*** Ulzaan*** -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

neelgold

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«Reply #15 on: May 19, 2010, 08:40:45 PM »

Thnx a lot Avtaar ji ....

Thnx 4 ur tym !!!!!

Quote from: AVTAR RAYAT on May 18, 2010, 04:13:01 AM

Bahut Khubsurt Likha Hai Neel Ji,,,,Bahut Khoob....


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neelgold

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Re: *** Ulzaan***

«Reply #16 on: May 19, 2010, 08:42:58 PM »

Thnx 4 ur comnts Madhu ji , it really nyc of u ....
Sachi thnx a lot ... u knoe toda sa appreciation aur mazboor karta hai likhne ko ... appki taliyain kamal hoti hai mzin bhut khush ho jati hoon unne dekh ke

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 18, 2010, 04:44:42 AM

Wah kya adaaye hai aapke likhne ka Neel ji,marvelous and heart touching creation,bahut acha likhti hai aap, Hats off to you!


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neelgold

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«Reply #17 on: May 19, 2010, 08:44:34 PM »

Thnx RAjesh...
so nyc of u ki aapne tym diya ..

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 18, 2010, 05:08:44 AM

Bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne Neel Ji


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neelgold

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Re: *** Ulzaan***

«Reply #18 on: May 19, 2010, 08:55:34 PM »

Koyal Ur too gud Dear!!!!!
thnx 4 ur reply ..
& vry gud writing !!!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on May 18, 2010, 01:18:08 PM

Wah wah wah !!! kya baat hai Neel-di...
ati sunder bhav...dard aur shikaayat... Clapping Smiley

Par sada khush rehne wali aur sab ko hassane wali neel-di....... icon_flower

khud kis Ulzaan mai pad gayee..... icon_scratch

Zindagi tou khud ek Ulzaan hai.....
jo har roj kuchh naya drama dikhati hai.... Is it SO!

Leejeeye chand line aapki Ulzaan ko suljha ne k liye....

Jindagi ek prashn ban kar khadee ho gayee
Main jawaab dhundte-2 khud mai kho gayee

Aur Maine Na jaane kitne panne jeevan k palat diye
Kitne he khushnuma lamhe they tou kuchh oodasi liye

Sochti rahi poori shaam kya ye sabb maine jiye
Kuchh unke saath to kuchh akele he jaayaa kiye


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neelgold

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Re: *** Ulzaan***

«Reply #19 on: May 19, 2010, 08:56:35 PM »

Thnx Khamosh Awaz!!!
Thnx 4 ur tym......

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 18, 2010, 01:21:41 PM

gud one neel.. Applause


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neelgold

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Re: *** Ulzaan***

«Reply #20 on: May 19, 2010, 08:57:27 PM »

Thnx Suresh!!!!!!

Relly appreciate.....

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 19, 2010, 07:07:57 AM

BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI NEEL JI.


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neelgold

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Re: *** Ulzaan***

«Reply #21 on: May 19, 2010, 09:18:10 PM »

Shukriya Riyaz ........
Appne samza yeh hi bhut hai ....
Hausla afzai ke liye shukriya

Quote from: riyaz106 on May 19, 2010, 12:35:14 PM

Wah wah Neel ji kamaal ki poem likhi hai aapne. Dil ke jazbaat bahot saleeqe se pesh kiya hain aapne.


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KOYAL46

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Re: *** Ulzaan***

«Reply #22 on: May 20, 2010, 12:59:38 PM »

THANKS A LOT Sona-di...Aap khud itna achha likhti hain ..... icon_flower

Hum tou kewal saath dete hain.... hello2

Achhe kalaam ko salaam dete hain........ icon_salut

Quote from: neelgold on May 19, 2010, 08:55:34 PM

Koyal Ur too gud Dear!!!!!
thnx 4 ur reply ..
& vry gud writing !!!!!


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