~.. Udaasi:Shayri-E-Dard

janumanu

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maiN jahaN jauN saath jaati hai
tujhse achi to ye udaasi hai

dikhne mai to bahut zara si hai
badi gahri magar udaasi hai

wo tamanna na wo tamannavar
ab udaasi hai bas udaasi hai

ek main hi nahi hua maa se
saath mere huee udaasi hai

umr bhar saath kaun deta hai
bas ganeemat samjh udaasi hai

paani mai sheeshe sa bikharta hun
doondh paye bas ik udaasi hai

raakhi bandhbaaunga main raakhi main
bhayee huN maiN bahan udaasi hai

ye gahzal hai ya zindgi hai meri
matle se makte tak udaasi hai

mujshe bole tu fikr kyun karta
koe ho ya na ho udaasi hai


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Re: ~.. Udaasi

«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2012, 12:29:19 PM »

waah waaaahh waaah wwaaahh
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daad dena chahunga Applause


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Re: ~.. Udaasi

«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2012, 02:58:13 PM »

nice composition


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2012, 04:20:02 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE Applause


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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2012, 04:30:40 PM »

Ye ghajal hai ya jindgee hai meri
matle se maqte tak udaasi hai .....vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
kya baat hai..
Bahut umda Janumanu jee
aate rahiye... Applause

dekhne vo lagee hai ye sunkar
meri aankho me kyun udaasi hai


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Re: ~.. Udaasi

«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2012, 03:43:09 AM »

bahut khub janumanuji


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Re: ~.. Udaasi

«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2012, 03:46:54 PM »

bahut bahut khoob...!!!


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janumanu

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Re: ~.. Udaasi

«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2012, 02:55:00 PM »

Quote from: roy on July 17, 2012, 12:29:19 PM

waah waaaahh waaah wwaaahh
Applause

daad dena chahunga Applause

Aur ,,,
HUm lena chahenge Usual Smile


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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2012, 04:55:58 PM »

Quote from: janumanu on July 17, 2012, 11:46:38 AM

waah janumanu ji bohat khoob or oomda andaz ebyan hai
sach kaha matle se maqte tak udasi hai iss ghazal mein....khoob
bohat c daad......


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janumanu

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Re: ~.. Udaasi

«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2013, 06:17:48 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 19, 2012, 03:46:54 PM

bahut bahut khoob...!!!

shukriyaa ji.....................


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