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«Reply #15 on: November 30, 2006, 04:28:23 PM » |
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hamari har kahani mein tumhara naam aata hai
ye tumko kaise samjhaye ki kaisa tumse naata hai
kabhi jo dil ne kaha mujhe kuch chupke se
toh jaise har pal dharkata dil tera hi naam sunata hai
basa hai tu dil mein mere kuch is tarah se
apana vajood bhi mujhe ab tujh sa nazar aata hai
kabhi toh dekega yeh tu bhi apne afsaano mein
ki mere hi naam ka kyu zikar wahan baar baar aata hai
aaja ki ab miltne lagi hai meri har tamaana
teri ek jahalk ke liye yeh dil beqrar hua jaata hai
hamari har kahani mein tumhara naam aata hai
ye tumko kaise samjhaye ki kaisa tumse naata hai !!
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«Reply #16 on: November 30, 2006, 04:53:23 PM » |
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Excellent Ranju....ab bhi ek Khamoshi Jahalakti hai tumhare likhe me  Awaaz suni thi maine woh Taraani......
Aghaaz tha aisa jaise Armaano pe phir raha ho paani......
Gustaakhi Maaf mere Huzooor......
Mahobbat me the hum Kayal bas isliye ki thi Naseeb se manmaani.....
Ek phook me Jab kashti lagi Dagmagane......
Hairat thi Nigaah unki Shayad lage hum bhi Kismat ko azmaane......
Giraf me Dar-o-Gum ki......
Humne kuch Khawaab aaj phir Saja liye.....
Tum nahi dogi agar ab saath hamara......
Toh bas humne bhi apne Ashiyaan jala liye.........!!!!!!!! |
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ranjana
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«Reply #17 on: December 01, 2006, 07:02:13 AM » |
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mere lafazo mein bayaan mera hi afsaana hai
ab main tujhse kaise kahu ki tu is se anjaana hai
chipe hain meri muskarhat mein abhi kuch dard naye
hai tere labo per hansi hai toh mujhe bhi muskarana hai
mar chuke hain hum toh apni maut se pehle
ab kis tarah kahe ki is zindagi ko jee ke jaana hai
dawa kare ab hum apne kis kis dard ki yahan
yahan har dawa ne bhi mujhe dard hi de jaana hai
jaate jaate meri raaaho se mujhe aavaaz na dena
behak na jaaye mera dil fir se yeh toh diwaana hai !!
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«Reply #18 on: December 03, 2006, 12:37:56 PM » |
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nice goin............very nice indeed.........
ho sake to aey khuda mujhe itni sada dena
maut per unki mera bhi janaza saja dena
cheen lena wafaaye meri karke mujhe ruswa
mere jismpe karke jhakham unko dawa dena
rehmo karam ki nazar se har saans per meri
dhadhke jitni dhadkane utni unko duaa dena
..........................@fahi@.................................
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«Reply #19 on: December 03, 2006, 01:10:42 PM » |
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Very nice friends !! Bohot khoob !!
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«Reply #20 on: December 05, 2006, 05:54:22 AM » |
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The last words She told me...................
Mujhko parakhne ka natija kya nikla
Zakhm-e-dil nazron as bhi gehra nikla
tod ke bhi dekh liya aaina mere dil ka
bata teri surat ke siwa kya nikla.....................
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«Reply #21 on: December 05, 2006, 09:45:09 AM » |
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kisi ki yaad mein hamne aaj pee ke dekha
zindagi aaj tujhe kuch aise maine jee ke dekha
kyu khirkee se jhaankate hain yeh sitaare
kya inhone bhi meri tarah umar bahr chaand ka rasta dekha
koi manzil aur bhi hai kya ishq ki yahan per
maine toh har pal ek tanaha rasta sa yahan per dekha
bujha diya maine apne dil mein har umeed ka chiraag
per dil ne raat bhar kiske khawaabo ka rasta yahan dekha !!
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«Reply #22 on: December 05, 2006, 09:49:12 AM » |
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kaya baat hai bahot hi kboob dosto... bahut hi accha likha hai sabne.......
na mil saka payar to kaya
na pa saka kisi ka saath to kaya
zindgi sarakti lagti hai haatho se to kaya
payar ka yeh roop to humne hi dekha........
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«Reply #23 on: December 07, 2006, 04:36:54 PM » |
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nice...........
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«Reply #24 on: December 08, 2006, 01:04:47 PM » |
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shukriya ji ....bahut dino baad aap aaye .....
kabhi jo jhanka kisi ki nazaro mein
toh har ek shaks ki apni alag kahani hai...
yahan kaun kisi ka hota hai
har kisi ko apni manzil khud hi paani hai
kabhi mila jo saaya kisi ka yahan
woh toh bas pal do pal ki kahaani hai
kabhi furast mein sunana yeh dard ki dastaan
abhi toh aankho mein mere bas ek dariya tufaani hai !! BAHUT KHUB LIKHA YAAR.... |
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«Reply #25 on: December 09, 2006, 10:36:15 AM » |
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shukriya .....
jo beeti hai dil per kab uski shikayat hamane ki hai
is dil ko har pal dharkane ki saja hamne yahan di hai
na jaane kis ki khushboo se thaa mera jehan roshan
meri aankho mein aaj bhi tasveer yeh kiski dikhaayi di hai!!
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«Reply #26 on: December 10, 2006, 09:32:02 AM » |
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very nice everyone.........
* Uljhan ye dil ki suljhaaoon kaise
rutha hai tu tujhae manoon kaise
gila nahi kiya kabhi tujhsae lekin
rota hai dil ye bataoon kaise..........*
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«Reply #27 on: December 10, 2006, 09:32:35 AM » |
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very nice everyone.........
* Uljhan ye dil ki suljhaaoon kaise
rutha hai tu tujhae manoon kaise
gila nahi kiya kabhi tujhsae lekin
rota hai dil ye bataoon kaise..........*
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«Reply #28 on: December 27, 2006, 02:02:39 PM » |
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shukriya .....
jo beeti hai dil per kab uski shikayat hamane ki hai
is dil ko har pal dharkane ki saja hamne yahan di hai
na jaane kis ki khushboo se thaa mera jehan roshan
meri aankho mein aaj bhi tasveer yeh kiski dikhaayi di hai!! BAHUT KHUB.......
AB IS GULISTAAN MEIN AATA HI NAHI WO MAUSAM,
MERE BAAGO KE JO PHUL KHILA DETA THA.
USNE NAFRAT KE ANDHERO MEIN MUJHE KAID KIYA,
UJALA BAN KAR JISE MAIN RAAH DIKHA DETA THA..... |
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«Reply #29 on: December 27, 2006, 02:06:25 PM » |
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very nice everyone.........
* Uljhan ye dil ki suljhaaoon kaise
rutha hai tu tujhae manoon kaise
gila nahi kiya kabhi tujhsae lekin
rota hai dil ye bataoon kaise..........* BAHUT KHUB....
DILO KE FAASLE MITTE HI NAHI,
HUMNE KAI BAAR CHAHA THA MITANA.
UNKI BERUKHI KA KYA HAAL BAYA KARU,
UNHONE CHAHA THA MERE DIL-E NAADAAN KO JALANA...... |
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