Uljhan...........Sps

by Sps on July 11, 2016, 06:18:44 AM
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This poem is written by my dad when he was in class 11th. ts priceless for me hope you all like it too.

उलझन

पड़े हुएं हैं इस उलझन में
टूटे पंख पसारूँ कैसे !

                        बाँध धैर्य का टूट चुका है
                        कब तक धीर धराओगे
                        प्रेम राग का बीन बजाकर
                       कब तक मुझे सुनाओगे

उमड़ रहे हैं आँसू मेरे
तुमको हाय ! निहारूँ कैसे
पड़े हुएं हैं इस उलझन में
टूटे पंख पसारूँ कैसे !

                        तरस न खाओ मेरे ऊपर
                        सहानुभूति न दिखलाओ
                        झूटी हँसी ,भुलावा देकर
                        दिल न मेरा बहलाओ

सूख चुके हैं आँसू मेरे
उनको हाय निकारूँ कैसे
पड़े हुएं हैं इस उलझन में
टूटे पंख पसारूँ कैसे !

-उत्सुक
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2016, 06:32:14 AM »
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaah yaqeen nahin hotaa itna achchcha likha hai aap ke pitaa ne uss time Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2016, 08:04:33 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2016, 09:48:22 AM »
Dheron daad to Dad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2016, 07:23:33 PM »
Thanks a lot Adil ji, ye Rakesh ji aur Rustum ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2016, 10:09:22 PM »
waah waah waah kyaa baat hai behtreen. kyaa kehne aapke Pitaa Jee ke.
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2016, 07:20:47 AM »
Bahut khoobsoorat rachna...  Hai janaab..

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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2016, 10:26:47 AM »
SUPERB LINES GREAT JOB BY YOUR RESPECTIVE FATHER
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2016, 10:36:59 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2016, 10:56:55 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2016, 04:43:30 PM »
This poem is written by my dad when he was in class 11th. ts priceless for me hope you all like it too.

उलझन

पड़े हुएं हैं इस उलझन में
टूटे पंख पसारूँ कैसे !

                        बाँध धैर्य का टूट चुका है
                        कब तक धीर धराओगे
                        प्रेम राग का बीन बजाकर
                       कब तक मुझे सुनाओगे

उमड़ रहे हैं आँसू मेरे
तुमको हाय ! निहारूँ कैसे
पड़े हुएं हैं इस उलझन में
टूटे पंख पसारूँ कैसे !

                        तरस न खाओ मेरे ऊपर
                        सहानुभूति न दिखलाओ
                        झूटी हँसी ,भुलावा देकर
                        दिल न मेरा बहलाओ

सूख चुके हैं आँसू मेरे
उनको हाय निकारूँ कैसे
पड़े हुएं हैं इस उलझन में
टूटे पंख पसारूँ कैसे !

-उत्सुक


gr888888888888 poem ,sir your are following the foot steps of your father in writing  it is good
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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2016, 06:34:24 AM »
Thank you Surinder ji, Arjun ji, Sahil ji, Mast khalandar ji, Nandbahu ji aur marhoom bahayaat ji.

 
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