Udasi Ka Diya

by Meena on May 09, 2005, 04:37:03 PM
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Udasi ke diye ko ek shaks jala gaya koi phir se,
Bewafai ki bonde tel me mila gaya koi phir se,

Barose ki imaraton me khaid kiya tha is diye ko,
Baimani ki chuan se in deewaron ko hila gaya koi phir se,

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

Kushiyon ke deepak jalayenge, is ek diye ka ab kya kam,
Aise jhoote wadon se dil ko behela gaya koi phir se!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2005, 04:54:22 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Udasi ke diye ko ek shaks jala gaya koi phir se,
Bewafai ki bonde tel me mila gaya koi phir se,

Barose ki imaraton me khaid kiya tha is diye ko,
Baimani ki chuan se in deewaron ko hila gaya koi phir se,

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

Kushiyon ke deepak jalayenge, is ek diye ka ab kya kam,
Aise jhoote wadon se dil ko behela gaya koi phir se!!!


wonderful  meena.............bahot  accha likha  tumne......thanx mat  bolna..plzzzzzzzzzz....

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

bahot  acchi lagi mujhe..................... tongue3
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2005, 04:56:22 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
Udasi ke diye ko ek shaks jala gaya koi phir se,
Bewafai ki bonde tel me mila gaya koi phir se,

Barose ki imaraton me khaid kiya tha is diye ko,
Baimani ki chuan se in deewaron ko hila gaya koi phir se,

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

Kushiyon ke deepak jalayenge, is ek diye ka ab kya kam,
Aise jhoote wadon se dil ko behela gaya koi phir se!!!


wonderful  meena.............bahot  accha likha  tumne......thanx mat  bolna..plzzzzzzzzzz....

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

bahot  acchi lagi mujhe..................... tongue3


 :D  ok i wont say thanx  :D
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2005, 05:00:46 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Quote from: "Meena"
Udasi ke diye ko ek shaks jala gaya koi phir se,
Bewafai ki bonde tel me mila gaya koi phir se,

Barose ki imaraton me khaid kiya tha is diye ko,
Baimani ki chuan se in deewaron ko hila gaya koi phir se,

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

Kushiyon ke deepak jalayenge, is ek diye ka ab kya kam,
Aise jhoote wadon se dil ko behela gaya koi phir se!!!


wonderful  meena.............bahot  accha likha  tumne......thanx mat  bolna..plzzzzzzzzzz....

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

bahot  acchi lagi mujhe..................... tongue3


 :D  ok i wont say thanx  :D


ur  welcome   meena........................................
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2005, 06:01:12 PM »
wao ..very nice Meena sis.............................................. ..........................
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2005, 06:07:36 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Udasi ke diye ko ek shaks jala gaya koi phir se,
Bewafai ki bonde tel me mila gaya koi phir se,

Barose ki imaraton me khaid kiya tha is diye ko,
Baimani ki chuan se in deewaron ko hila gaya koi phir se,

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

Kushiyon ke deepak jalayenge, is ek diye ka ab kya kam,
Aise jhoote wadon se dil ko behela gaya koi phir se!!!


wah meena,very nice Usual Smile
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2005, 06:49:35 PM »
thnak u nikki....... and nidhi......................... Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2005, 07:04:42 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Udasi ke diye ko ek shaks jala gaya koi phir se,
Bewafai ki bonde tel me mila gaya koi phir se,

Barose ki imaraton me khaid kiya tha is diye ko,
Baimani ki chuan se in deewaron ko hila gaya koi phir se,

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

Kushiyon ke deepak jalayenge, is ek diye ka ab kya kam,
Aise jhoote wadon se dil ko behela gaya koi phir se!!!

Bohat khoob Meena......
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2005, 09:22:58 PM »

nigaahein jhuka ker, kuch aisa ker do "Naz"...
naraz ho ke bhi wo fida tum per ho jayein!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2005, 11:16:06 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Udasi ke diye ko ek shaks jala gaya koi phir se,
Bewafai ki bonde tel me mila gaya koi phir se,

Barose ki imaraton me khaid kiya tha is diye ko,
Baimani ki chuan se in deewaron ko hila gaya koi phir se,

Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,

Kushiyon ke deepak jalayenge, is ek diye ka ab kya kam,
Aise jhoote wadon se dil ko behela gaya koi phir se!!!




is zindagi ka ik naya roop dikha diya teri mohabbat ne
hum thay kya aur ab hain kaun sab bhula diya teri mohabbat ne

jo bass ek hawa ke jhonkay ke saath hi gir jaye wo
tash ke paton ka mahal mujhe bana diya teri mohabbat ne

aanso'on mein bhi hansna sikha diya teri mohabbat ne
bina aag ya kisi sholay ke mujhe jala diya teri mohabbat ne

wo sapnay wo umeedein wo intizar kabhi thay ya na thay
udaas thay to sahi pehle bhi per ab rula diya teri mohabbat ne...



