”” ummeed ki aakhri kiran ””

by nirala on March 26, 2011, 04:03:15 PM
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dard ke jo manjar kahi kho gaye the  
gair hi nikle wo saare..
jo apne se ho gaye the

bahot khel cuhuke hum apni jhuti muskurahto se
ehsaas dilaya gaya fir se,dard wahi..
gair hue apno ki girehbano se

soch bhi yhi or ab chahat bhi
samet jau dard sabi ke,saath apne..
chor jau srf dil ki apni muskurahat hi

ummeed ki wo akhri kiran bhi bujh rhi hai yaaro
jaana hai ab jane do ki jana hi hoga..
bujhti shama ke saath hi nir ko fanaa ho jaana hai yaaro
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2011, 04:05:57 PM »
Quote from: nirala on March 26, 2011, 04:03:15 PM
dard ke jo manjar kahi kho gaye the 
gair hi nikle wo saare..
jo apne se ho gaye the

bahot khel cuhuke hum apni jhuti muskurahto se
ehsaas dilaya gaya fir se,dard wahi..
gair hue apno ki girebano se

soch bhi yhi or ab chahat bhi
samet jau dard sabi ke,saath apne..
chor jau srf dil ki muskurahat apni

umeed ki wo akhri kiran b bujh rhi hai yaro
jana he ab jane do ki jana hi hoga..
bujhti shama ke saath hi nir ko fanaa ho jaana hai yaaro
““
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2011, 04:25:19 PM »
Pehle kadi toh bahaut bahaut aur bahaut zada pasand ayi mujhe..
Bahaut bahaut khoob Nirala dost..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2011, 04:37:34 PM »
nice nirala ji..
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2011, 04:43:32 PM »
bht mast likha h betu ji........ maza aagaya par mujhe tum saddy post karte achche nahin lagte nirale ji....
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2011, 04:56:08 PM »
kya kahu nirala ji achha laga bhi aur nahi bhi aapnke dard ki bayani to kabile taarif hai lekin jane kio baat samjh nahi aayi .kasak ne sahi farmaya aapki sad post achhi nahi lagti kuchh yo india ke members ka khyal to kijiye
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2011, 05:11:25 PM »
thanx aap sabhi ka dosto…
meri utpatang chij ko sarahne ke lie sukriya.

aur maata ji jab aapne betu kah dia to mere naam se ’ ji ’ aur ’ aap ‘ nikaal dijiye. acha nai lagta aise.
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thanx again aal
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2011, 06:06:39 PM »
Bahut Khub Nirala Bhai
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2011, 05:21:45 AM »
dusari duniya mei kahi hum kho gaye
teri shayari ke kayal hum ho gaye
Quote from: nirala on March 26, 2011, 04:03:15 PM
dard ke jo manjar kahi kho gaye the 
gair hi nikle wo saare..
jo apne se ho gaye the

bahot khel cuhuke hum apni jhuti muskurahto se
ehsaas dilaya gaya fir se,dard wahi..
gair hue apno ki girebano se

soch bhi yhi or ab chahat bhi
samet jau dard sabi ke,saath apne..
chor jau srf dil ki muskurahat apni

umeed ki wo akhri kiran b bujh rhi hai yaro
jana he ab jane do ki jana hi hoga..
bujhti shama ke saath hi nir ko fanaa ho jaana hai yaaro
““
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2011, 06:49:16 AM »
thanx rishi dear
manoj ji aapki baat hi nirali h
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2011, 04:38:51 PM »
tariff karna koi aapse seekhe

Quote from: nirala on March 27, 2011, 06:49:16 AM
manoj ji aapki baat hi nirali h
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2011, 05:02:45 PM »
na ji naa
tarif bhi mohtaaz hai apke alfazo ka manoj
hum jese naadaan to mohtaaz hai alfazo ka
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«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2011, 05:04:30 PM »
kammal hai aapki shayeri ka
Quote from: nirala on March 27, 2011, 05:02:45 PM
na ji naa
tarif bhi mohtaaz hai apke alfazo ka manoj
hum jese naadaan to mohtaaz hai alfazo ka
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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2011, 05:19:33 PM »
kamaal pe kamaal karte aap ho
jhootmuit ka kahte hume kamaal ho
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«Reply #14 on: March 27, 2011, 05:24:11 PM »
jhoot mujhe janab jara bhi nahi bhata
jhooti tarriff karna hame nahi aata
Quote from: nirala on March 27, 2011, 05:19:33 PM
kamaal pe kamaal karte aap ho
jhootmuit ka kahte hume kamaal ho
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