*Udas Nahi* -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

syednaami

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«Reply #15 on: August 09, 2008, 11:35:06 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2008, 04:28:31 PM

chal rahi is zindagi main,
her pal khushi ka intzaar kiya
jab bhi mila, mila gum he,
uddasio ne mujh main he ghar kiya!!

chorr de Pooja, tammana kisi bhi khushi ki
kyun her baar yah dil taar taar kiya
jeene walo jee lo apni zindagi mujhko rond kar
chalo kisi ne to khushi ka ahsaas kiya!!

Good thought Pooja jee. icon_thumleft

Quote from: Kanta on August 08, 2008, 08:39:20 PM

aj toda likhne ka try marti hu roja.

udas hu aj mere pas tu nahi
udas hu aj tumhara rishta nahi
muje chod gaye samander mein
lahren hen per tat koe nahi

Amazing Kanta jee, keep writing, good work. - Clapping Smiley


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Kanta

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #16 on: August 09, 2008, 03:18:53 PM »

acha laga kiya abi mein likhugi jesa samjugi


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Roja

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #17 on: August 10, 2008, 02:12:01 PM »

Bahut bahut shukhriya aap sab ka Syed ji, K.Shael sis, Sayyid ji, Sanjeev ji, Dear talat, and Kanta. Aap sab ko hamara likha pasand kiya and it means lot to me....Keep coming.


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Roja

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #18 on: August 10, 2008, 02:17:41 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 07, 2008, 04:28:31 PM

Second para dil ko chu gaya hai.. Bahut accha likha hai aapne Pooja di


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Roja

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #19 on: August 10, 2008, 02:19:42 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on August 07, 2008, 06:46:36 AM

wah roja ji kya baat hai

Baadal

Thank you Baadal ji.


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Roja

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #20 on: August 10, 2008, 02:22:23 PM »

Quote from: Kanta on August 08, 2008, 08:39:20 PM

aj toda likhne ka try marti hu roja.

udas hu aj mere pas tu nahi
udas hu aj tumhara rishta nahi
muje chod gaye samander mein
lahren hen per tat koe nahi

Bahut accha try mara hai aapne Kanta behen... Yu hi likhte rehna.


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Kanta

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #21 on: August 10, 2008, 07:21:45 PM »

thanks roja mein or bhi likhugi

udas mera jeevan amavas
tum bin na bane sahas
mein judi nahi abi tak
tuti hui hu ek chahat


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honeyrose

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #22 on: August 10, 2008, 07:27:13 PM »

Quote from: Kanta on August 10, 2008, 07:21:45 PM

udas mera jeevan amavas
tum bin na bane sahas
mein judi nahi abi tak
tuti hui hu ek chahat

nice lines kanta sis..


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syednaami

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #23 on: August 11, 2008, 03:07:12 AM »

Quote from: Kanta on August 10, 2008, 07:21:45 PM

thanks roja mein or bhi likhugi

udas mera jeevan amavas
tum bin na bane sahas
mein judi nahi abi tak
tuti hui hu ek chahat

Well done, keep it up Miss Kanta, you are doing well. -


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Kanta

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #24 on: August 11, 2008, 07:41:21 PM »

ok i'll syednami slowly


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syednaami

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #25 on: August 18, 2008, 03:22:04 PM »

Kanta jee, It's ok, as you like the best.


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Roja

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #26 on: August 25, 2008, 03:05:08 AM »

Woh Jabani hi saja dega
Dil jala toh bad-dua dega

Vo bhale kuch bhi na kar paye
Apni nazron se gira dega

Waise honge ped-paude bhi
Jaisa tu aabho-hawa dega

Jhoot sach ko kya mitayega
Jhoot tujko hi mita dega

Khud mein hi umeed paida kar
Kaun "Roja", tujhko hausla dega


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Kanta

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #27 on: September 02, 2008, 04:34:57 PM »

ketna daring likha behena roja, hai mein to toda der ke liye nishabd ho gai

sada teri udasi pe mera dil jale
na ker esa kam ke muje hi saja mile,

tere gayal sharir pe marham rakhu
kash isi wajah se hi muje tera prem mile,

nirash mein hu tab bhi chahugi tuje
na milo khud per patr mein hi tera javab mile.


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Aryaan

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #28 on: September 02, 2008, 04:43:25 PM »

Very Nice Roja & Pooja...


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Kanta

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Re: *Udas Nahi*

«Reply #29 on: September 03, 2008, 02:54:18 PM »

where are you roja sis, miss you so much crybaby2


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