UNGLIYAAN UTHNE LAGI HAIN ........................... HASAN

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Jin pe  tuff  karti  hai  taareekh  bhi  Ghaddari per ,
Kar  rahe  hain  wahi  shakk  meri  Wafadaari  per

Itna  'masoom' , farishte  bhi  gawaahi   de  deiN ,
Jaan   qurbaan   karooN   teri   Adakaari   per

Inkisaari  ko  meri  itna  bhi  abb  tuul  na  de ,
Zarb  si  lagne  lagee  hai  meri  Khuddaari  per

Rok   Be-raah-ravi   apne    bahi-khwaahon   kee ,
UngliyaaN  uthhne  lagi  haiN  teri  sardaari  per

Sirf  Mazloom  ke  hi  paas  haiN  Maafi  ke  Huqooq ,
Maaf   karta   nahi   Allah   Dil - aazaari   per
 
Bechne  waale  ZameeroN   ke  yahaaN  thoak  mein  haiN ,
Chaar   mil  jaayein ge   bus   Do  ki  khareedaari  per

Kaat  lee  khoob  GhareeboN  ke  lahu  se  tuu  ne  ,
Sunte  haiN  abb  tere  Waaris  bhi  haiN  tayyaari  per '

Unnke  haathon  meiN , 'Hasan', saunp ke   hum  Mustaqbil ,
Barson  pachhtaate  haiN  phir  apni  hi  Lachaari  per








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tuff= condemnation ; tareekh = history ; Inkisaari = Modesty ; Tuul = over-stretch     Zarb = chot / hurt ; beraahravi = Rasta bhatakna ;  bahi-khwah = well-wisher ;       mazloom = Victim ;
huqooq = rights ; dilazari = Dil dukhana ; zameer = conscience ;Mustaqbil = Future
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2012, 10:30:07 AM »
bahut bahut khoob hasan ji...daad....Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2012, 10:42:49 AM »
Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2012, 04:15:49 PM »
waah waah hasan bhai bahut khoob kahaa hai aapne khyaalon ko
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2012, 04:33:52 PM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 16, 2012, 10:18:12 AM
Jin pe  tuff  karti  hai  taareekh  bhi  Ghaddari per ,
Kar  rahe  hain  wahi  shakk  meri  Wafadaari  per   Applause Applause Applause

Itna  'masoom' , farishte  bhi  gawaahi   de  deiN ,
Jaan   qurbaan   karooN   teri   Adakaari   per  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Inkisaari  ko  meri  itna  bhi  abb  tuul  na  de ,
Zarb  si  lagne  lagee  hai  meri  Khuddaari  per   Applause Applause Applause

Rok   Be-raah-ravi   apne    bahi-khwaahon   kee ,
UngliyaaN  uthhne  lagi  haiN  teri  sardaari  per   Applause Applause Applause Applause

Sirf  Mazloom  ke  hi  paas  haiN  Maafi  ke  Huqooq ,
Maaf   karta   nahi   Allah   Dil - aazaari   per  Applause Applause Applause Applause
 
Bechne  waale  ZameeroN   ke  yahaaN  thoak  mein  haiN ,
Chaar   mil  jaayein ge   bus   Do  ki  khareedaari  per  Applause Applause Applause

Kaat  lee  khoob  GhareeboN  ke  lahu  se  tuu  ne  ,
Sunte  haiN  abb  tere  Waaris  bhi  haiN  tayyaari  per '  Applause Applause Applause

Unnke  haathon  meiN , 'Hasan', saunp ke   hum  Mustaqbil ,
Barson  pachhtaate  haiN  phir  apni  hi  Lachaari  per   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause








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tuff= condemnation ; tareekh = history ; Inkisaari = Modesty ; Tuul = over-stretch     Zarb = chot / hurt ; beraahravi = Rasta bhatakna ;  bahi-khwah = well-wisher ;       mazloom = Victim ;
huqooq = rights ; dilazari = Dil dukhana ; zameer = conscience ;Mustaqbil = Future

Bahut bahut khoob Hasan Sir
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2012, 05:10:52 PM »
boht nayaab peshkash daad kabool karein
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2012, 03:35:52 AM »
waaah waaaah Hasan sahab
behad umda ghazal
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2012, 03:46:31 AM »
waaah waaaah janab hasan saheb...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2012, 05:02:18 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2012, 10:20:11 AM »
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah janab waah kia baat hai bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam
kahi hai janab... bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

Kia umdaa khayaal aur kia khoobsurat khayaaloN ki gehrai
rahi.. bahut khoob... kafi umdaa ashaaroN se kalaam kahi hai
janab.... behad khoob Usual Smile


Huamri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khudaa hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2012, 10:43:32 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 16, 2012, 10:18:12 AM
Jin pe  tuff  karti  hai  taareekh  bhi  Ghaddari per ,
Kar  rahe  hain  wahi  shakk  meri  Wafadaari  per

