*Udas Nahi*

by Roja on August 06, 2008, 02:58:04 PM
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Hawa bhi shaad hai fiza ka dil udas nahi
Chaman ke phoolon pe gadraya madhumas nahi

Batau kisko aise main mijaaj mausam ka,
Batati tumko magar tum bhi mere pass nahi

Tamaam umr guzari hai maine tumhare bina
Hay zindagi ko tere pyar ka kayaas nahi

Batakte kadmon ko kahi toh milegi manzil
Rukenge paav wohi per jahan tu pass nahi

Yeh achanak kisee ne mujhe pukara kyu,
Kisii ko meri zarurat ki koyi aas nahi

Majaar chand ki taaron ke kafan main lipti
Mere badan pe aasmano ka libas nahi

Dil-o-dimak pe taari hai tere pyar ki kasak
Tanha jawani meri hoti kabhi udas nahi
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syednaami
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2008, 04:12:00 PM »
Zah-e-naseeb itna dard kya wajah hai. -
Baakamaal aur inkisaari ke saath likha hai. Bahut man ko bhaya. -

'Zabardast. -
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2008, 04:12:36 PM »
wah bahoot khoob Roja!!
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2008, 04:55:28 PM »
Bohot achha likha roja ji..
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k.shael
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2008, 05:50:45 AM »
 Applause BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA,
ROZA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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baadal102
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2008, 06:46:36 AM »
 Applause Applause
wah roja ji kya baat hai






Baadal
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2008, 07:39:51 AM »


Hawa bhi shaad hai fiza ka dil udas nahi
Chaman ke phoolon pe gadraya madhumas nahi

Batau kisko aise main mijaaj mausam ka,
Batati tumko magar tum bhi mere pass nahi

Tamaam umr guzari hai maine tumhare bina
Hay zindagi ko tere pyar ka kayaas nahi

Batakte kadmon ko kahi toh milegi manzil
Rukenge paav wohi per jahan tu pass nahi

Yeh achanak kisee ne mujhe pukara kyu,
Kisii ko meri zarurat ki koyi aas nahi

Majaar chand ki taaron ke kafan main lipti
Mere badan pe aasmano ka libas nahi

Dil-o-dimak pe taari hai tere pyar ki kasak
Tanha jawani meri hoti kabhi udas nahi

..

Applause Applause khoob likha hai Roja aapne..
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2008, 07:47:12 AM »
bahoot behtreen...likha roja... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2008, 07:49:52 AM »


Hawa bhi shaad hai fiza ka dil udas nahi
Chaman ke phoolon pe gadraya madhumas nahi

Batau kisko aise main mijaaj mausam ka,
Batati tumko magar tum bhi mere pass nahi

Tamaam umr guzari hai maine tumhare bina
Hay zindagi ko tere pyar ka kayaas nahi

Batakte kadmon ko kahi toh milegi manzil
Rukenge paav wohi per jahan tu pass nahi

Yeh achanak kisee ne mujhe pukara kyu,
Kisii ko meri zarurat ki koyi aas nahi

Majaar chand ki taaron ke kafan main lipti
Mere badan pe aasmano ka libas nahi

Dil-o-dimak pe taari hai tere pyar ki kasak
Tanha jawani meri hoti kabhi udas nahi



bohut khoob roja ji

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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2008, 04:28:31 PM »
chal rahi is zindagi main,
her pal khushi ka intzaar kiya
jab bhi mila, mila gum he,
uddasio ne mujh main he ghar kiya!!

chorr de Pooja, tammana kisi bhi khushi ki
kyun her baar yah dil taar taar kiya
jeene walo jee lo apni zindagi mujhko rond kar
chalo kisi ne to khushi ka ahsaas kiya!!
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Kanta
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2008, 06:54:19 PM »
dard ka shyari he roja, toda difficult shabd he par mere ku samjh aya, kesa likhte hen
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Kanta
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2008, 08:39:20 PM »
aj toda likhne ka try marti hu roja.

udas hu aj mere pas tu nahi
udas hu aj tumhara rishta nahi
muje chod gaye samander mein
lahren hen per tat koe nahi
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2008, 08:43:44 PM »


Hawa bhi shaad hai fiza ka dil udas nahi
Chaman ke phoolon pe gadraya madhumas nahi

Batau kisko aise main mijaaj mausam ka,
Batati tumko magar tum bhi mere pass nahi

Tamaam umr guzari hai maine tumhare bina
Hay zindagi ko tere pyar ka kayaas nahi

Batakte kadmon ko kahi toh milegi manzil
Rukenge paav wohi per jahan tu pass nahi

Yeh achanak kisee ne mujhe pukara kyu,
Kisii ko meri zarurat ki koyi aas nahi

Majaar chand ki taaron ke kafan main lipti
Mere badan pe aasmano ka libas nahi

Dil-o-dimak pe taari hai tere pyar ki kasak
Tanha jawani meri hoti kabhi udas nahi


Beautiful Roja Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2008, 08:44:28 PM »
Good One Pooja.........Nice one Kanta, Keep it up !!
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Kanta
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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2008, 08:46:16 PM »
thanks mein abi sikh rahi just trying celmira.
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