Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

by majid on February 06, 2010, 06:00:55 PM

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majid

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Kuch Derr Saath Chalke , Phir Chhorh Jaate Hain
   Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahein , Morh Jaate Hain.

   Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen , Aur
   Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon Ko , Torh Jaate Hain.

   Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko , Magar
   Kuch Lamhe Phir Bhi Dil Ko , Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.

   Kya Karega Ruk K, Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nahi Shihab
   Chalo Aaj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko, Chhorh Jaate Hain.!


   ~Shihab~


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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 06:04:55 PM »

Best lines from ur poem:

Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen ,Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain.

Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Magar
Kuch Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko Jhanjhor Jate Hain

Good creation shihab.. magar funny lines... Funy section mau jayada achi lagegi... yaha dard main nahi ///


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thinkhattk

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2010, 09:33:07 AM »

very nice creation shahib ji.


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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 01:35:02 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Majid Bhai..

Aakhiri Sher Edit kar dijiye,Aue Behtar Hoga


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 04:23:41 PM »

Nice Shihab Bhai


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madhuwesh

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 09:13:11 AM »

Very touching and great creation Shihab ji.


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riyaz106

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 09:28:13 AM »

Wah wah Shihab kitni achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Ye lines bahut achhi lagin.

Kya Krega Ruk K Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nhi Shihab
Chalo Aj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko Chhorh Jate Hain.!


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sbechain

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2010, 10:23:24 AM »


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shabbir143

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2010, 11:03:19 AM »

Wah Wah Ketli Sadgi Thi Dil No Dard Lakhyon Chhe
Bahuj Saras Rachna Chhe Bhai....
Ane Fikar Not Mari Jaan Hun Aatli Aasani Thi
Ane Aatli Jaldi Tane Nahi Chhodis ... Usual Smile


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deepika_divya

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2010, 11:00:04 AM »

Waah Waah Shihab.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai... Kuch Ankahe Sach ko bakoobi Lafzo mea phiroya hai... Bahoot Khoob !


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2010, 12:03:57 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on February 06, 2010, 06:00:55 PM

Kuch Derr Saath Chalke Phir Chhorh Jaate Hain
Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahen Morh Jaate Hain.

Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen ,Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon Ko Torh Jaate Hain.

Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Magar
Kuch Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko, Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.

Kya Krega Ruk K Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nhi Shihab
Chalo Aj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko Chhorh Jate Hain.!

~Shihab~

Bahut khoob Shihab Ji


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shiba

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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2011, 06:11:38 PM »

No Words Ji
Applause


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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2011, 06:39:30 PM »

bht khubsurat peshkash h shihab ji....
mastam mast likhe ho aap ...


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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2011, 07:02:29 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on February 06, 2010, 06:00:55 PM

Kuch Derr Saath Chalke Phir Chhorh Jaate Hain
Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahen Morh Jaate Hain.

Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen ,Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon , Ko Torh Jaate Hain.

Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko Magar
Kuch Lamhe Phir B Dil Ko , Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.

Kya Krega Ruk K Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nhi Shihab
Chalo Aj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko Chhorh Jate Hain.!

~Shihab~

bahot khoob shihab ji.......


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Re: Umeedon Ko Torh Jate Hain

«Reply #14 on: March 07, 2011, 03:27:05 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on February 06, 2010, 06:00:55 PM

Kuch Derr Saath Chalke , Phir Chhorh Jaate Hain
Haan Log Yun Hi Apni Raahein , Morh Jaate Hain.

Pahle Dikhate Hain Kahin Khwaab Haseen , Aur
Phir Khud Hi Sari Umeedon Ko , Torh Jaate Hain.

Yun To Sambhal Lete Hain Hum Khud Ko , Magar
Kuch Lamhe Phir Bhi Dil Ko , Jhanjhor Jaate Hain.

Kya Karega Ruk K, Ab Yahan Tera Koi Nahi Shihab
Chalo Aaj Hum Bhi Is Bazm Ko, Chhorh Jaate Hain.!

~Shihab~

Waah ji waah shihab ji behetareen peshkash..