HumTum sad5
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Aman_rahi
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2005, 03:51:05 AM »
Pyar ki fizaon me dimi pad gayi thi roshni iski,
Aaj tanhai ki aag ko dil me fela gaya koi phir se,


Meena ji....

ye misra to dil ko choo gaya.....

kutch raakh hi thi sar chupaane ka aasra ^AMAN^.....
aaj bache aashiyane ko jala gaya koi phir se......

khush rahiye.....
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2005, 11:37:11 AM »
shukriya aryaan...naveed...humtum....aman ji!!!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2005, 11:40:14 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
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is zindagi ka ik naya roop dikha diya teri mohabbat ne
hum thay kya aur ab hain kaun sab bhula diya teri mohabbat ne

jo bass ek hawa ke jhonkay ke saath hi gir jaye wo
tash ke paton ka mahal mujhe bana diya teri mohabbat ne

aanso'on mein bhi hansna sikha diya teri mohabbat ne
bina aag ya kisi sholay ke mujhe jala diya teri mohabbat ne

wo sapnay wo umeedein wo intizar kabhi thay ya na thay
udaas thay to sahi pehle bhi per ab rula diya teri mohabbat ne...



HumTum sad5


wahhhhhhhhhh, beautifullll!!!!!!!!!!!

matlab woh mohabbat ka aaj samajhne lage,
jab hum apna rasta unke raste se badalne lage,

humne to shant kar diya dil me uthe mohabbat ke maujon ko,
aab unke arman humare liye machalne lage,

behek rahe hai woh mehefil me sab ka haath pakde hue,
aur hum hai ke tanhai me sambalne lage!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2005, 11:54:21 AM »
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Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
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is zindagi ka ik naya roop dikha diya teri mohabbat ne
hum thay kya aur ab hain kaun sab bhula diya teri mohabbat ne

jo bass ek hawa ke jhonkay ke saath hi gir jaye wo
tash ke paton ka mahal mujhe bana diya teri mohabbat ne

aanso'on mein bhi hansna sikha diya teri mohabbat ne
bina aag ya kisi sholay ke mujhe jala diya teri mohabbat ne

wo sapnay wo umeedein wo intizar kabhi thay ya na thay
udaas thay to sahi pehle bhi per ab rula diya teri mohabbat ne...



HumTum sad5


wahhhhhhhhhh, beautifullll!!!!!!!!!!!

matlab woh mohabbat ka aaj samajhne lage,
jab hum apna rasta unke raste se badalne lage,

humne to shant kar diya dil me uthe mohabbat ke maujon ko,
aab unke arman humare liye machalne lage,

behek rahe hai woh mehefil me sab ka haath pakde hue,
aur hum hai ke tanhai me sambalne lage!!!!!!!!!!!



Bhoot khoob Meena ji ....  Aap to kamal hi ker gyi ...... kuch arz hai

tujhmen ai! dost jab koi khuu-e-wafaa nahin
kis muh se kah rahe ho ki tum bewafaa nahin

kyon is kadar aziz hai makkaariyaan tujhe
kyaa dil meN tere ab koii khauf-e-khudaa nahin

armaan mere dil ke bikhre hain har taraf
aur aap kah rahe ho ki kutchh bhii huaa nahin

ahbaab saare chup haiN meraa haal dekh kar
kyaa dard hai mujhe ye koii puuchhtaa nahin

jisne bachaa liyaa hai mujhe haadsaat se
us ajnabee se meraa koii waastaa nahin

dhundhlaate hue rishtoN kii is bhirh mein "HumTum"
ab aapke sivaa koi aapkaa nahin ....

HumTum
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2005, 12:00:57 PM »
shukriya ji aur apka jawab bhi bohot acha hai!!!! :D

hum unki raha se hath gaye to kehte hai hume bewafa,
woh kya jane ke aab bhi unka pyar hume dikhta hai har jagha,

guman hua hume, woh humse bichad kar zada kush hai,
to nikal gaye unki zindagi se, kehte nahin isko dagha,

aab to bas duaon ke liye haath uthte hai humare,
woh jaha bih rahe kush rahe, aye Khuda!!!!!
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