Ummeed:Shayri-E-Dard

Ram Saraswat

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Dil mein ek khuab tamanna si liye firta hoon

Andha Bahra sa bana honth siye firta hoon

Leke ummeed andhera ye chantega to sahi

Jindagi door magar fir bhi jiye firta hoon


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mkv

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Re: Ummeed

«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2013, 02:49:01 AM »

Bahut hi badhiya sir
aapki pahli post..padhkar bahut accha lag raha hai..
ek kamzor bazm ki nishani bhi..par kya farq padta hai.
Sooraj ko diye ki roshni darkaar nahee.
june 2011 me to sher ka matlab bhi nahee pata tha..aur meter me likhna to door ki baat.
ab maza aa raha hai padhkar.


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: Ummeed

«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2013, 02:50:52 AM »

बेहतरीन!!!!!उमीद पर दुनिया क़ायम है

Quote from: Ram Saraswat on April 20, 2008, 05:35:14 PM

Dil mein ek khuab tamanna si liye firta hoon

Andha Bahra sa bana honth siye firta hoon

Leke ummeed andhera ye chantega to sahi

Jindagi door magar fir bhi jiye firta hoon


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Ram Saraswat

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Re: Ummeed

«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2013, 08:01:37 PM »

Quote from: mkv on July 27, 2013, 02:49:01 AM

MKVji apki is reply ne eik bar fir unhi linon ko padne ka mauka diya jin se shuruaat ki thi is bazm mein.Baki to apni in 4 lines mein yehi kahsakta hoon ki....

Tamannayein bana leti hain ghar, jab dil hamaare mein,
Khwab ki zindagi lagati haqeeqat,ik ishare mein,
Mager tum peir fir bhi, “Ram” rahne do zameen per hi,
Na jane raushani maujud kitani, kis sitare mein.

Bahut bahut dhanyabaad