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tumhe bhulana ab is dil ke bas mein nahi hai
yeh alag baat hai ki tujhe saath beeta waqt ab yaad aana nahi
ek khawaab ki tarah raha tu mere jehan mein
yeh alag baat hai ki tune kabhi is sach ko maana hi nahi
thaa ek ankaha sa rishata tere mere beech mein
mujhe sab yaad raha per tune kabhi is dil ke bandhan ko jaana hi nahi
yeh dil bhi kar betha woh nadaani nazare mila ke
bhula na paaya woh lamha jo kabhi haqikat ka afsaana hi nahi
jee lete hum bhi kuch pal tere ishq ke saaye mein
per yeh woh armaan thaa jis mein hamne kuch kho ke bhi thaa paana nahi !!
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2006, 06:37:48 AM » |
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teri bebasi pe dil aaj khub roya hai
har purani bat yad karu ye zaroori to nahi
humne bhi apni zindgi ko khawabo se hi sajaya hai
har khwab pura ho ye zarrori to nahi
tere mere rishton ki dor badi nazuk thi
har dor tut jaye ye zarrori to nahi
kisiki ek nazar se hum sab kuch har gaye
har nazar me vo kashish ho ye zarrori to nahi
unhe ishq ke saye me sone ke arman hai
har arman pura ho ye zarrori to nahi
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2006, 11:56:42 AM » |
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bahut khoob ..NERAJ ..AND MAJID ....
mere dil Ne kab tujhse kuch manga hai
mila hai dard jo yah toh ishq ka koi waada hai
haar bethe hain hum apna sab kuch
ab bhi zamaane ka tever kyu berukhi hamhe dikahata hai
samjhaata hai koi ishaaro se hame apni kuch unkahi baato ko
mujh per yeh rehmo karam umeed se kuch jayaada hai
kaun tehara hai kabhi sukhe reit ke veeran saayo mein
kyu koi umeed ka badaal ab bhi in aankho mein bhar jaata hai!!
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2006, 06:15:46 AM » |
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nice thread....and very nice majid ji,neeraj ji & ranjana...........aacha likha aapne.......
apne jabt ahsaaso se kuch nazm banane lagte hai
jab bhi dard uthta hai hum mehfil sajane lagte hai
samajhti hai jise woh berukhi us bebasi ko hum
unki yaadon ki chav tale aksar chalkaane lagte hai
sunte hai khudko bewafa jab hum unke labo se
accha lagta hai dil ko aur muskuraane lagte hai
sochte hai woh hum khush hai mehki fizaao mai
per is dilka kya jise aache reit ke veerane lagte hai
ki kahi jaan najaaye 'fahi' zamana mere isharo ko
apni khamoshi unhe hum khamoshi se padhane lagte hai
..............................@fahi@................................
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2006, 07:31:38 AM » |
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kabhi badala hawaao ne rukh
kabhi dil ke halaat kuch aise badle hain
woh chale nahi saath mere kabhi
per hamsafar keh ke usko mera log gujare hain
kaata har lamha tanha maine apne hi sapano ke saath
jaane kaise zindagi ke har hadaase hum per se ho kar nikale hain
yahan ab umeed ka deepak na jalaaye koi
mere saaye bhi mere andhero se ho kar ke gujare hain
likh diya kabhi apne afsaano ko apne lafazo mein
pad ke logo ne kaha mere bayaan dard ban kar hi kyu nikale hain!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2006, 07:37:40 AM » |
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wah wah wah Ranju ji kaya baat hai.... bahoot hi gahra likha hai apne.... ek ek shabd dil ko chu gaya... good work..
badal sakta hai kon
takdeer hai apni apni
wo jeeta raha mujse
pal pal ki mout rahi apni
sath ho kar bhi, tanha safar mera
usko mile phool, armaano ki khak apni
her diya bujhta gaya, raho main meri
main jayoti uski, wo jawala apni
kaya likhu, kaise likhu, shabd hi nahi
dictionary uski, ansoo ki ladi apni…..
