*****UN KA YE SATANA*****

by baadal102 on December 27, 2007, 04:32:11 PM
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Yaad aate hai kisi ke reh reh ke,
Saanse ruk si jaate hai reh reh ke,

Dil tadap uthta hai kise se milne ko reh reh ke,
Fir un ki kasme aate hai yaad reh reh ke,

Un ka dunia se darna yaad aata hai reh reh ke,
Use darne se unka mere se lipat jaana,Yaad aata hai reh reh ke,

Fir unhe samjhana yaad aata hai reh reh ke,
Samjhate hue un ke ashoo pochna yaad aata hai reh reh ke,

Rote hue un ka has dena yaad aata hai reh reh ke,
Zamane se dar ke jo hume bhool gaye........

Un ka hume satana yaad aata hai reh reh ke.


Baadal
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punam
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2007, 04:40:54 PM »
wow baadal ji bahot khoob... bahot acha likha aapne ..yaad jiski bhi aayi..dil se...

khwaab me bhi kabhi socha na tha
palak jhapakte hi sab kuch kho gaya..

aaj mile aise lagta hai mujhe
aansoo deke mujhe woh chala gaya..

dard dil me utha dil tadap utha
zindagi ki raah me andhera chaa gaya..
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2007, 04:55:27 PM »
superb baadal and punam... very good
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2007, 05:30:33 PM »
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Rote hue un ka has dena yaad aata hai reh reh ke,
Zamane se dar ke jo hume bhool gaye........

Un ka hume satana yaad aata hai reh reh ke.
bohat achha likha hai baadal ji.. Usual Smile
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Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2007, 06:25:55 PM »
Baadal and Punam

Very good ! Mashallah bahut achcha likhte hain aap log !
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prmchawla
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2007, 04:34:17 AM »
very nice baadal, punam

prem
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punam
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2007, 07:05:28 AM »
Thanx roja di,bhaiya..prem ji and rose di...
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baadal102
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2007, 09:32:32 AM »
aap sab ke pyar ke liye thanx.
umeed karta hu aap sab ka pyar
mujhe aise hi milta rehega.

Baadal:)
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baadal102
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2007, 10:24:48 AM »
Aap sab ke jawab se maano saara jaha khil utha,
Rutha hua rub bhi jaise khus hua laga,
Dil ke har raaz ko jaise koi sune-ne wala mila,
Ye sab dekh ke aaj BAADAL jhoom utha,

thanx again

Baadal
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punam
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2007, 10:32:44 AM »
wah baadal ji kya baat hai..

soye armano ko jagane ki kosish kar sakti hun
khoye ummedon ko paane ki aas kar sakti hun
dil agar tuta ..toot ke bikhra bhi toh kya
her tukde pe main naam unhi ka likh sakti hun..
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SHONA
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2007, 11:45:37 AM »
nice one baadal and punam..keep going
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2007, 04:56:51 PM »
gr8 punam ji

Kaise kahu un se ki wo mere zindgee hai,
Un ke bina mare dharkan adhuri hai,
Sanse lena bhi aab muskil hai un ke bina,
Aur wo apne bina zinda rehne ko kehte hai.

Baadal
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punam
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2007, 06:09:33 AM »
kaise kahoon tumhe dil me dard hai kitna
dikha nahi sakti tumhe dard-e-dil apna

dil ki zuban na tum samajh sake na zamana
kahan se laun tazurba dard chupate huye muskan labo pe lana..
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baadal102
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2007, 06:13:14 AM »
gr8 punam ji
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

kahan se laun tazurba dard chupate huye muskan labo pe lana..

Baadal
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baadal102
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2007, 06:18:49 AM »
Darde dil kitna hai ye bataya nahi jaata hai,
ye wo jajba hai jo chehre se bayan ho jaata hai,
kaise chupa paoge isse dard ko,
ye dard to har seene mai jawan hota hai.

Baadal
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