Udas aankhe sawal pooch rahee thhi

by nandbahu on October 29, 2012, 12:36:41 AM
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Usko aaj safed saree mein dekha
Achambhit huye bina na reh saka

Najar milte hi ussne mujhe dekha
Main hairan sa usske sath chal para

Kuchh door yun hi dono chalte rahe
Maun rehke bahut kuchh kehte rahe

Chuppi torte huye vo swayam boli
Intejar tumhara bahut kiya boli

Mata pita ki majboori dekh na saki
Tum laute na, issliye kissi aur ki holi

Sab bhoole ke usske sath khush thhi
Jeevan mein mere khushiya bhar dee thhi

Sapno ke naye mahal hum bana rahe thhe
Ek dooje ke sath bare hi khush thhe

Par sal bhar bad hi vo shaheed ho gaya
Apnee nishani mere aanchal mein de gaya

Aaj bete mein hi uski chhavi dekhti hoon
Bas usske hi sapno ko pura kar rahi hoon

Main ussko jate bas mayus dekhta raha
Kuchh bol pane ka sahas na kar paya

Aaj vo mera chaain ura le gayee thhi
Udas aankhe sawal pooch rahee thhi

Aaj bhi main tanha tanha sa hoon
Bojh dil mein liye jee raha hoon

  

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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2012, 01:24:46 AM »
Nand ji Aaj to aap ki gazal ka har shabd shabnam kay motiyu sa chamak raha hai.Mubarik
sheel didi
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2012, 02:47:56 AM »
thanx sheel didi
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2012, 03:57:27 AM »
wah wah wah nandbahu ji kya qalaam pesh kiya bda dard hai in shabdo mein aur dil par to bojh rahega hee............lajawab creation.....

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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2012, 03:59:55 AM »
behatreen laajawaab peshkash dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2012, 05:43:27 AM »
Usko aaj safed saree mein dekha
Achambhit huye bina na reh saka

Najar milte hi ussne mujhe dekha
Main hairan sa usske sath chal para

Kuchh door yun hi dono chalte rahe
Maun rehke bahut kuchh kehte rahe

Chuppi torte huye vo swayam boli
Intejar tumhara bahut kiya boli

Mata pita ki majboori dekh na saki
Tum laute na, issliye kissi aur ki holi

Sab bhoole ke usske sath khush thhi
Jeevan mein mere khushiya bhar dee thhi

Sapno ke naye mahal hum bana rahe thhe
Ek dooje ke sath bare hi khush thhe

Par sal bhar bad hi vo shaheed ho gaya
Apnee nishani mere aanchal mein de gaya

Aaj bete mein hi uski chhavi dekhti hoon
Bas usske hi sapno ko pura kar rahi hoon

Main ussko jate bas mayus dekhta raha
Kuchh bol pane ka sahas na kar paya

Aaj vo mera chaain ura le gayee thhi
Udas aankhe sawal pooch rahee thhi

Aaj bhi main tanha tanha sa hoon
Bojh dil mein liye jee raha hoon

 


very nicce nandji
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2012, 08:03:54 AM »
Bahut Khub Nand Ji Bahut HI Dard Bhari Kalam Kahi Hai Bahut Hi Khub Ehsasoon Se Bhari Hui. Behtreen Peshkash
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2012, 10:16:09 AM »
thanx saudagar ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2012, 10:16:32 AM »
Dhanyavad saini ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2012, 10:16:59 AM »
thanx azad ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2012, 10:17:24 AM »
dhanyavad sanjeev ji
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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2012, 02:00:33 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2012, 02:10:35 PM »
bohat khoob dard ko alfaz ka roop dia aap ne nand ji........bohat c daad..
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«Reply #13 on: October 29, 2012, 08:00:31 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: October 30, 2012, 01:04:10 AM »
shukriya aqsh ji
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