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«Reply #45 on: July 29, 2006, 02:32:27 PM » |
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bahut khoob ji.....
hamare is pyaar ko dil mein sambhale rakhhana har ek lamahe per bas naam hamara hi likhana aayegi ek din toh milane ki rut hamaari bhi bas isi umeed se hamara rasata tum yun hi takana BAHUT KHUB........
TERI YAADEIN HI TO JEENE KA SAHAARA HAIN, WARNA INTEZAR SE THAK GAYA HU MAIN.......
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ranjana
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«Reply #46 on: July 29, 2006, 05:34:56 PM » |
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very nice ....gumnam ji...
woh apni jhoothi baato se hame behala raeh hain hum hain ki har baat per yakeen kiye ja rahe hain hai nahi unse hame kabhi wafa ki koi umeed fir bhi ek pyaar ka deep dil mein hum jala raeh hain
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gumnam
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«Reply #47 on: August 02, 2006, 02:02:26 PM » |
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very nice ....gumnam ji...
woh apni jhoothi baato se hame behala raeh hain hum hain ki har baat per yakeen kiye ja rahe hain hai nahi unse hame kabhi wafa ki koi umeed fir bhi ek pyaar ka deep dil mein hum jala raeh hain shukriya...
pichhle baras tha khauf tujhe kho na du kahi, ab ke baras ye dua hai tera saamana na ho...
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ranjana
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«Reply #48 on: August 03, 2006, 03:29:21 AM » |
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its wonderful bahut khoob..
hua jab saamana unse toh hamne apna bacha hua chein bhi gawaa diyaa unse mile jakham ban chuke they naasur,ab mil ke unse unko fir se hara kar liya...
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«Reply #49 on: August 08, 2006, 02:14:49 PM » |
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its wonderful bahut khoob..
hua jab saamana unse toh hamne apna bacha hua chein bhi gawaa diyaa unse mile jakham ban chuke they naasur,ab mil ke unse unko fir se hara kar liya... BAHUT KHUB RANJANA JI...
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«Reply #50 on: August 08, 2006, 04:05:16 PM » |
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its wonderful bahut khoob..
hua jab saamana unse toh hamne apna bacha hua chein bhi gawaa diyaa unse mile jakham ban chuke they naasur,ab mil ke unse unko fir se hara kar liya... Baha deti AShQ mere Zakhmo par...... Toh yeh aaj Nasoor toh na kehlaate...... Pad jata Dil ko Chain mere...... Aaj bebas hum yoon Dard me toh na karhaate.....!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #51 on: August 10, 2006, 04:05:26 AM » |
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badh jaata hai keh dene se mere dil ke dard aur aaj chalo chup reh ke har baat ki jaaye
aa jaayega tere dil ko bhi qarar aise aaj chalo yun hi bina baat ke hansa jaaye !!!!!
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«Reply #52 on: August 10, 2006, 07:06:16 AM » |
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bohot achhe sab log.......
ab kaisa dil aur kaisa qaraar hum to bina dil ke he jeene lage hain
ye kaisi hai pyas iss zindagi ki hum apne he aansu bhi peene lage hain
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ranjana
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«Reply #53 on: August 10, 2006, 09:21:10 AM » |
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peeoge jo apne hi aansu toh yeh zeher ban jaayenge yeh dard ke khawab raato ko aa kar tumhe jagayenge
is dil ke tadapa ko koi ab bhula ke jeeye kaise is dard ke sehara mein sab gum yun hi ashq ban ke beh jaayenge
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«Reply #54 on: August 10, 2006, 09:39:18 AM » |
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khoi khoi udas si hai meri jindagi ki raat dard ki chadar oad ke yaad karti hun teru har baat tum bin na jeeti hun na marti hun main hontho per rahti hai mere bas har pal tumse milne ki fariyaad bahut udas si hai meri jindagi ki raat
rooth gaye mere apne , tut gaye sab mere sapne tumhi se toh thee meri jindagi mein bahaar tum they toh thaa mujhe apni jindagi se pyar sajte they tumhi se mere solah singhaar ab toh yaad aati hai bas teri har baat bahut udas si hai meri jindagi ki raat
ab toh apni chhayaa se bhi darti hun main tumhi batao apne tanhaiyo se kaise ladu main le gaye tum saath apen meri har baat bahut udas tanha si hai meri jindagi ki raat just amazing words Ranjana jee......... nice work everyone........
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«Reply #55 on: August 10, 2006, 05:45:07 PM » |
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shukriya Waheed ji ..............
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«Reply #56 on: August 12, 2006, 10:30:52 AM » |
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in orjari hovi basteyo mein ghumya din bhar tujh ko dundany ka liya is thra tasawar ne ghumya din bhar
pao mein thay chalaay ankho mein jungno ke chamak ik lamha bhi aaraam na aaya mujhe din bhar
weeraan bayabaan main,kabhi ujrray gharon main phirta raha lay kar tera saaya mujhe din bhar
deti rahi chaandni shab bhar mujhe aawaaz sooraj ne bhi reh reh k bulaaya mujhe din bhar
har simt bhare sheher thay kiya jaaniye phir bhi tanhaaii k ehsaas ne khaaya mujhe din bhar
lehje main ghani chhaaon k,paton ki zubaan main payrroon ne tera haal sunaaya mujhe din bhar
ik pal main hi batlaa gaiin dam torrti kirnen safeer Wo raz tere ankho ne baatay din bhar
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ranjana
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«Reply #57 on: August 12, 2006, 02:37:47 PM » |
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bahut khoob safi .........too good .......
din beete duniya ke jahmalo mein yeh tanaha raat ab kaise kate
koi toh hoga sapna salona jis ki baat se aaj ki raat kate
hai har baar adhuri si sanam koi toh sunaao afsaana ki raat kate
shaam ke dahlate hi aankho mein chhaa jaati hai udasi fir se suraj aane ki baat doharaao ki raat kate !!!!!
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«Reply #58 on: August 12, 2006, 05:11:03 PM » |
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Wah Ranju and Safi ji......
Ruko jara ek lamha theher jao...... Main Maut se thodi aur der ki Maholat le leta hoon......
Agar aaogi tum toh kaho...... Main Marte hue bhi haathon me kuch Gulaab le leta hoon......
Jee leta hu aur kuch pal...... Saansein Talab hai toh Dhadkan udhaaar le leta hoon......
Tum Ruko jara main Khuda se thoda WaQt Udhaar le leta hoon.....
Hai Hawa bhi ruki ruki...... Aur ghata bhi ab barasne lagi hai.......
Aane do Aandhi...... Yeh Badnaam Shayar ki Dillagi hai......
Pukar lo Naam mera....... Main Hazrat walon se Naam udhaar le leta hoon.......
Tum kaho Sanam....... Main haath main Chaar Gulaab le leta hoon.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #59 on: August 13, 2006, 02:07:48 AM » |
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bahut khoob ....gaurav......
ek dard sa jo dil ke ander hai woh dard sabko nahi milta
karte hain apni talash hum khud mein hi magar koi nishaan apana bhi nahi milta
yeh kaffila dil ka kahi toh ruke ab ki ba is jahaan mein mera dil nahi lagta
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