
Meri Mayoosiyaan kahiin tumhe bhi loot na le.

Shally.
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«Reply #17 on: February 27, 2009, 08:28:54 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…


Shally.

bahoot khoob likha hai shally har sher anmol dharo-ar ki tarah surakshit rakhne jaisa hai....magar last line me aakhiri me sehra ki jagah sahara hona chahiye tha aisa lagata hai
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k.shael
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«Reply #18 on: February 27, 2009, 10:12:08 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 25, 2009, 11:51:48 AM
Waah waah Shally, Kya Khoob Yaar, Bohat Bohat Achche, Nice One Yunhi Likho,.

And Nice Lines Sajid Bhaiya, And Anaam Ji,.


Shukriya Azeem,

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #19 on: February 27, 2009, 10:14:34 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on February 25, 2009, 04:12:01 PM
Hamesha Ki Tarah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally.. Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: fairy2633 on February 26, 2009, 08:50:05 AM
very nice lines shally...good..keep writing dear...
Quote from: honeyrose on February 26, 2009, 09:01:32 AM
Applause Applause

Waah waah shally bohat khoob dear ..

Bohat khoob sajid ji

Bohat khoob anaam ji...


Shukriya Khwaish Ji,

Shukriya Honey Didi,

Shukriya Fairy,

Shally.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #20 on: February 27, 2009, 12:09:01 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 27, 2009, 06:06:49 AM

Galti se bhi kabhi mere kareeb na aana,
Meri Mayoosiyaan kahiin tumhe bhi loot na le.

Shally.

Jo tu nafrat de mujhe koi shikwa nahi karta hu
Na ho jaye tu shamil meri badnasibi me, teri mohabbat se darta hu

-SG-
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: February 27, 2009, 12:10:37 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…


Shally.


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot hi khoobsurat creation hai Shally, dil ke andar tak utar jaata hai....!! Bohot khoob dear...yunhi likhte rehna  icon_thumleft




Khizaan ka manzar utre, baharaon ki dhoop khil jaaye,
Ae Khuda har ghumzada dil ko jeene ki wajah mil jaaye
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k.shael
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«Reply #22 on: February 28, 2009, 05:44:09 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 27, 2009, 12:09:01 PM
Jo tu nafrat de mujhe koi shikwa nahi karta hu
Na ho jaye tu shamil meri badnasibi me, teri mohabbat se darta hu

-SG-


Mere dosto ke naamo me ek naam tera bhi shumaar hai,
Aur maloom hai tujhe ye teri badnasibi ka saboot hai.
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k.shael
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«Reply #23 on: February 28, 2009, 05:47:17 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 27, 2009, 12:10:37 PM
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Bohot hi khoobsurat creation hai Shally, dil ke andar tak utar jaata hai....!! Bohot khoob dear...yunhi likhte rehna  icon_thumleft




Khizaan ka manzar utre, baharaon ki dhoop khil jaaye,
Ae Khuda har ghumzada dil ko jeene ki wajah mil jaaye





Bahut Bahut Shukriya Celmira dear,

Mere kaam ko sarahne ke liye...

Bata kaise har dil ko jeene ki wajah mil jaaye,
Kaise koi toot ke phir se sambhal jaaye...

Shally.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #24 on: February 28, 2009, 09:02:13 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 28, 2009, 05:44:09 AM

Mere dosto ke naamo me ek naam tera bhi shumaar hai,
Aur maloom hai tujhe ye teri badnasibi ka saboot hai.

Khush_nasibi samjhu bad_nasibi samjhu main jane kya samjhu
Muje bas hain itna maloom main tujhe apna samjhu
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k.shael
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«Reply #25 on: February 28, 2009, 09:10:20 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on February 28, 2009, 07:46:51 AM
Bohat Khoob Likha Hai Sael Ji Aapne....
Keep It Up...

Shukriya Shihab Ji,

Aacha lagta agar aap kuch likhte to,

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #26 on: February 28, 2009, 09:13:20 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 28, 2009, 09:02:13 AM
Khush_nasibi samjhu bad_nasibi samjhu main jane kya samjhu
Muje bas hain itna maloom main tujhe apna samjhu

Tu use apna keh raha hai jiska koi kabhi hua hi nahi,
Nasamjhi hai teri agar tu pathar se mohabbat ki umeed karta hai,
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #27 on: March 02, 2009, 07:00:30 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…


Shally.


wah, excellent piece of poetry shally, bahut badiya

jasbir singh
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Muhammed
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«Reply #28 on: March 02, 2009, 07:14:50 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 09:20:58 AM
Dard se mera rishta bahut gehra lagta hai,
Meri har khushi pe udaasi ka pehra lagta hai,

Dil ne to baha diye khoon ke aansoo,
Par aakhon me aab bhi ek sailaab thehra sa lagta hai,

Har kisi ki fitrat ko pehchaana nazroon ne,
Ek khud ka hi ajnabi sa chehra lagta hai,

Doobne ke darr se na utre log jahaan,
Hame uss majhdhaar me hi sehra lagta hai…


Shally.


Waah shally dear...shayri e dard mein to Tum ik se badhkar ik kalam likhti ho..aaj kaafi dino baad yo.pe aaya aur first tera hi kalaam padha maine..jee shally bahot hi khoob aur pahele se kafi kaafi best...!!!
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k.shael
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«Reply #29 on: March 02, 2009, 08:06:56 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on March 01, 2009, 07:18:25 AM
Ji Jarur Koshish Karte Hai

Ik Ajnabi Se Dard Ko Seenye Mein Chhupaye Rakha Hai
Jane Kitne Armano Ko Aansuon Mein Doobaye Rakha Hai.

Sehar Ki Rangeeniyon Se Bhala Mujhe Kya Kaam Shihab
Humko Veerane Aur Veerano Ko Humne Sajaye Rakha Hai




Wah Bahut khoob janab,

4 lines me hi dil ka haal bata diya,

Kya bataye kisi ko kisne hame fakeer bana rakha,
Dil aur jaan lekar hame gareeb bana rakha hai,

Wo to pehle hi the kayi malkiyatoon ke malik,
Aab hamri jageer ne bhi unhe sartaaz bana rakha hai,

Shally.
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