udas dil

by mohd rafey on May 01, 2013, 10:27:42 PM
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Udas dil hai,udas raten
udas subahen,udas shamen
na koi hamdam ,na koi janam
Bas ham hain tanha, tumhari yaden
bhatak rahe hain ,sambhal rahe hain
tumhari yadon main chal rahe hain
kabhi to aao, ki mere lmhe
tumhari sa`at main dhal rahe hain
main dub jane ki aarzu main
Tumhari yadon ke hi bhanwar main
har ik lamha ubhar raha hun
tum ake dekho ,tum ake samjho
main dheere dheere yun mar raha hun
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2013, 10:33:08 PM »
wah bahut umda
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2013, 10:48:40 PM »
khoob ,..........
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2013, 12:17:27 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2013, 01:29:15 AM »
Udas dil hai,udas raten
udas subahen,udas shamen
na koi hamdam ,na koi janam
Bas ham hain tanha, tumhari yaden
bhatak rahe hain ,sambhal rahe hain
tumhari yadon main chal rahe hain
kabhi to aao, ki mere lmhe
tumhari sa`at main dhal rahe hain
main dub jane ki aarzu main
Tumhari yadon ke hi bhanwar main
har ik lamha ubhar raha hun
tum ake dekho ,tum ake samjho
main dheere dheere yun mar raha hun
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2013, 02:50:31 AM »
Rafey Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH waaH waaH janab waaH kia kahne behad umdaa aur behad khoobsurat geet kaha hai aapne, badi achchi tarannum rahi bade hi umda khayaal ... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur dilfareb geet par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise umda geetoN aur nazmoN ke saath aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2013, 07:32:13 PM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. dheron daad...
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2013, 12:29:23 AM »
Udas dil hai,udas raten
udas subahen,udas shamen
na koi hamdam ,na koi janam
Bas ham hain tanha, tumhari yaden
bhatak rahe hain ,sambhal rahe hain
tumhari yadon main chal rahe hain
kabhi to aao, ki mere lmhe
tumhari sa`at main dhal rahe hain
main dub jane ki aarzu main
Tumhari yadon ke hi bhanwar main
har ik lamha ubhar raha hun
tum ake dekho ,tum ake samjho
main dheere dheere yun mar raha hun

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aaina
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2013, 05:23:52 AM »
bhut khoob


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mohd rafey
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2013, 07:34:12 PM »
shukriya hazraat is nazm ko pasand karne ke liye
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