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2006, 07:53:49 AM » |
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shukriya pooja ...............nice lines .....bahut hi sunder likha hai aapne
ab apne hi dard ka deeya jalaau kaise
woh mujhe bhul gaye ab unhe yaad aau kaise
banaaya thaa kabhi unke lafazo ne dil mere ek Tajmehal
yeh woh lamha thaa ab us lamhe ko doharaau kaise
har ahahaat per nazaro ne talasha hai unko
pyaar mein dube woh lamhe wapas laau kaise
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2006, 08:00:26 AM » |
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wah kay abaat hai
beeta waqat kabhi lout kar nahi atta
yaadon ka bas ek silsilla hai rah jaata
bahoot chaha, bahoot sambhala jisko
kayun wo shakas hai dard de jaata
bewafai uski bhi rulaati hai mujko
wafa ka koi silla kayun nahi wo de jaata
dard tha, dard hai aor dard hi rahega sada
Rishta yah dard se kayun nahi toot jaata
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2006, 03:16:31 PM » |
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tumhe bhulana ab is dil ke bas mein nahi hai
yeh alag baat hai ki tujhe saath beeta waqt ab yaad aana nahi
ek khawaab ki tarah raha tu mere jehan mein
yeh alag baat hai ki tune kabhi is sach ko maana hi nahi
thaa ek ankaha sa rishata tere mere beech mein
mujhe sab yaad raha per tune kabhi is dil ke bandhan ko jaana hi nahi
yeh dil bhi kar betha woh nadaani nazare mila ke
bhula na paaya woh lamha jo kabhi haqikat ka afsaana hi nahi
jee lete hum bhi kuch pal tere ishq ke saaye mein
per yeh woh armaan thaa jis mein hamne kuch kho ke bhi thaa paana nahi !! Sailaaab hai paani ke...... Jinhe hum Samander me Saja nahi sakte...... Badd jaati hai Uljhane unki iss kadar...... Ke khud se bhi woh halchal chupa nahi sakte...... Harkat hai unki Saanson ki Naazuk...... Ke Ehsaaah ab woh aur Dil me Chupa nahi sakte...... Dekho rona nahi Janam...... Kyunki iss WaQt hum aapke Aansu sookha nahi sakte...........!!!!!!!!!! Everyone done a gr8 Job...!!!!! |
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2006, 06:13:02 AM » |
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wah wah! kya baat hai.. ek se badh kar ek kalaam.. bahut bahut khoob.. RANJANA, POOJA JI, GAURAV BHAI, MAJID BHAI, aur PJAG.... sabhi ne kamaal ka likha hai...  |
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2006, 06:24:39 AM » |
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sukriya ...........!!!!!!!!!
gud job pooja ji & B.d bro.............
uljhi hai ye zindagi jo to sansein bhi ulajh jaaye
sayad iis tarah dono ke dil ki pyaas bhi bujh jaaye
.....................@fahi@............................
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2006, 12:57:05 PM » |
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nazare khamosh ho kar kuch toh dard bayaan karti hain
jubaan se hum jo unko keh na paaye woh khwaab palate hain
uski yaado ke kuch chiraag aaj bhi dil mein jalate hain
woh hamse bichar ke bhi kyu hame apne kareeb se lagate hain!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2006, 01:58:51 PM » |
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tumhe bhulana ab is dil ke bas mein nahi hai
yeh alag baat hai ki tujhe saath beeta waqt ab yaad aana nahi
ek khawaab ki tarah raha tu mere jehan mein
yeh alag baat hai ki tune kabhi is sach ko maana hi nahi
thaa ek ankaha sa rishata tere mere beech mein
mujhe sab yaad raha per tune kabhi is dil ke bandhan ko jaana hi nahi
yeh dil bhi kar betha woh nadaani nazare mila ke
bhula na paaya woh lamha jo kabhi haqikat ka afsaana hi nahi
jee lete hum bhi kuch pal tere ishq ke saaye mein
per yeh woh armaan thaa jis mein hamne kuch kho ke bhi thaa paana nahi !! bahut khub ranjana....bahut hi achha...yaar aap jaha jaati ho chha jaati ho....mind blowing... |
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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2006, 02:03:55 PM » |
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shukriya ji ....bahut dino baad aap aaye .....
kabhi jo jhanka kisi ki nazaro mein
toh har ek shaks ki apni alag kahani hai...
yahan kaun kisi ka hota hai
har kisi ko apni manzil khud hi paani hai
kabhi mila jo saaya kisi ka yahan
woh toh bas pal do pal ki kahaani hai
kabhi furast mein sunana yeh dard ki dastaan
abhi toh aankho mein mere bas ek dariya tufaani hai !!
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«Reply #14 on: November 30, 2006, 04:25:37 PM » |
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hamari har kahani mein tumhara naam aata hai
ye tumko kaise samjhaye ki kaisa tumse naata hai
kabhi jo dil ne kaha mujhe kuch chupke se
toh jaise har pal dharkata dil tera hi naam sunata hai
basa hai tu dil mein mere kuch is tarah se
apana vajood bhi mujhe ab tujh sa nazar aata hai
kabhi toh dekega yeh tu bhi apne afsaano mein
ki mere hi naam ka kyu zikar wahan baar baar aata hai
aaja ki ab miltne lagi hai meri har tamaana
teri ek jahalk ke liye yeh dil beqrar hua jaata hai
hamari har kahani mein tumhara naam aata hai
ye tumko kaise samjhaye ki kaisa tumse naata hai !!
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