***uljhano ne meri***

by kaushikbhawna008 on October 31, 2008, 08:17:46 AM
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uljhano ne meri mujhko uljhaya hai itna
har umeed tuti aur tuta har sapna
chala hai wo mauje apne daaman mei bharkar
paas reh gaya mere ek dard ka dariyaa

kitne anjaane raaston par kabhi the dekhe
kuch salone pyaar k sapne apne
aaj unchaiyon ko chookar bhul gaya hai mujhe
jiske jivan mei mere bina na tha koi bhi apna

aati hai hasi kabhi apne aap par mujhe
hota hai dard apne aitbaar pe mujhe
maajhi samajh jise patvaar thi di hamne thama
wahi aaj dikha saahil ki jhalak dubaa gayaaa...
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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2008, 08:23:18 AM »
NICE CREATION KAUSHIK, Applause
BY. K.SHAEL
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2008, 08:28:24 AM »
thnk u shally
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2008, 08:37:17 AM »
.....
aati hai hasi kabhi apne aap par mujhe
hota hai dard apne aitbaar pe mujhe
maajhi samajh jise patvaar thi di hamne thama
wahi aaj dikha saahil ki jhalak dubaa gayaaa...

Bhawna

The above lines are too good Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2008, 09:04:09 AM »
Bahut Khoob Bhawna Ji

Uljhan aise hi hote hain
Ki ulajh ulajh kar uljhanon mein
Hum ulajh ulajh kar rah jate hain
Jub tak ye sulajh sulajh kar sulajhte nahi
Aur uljhan hamari door ho jati hain
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2008, 09:33:50 AM »
thnk u rajbir ji notworthy
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2008, 09:34:39 AM »
Bahut Khoob Bhawna Ji

Uljhan aise hi hote hain
Ki ulajh ulajh kar uljhanon mein
Hum ulajh ulajh kar rah jate hain
Jub tak ye sulajh sulajh kar sulajhte nahi
Aur uljhan hamari door ho jati hain


thnk u harish ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2008, 06:36:01 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good work bhawna!!
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2008, 04:37:15 AM »
thnk u pooja ji
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