umra lagi jise KAMAANE main…:Shayri-E-Dard

sacccha_pyar

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DostoN ...

kafi din ho gaye shayri.com pe likhte hue... jo pyar wahaN mila shayad kahiN na mil sake ... bohat suna is bazm ke bare main... socha kyuN na yahaN bhi kuch dostoN ko apna banaya jaye ... khair dekhte hai .. meri kismat maiN yahaN kya hai... apni ek koshish jo pehle post to wahin ki thi.. par yahaN pehle kalaam ke roop maiN pesh kar raha huN ... umeed hai aap logoN ka pyar mujhe jaroor milega ...

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Chale aaye wo yaar aaj apne gareebkhane main…
Aur hum kar gaye kayi khatayeN anjaane maiN…

ye kya nasha tha meri aankhoN maiN ja samaya…
ruth gayi khushi wo, umra lagi jise kamane maiN…

Kya khabar thi wo bura maan jayeNge is kadar…
Ki humeN lag jayeNge kayi baras manane main…

Na rok saka unhe maiN bebasi ye kaisi chayi thi…
Ye saza hai meri, gujar duN jindgi pachtane main…

Kal ka kya bharosha, yakeeN ho bhi jayega unhe…
Hum na rahe, kahiN kar deN itni dair batane maiN…

wahi manzar wahi jism, na raha wo ‘saccha_pyar’…
ghar luta apna, duniya sajayi hai maikhane main…

Aur na poocho dastaan-e-mohbbat e jamane walo…
Hai yai kahani meri, suna dala jise is tarane maiN …

kyuN aaye wo yaar aaj apne gareebkhane main…
kar gaye kyuN hum kayi khatayeN anjaane maiN…

kunal Usual Smile


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Manish_Friend

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umra lagi jise KAMAANE main…

«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2005, 03:57:12 PM »

Wah.. very well written..

Ek hum thae.. jisne bina maange hi sab kuch de diya...
ek wo thae.. jisne kuch maangne a mauka bhi na diya

(not my)


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Meena

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Re: umra lagi jise KAMAANE main…

«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2005, 04:42:11 PM »

Quote from: "sacccha_pyar"

wahhhhhh bohot ache kunal ji, maine apki posts dekhi hai udhar (BTW u dont know me), bohot hi acha likhte hai aap aur im sure ke yaha ke logo ka dil bhi aap jeet lenge!!!!keep writing!!!!

:D


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isha_verma7

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umra lagi jise KAMAANE main…

«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2005, 07:00:36 PM »

"wahi manzar wahi jism, na raha wo ‘saccha_pyar’…
ghar luta apna, duniya sajayi hai maikhane main…"

Wah wah.......this line is mind blowing.......good work.....keep it up!!!


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nikki

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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2005, 07:09:09 PM »

Quote from: "sacccha_pyar"

wah bahut khoob........................


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Aryaan

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umra lagi jise KAMAANE main…

«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2005, 12:56:28 AM »

Bohat khoob likha Kunal.....................


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sacccha_pyar

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umra lagi jise KAMAANE main…

«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2005, 07:08:04 AM »

Quote from: "Manish_Friend"

Wah.. very well written..

Ek hum thae.. jisne bina maange hi sab kuch de diya...
ek wo thae.. jisne kuch maangne a mauka bhi na diya

(not my)

thanx dear manish


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sacccha_pyar

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Re: umra lagi jise KAMAANE main…

«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2005, 07:51:11 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

wahhhhhh bohot ache kunal ji, maine apki posts dekhi hai udhar (BTW you dont know me), bohot hi acha likhte hai aap aur im sure ke yaha ke logo ka dil bhi aap jeet lenge!!!!keep writing!!!!

:D

shukriya meena ...

aur bohat accha laga mujhe ki aap wahaN bhi aati hai ... aur mujhe janti bhi hai .... par shayad ye meri hi badkismati hai ki maiN aapko nahi janta ... khair aapne hounshla badhaya isse badi aur kya bat hogi ... aap sath dete rahiyega ... maiN likhta rahuNga ....

aapka apna

kunal


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sacccha_pyar

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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2005, 07:27:53 PM »

Quote from: "isha_verma7"

"wahi manzar wahi jism, na raha wo ‘saccha_pyar’…
ghar luta apna, duniya sajayi hai maikhane main…"

Wah wah.......this line is mind blowing.......good work.....keep it up!!!

shukriya isha....

aapka apna

kunal


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sacccha_pyar

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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2005, 07:31:31 PM »

Quote from: "nikki"

Quote from: "sacccha_pyar"

wah bahut khoob........................

aapka bhi shukriya

kunal


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apnaa_koi

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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2005, 08:30:12 PM »

Beutiful sacccha_pyar, you have a real talent for writing shayrii...
Lickthay Rehanaa

Always Anjli


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Aman_rahi

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«Reply #11 on: May 09, 2005, 11:07:08 AM »

Quote from: "sacccha_pyar"

Oye jeeje......

bahut khoob.....ek aur behad khoobsurat kalam....

dil se daad kabool karo....pooora kalaam hi aacha laga.....aur koi misra chun.Na mushkil hoga.....

yunhi likhte rahoo...

tumhare saale sahab....


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sacccha_pyar

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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2005, 06:21:48 AM »

Quote from: "Aryaan"

Bohat khoob likha Kunal.....................

shukriya aarayaan


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sacccha_pyar

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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2005, 06:23:22 AM »

Quote from: "apnaa_koi"

Beutiful sacccha_pyar, you have a real talent for writing shayrii...
Lickthay Rehanaa

Always Anjli

shukriya

aapne itna maan diya .. aap logoN ke hi pyar ka talabgaar huN

aapka apna

kunal


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sacccha_pyar

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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2005, 06:25:00 AM »

Quote from: "Aman_rahi"

oye sale sahab ...
shukriya aap yahaN bhi aye aur mujhe hounsla diya ...

aapka jeeja

kunal


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