JO JAISA HOTA HAI DOOSRE KO BHI USI NAZAR SE DEKHTA HAI
Itna  'masoom' , farishte  bhi  gawaahi   de  deiN ,
Jaan   qurbaan   karooN   teri   Adakaari   per

  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Inkisaari  ko  meri  itna  bhi  abb  tuul  na  de ,
Zarb  si  lagne  lagee  hai  meri  Khuddaari  per
BAHUT KHOOB..........! Applause Applause Applause
Rok   Be-raah-ravi   apne    bahi-khwaahon   kee ,
UngliyaaN  uthhne  lagi  haiN  teri  sardaari  per

SACHH FARMAYAA.
Sirf  Mazloom  ke  hi  paas  haiN  Maafi  ke  Huqooq ,
Maaf   karta   nahi   Allah   Dil - aazaari   per
 
iss baat pe ekhtalafat hai. hukookul-e-baad nahin maaf karta jab tak ke insaan maaf na karey aur shirq nahin maaf karta ki tauba na kare.
Bechne  waale  ZameeroN   ke  yahaaN  thoak  mein  haiN ,
Chaar   mil  jaayein ge   bus   Do  ki  khareedaari  per
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Kaat  lee  khoob  GhareeboN  ke  lahu  se  tuu  ne  ,
Sunte  haiN  abb  tere  Waaris  bhi  haiN  tayyaari  per '
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Unnke  haathon  meiN , 'Hasan', saunp ke   hum  Mustaqbil ,
Barson  pachhtaate  haiN  phir  apni  hi  Lachaari  per

kis ko bhi vote de do kuch nahin hone wala. inqalaab ki zarurat hai







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tuff= condemnation ; tareekh = history ; Inkisaari = Modesty ; Tuul = over-stretch     Zarb = chot / hurt ; beraahravi = Rasta bhatakna ;  bahi-khwah = well-wisher ;       mazloom = Victim ;
huqooq = rights ; dilazari = Dil dukhana ; zameer = conscience ;Mustaqbil = Future


bahut khoob hasan sahab. mere comments agar pasand na aaye to nazar andaaz kar dein. ghazal to bahut khoob hai........!
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2012, 11:32:31 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 16, 2012, 10:18:12 AM
Jin pe  tuff  karti  hai  taareekh  bhi  Ghaddari per ,
Kar  rahe  hain  wahi  shakk  meri  Wafadaari  per

Itna  'masoom' , farishte  bhi  gawaahi   de  deiN ,
Jaan   qurbaan   karooN   teri   Adakaari   per

Inkisaari  ko  meri  itna  bhi  abb  tuul  na  de ,
Zarb  si  lagne  lagee  hai  meri  Khuddaari  per

Rok   Be-raah-ravi   apne    bahi-khwaahon   kee ,
UngliyaaN  uthhne  lagi  haiN  teri  sardaari  per

Sirf  Mazloom  ke  hi  paas  haiN  Maafi  ke  Huqooq ,
Maaf   karta   nahi   Allah   Dil - aazaari   per
 
Bechne  waale  ZameeroN   ke  yahaaN  thoak  mein  haiN ,
Chaar   mil  jaayein ge   bus   Do  ki  khareedaari  per

Kaat  lee  khoob  GhareeboN  ke  lahu  se  tuu  ne  ,
Sunte  haiN  abb  tere  Waaris  bhi  haiN  tayyaari  per '

Unnke  haathon  meiN , 'Hasan', saunp ke   hum  Mustaqbil ,
Barson  pachhtaate  haiN  phir  apni  hi  Lachaari  per








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tuff= condemnation ; tareekh = history ; Inkisaari = Modesty ; Tuul = over-stretch     Zarb = chot / hurt ; beraahravi = Rasta bhatakna ;  bahi-khwah = well-wisher ;       mazloom = Victim ;
huqooq = rights ; dilazari = Dil dukhana ; zameer = conscience ;Mustaqbil = Future


Waaah Waaah Waaah!!!!!

Kya Kehne..Saheb...Har Ek A'shaar Apne Hisse Ki baat Kehta Hua...

Lajawaab!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob!!!!!!

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«Reply #12 on: March 17, 2012, 12:04:48 PM »

Hasan Sahib,

Ek aur achchhee peshkash....

Waah waah....kya kahne...

"kaat lee khoob gareeboN ke lahoo se too ne
 sunte haiN haiN ab tere waaris bhi haiN taiyaari par"

Dili mubaarakbaad kubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2012, 03:09:03 PM »
Quote from: dolly on March 16, 2012, 10:30:07 AM
bahut bahut khoob hasan ji...daad....Usual Smile
Dolly ji . hausla  afzai ke liye  bahut bahut
shukriya . khush  rahiye . Hasan
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«Reply #14 on: March 17, 2012, 04:09:41 PM »
Quote from: ~Aatish~ on March 16, 2012, 10:42:49 AM
Applause Applause
Atish ji , Thanks.
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