Unhi Jiye Jaate Hai

by Pooja on March 18, 2008, 04:13:36 PM
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Hote hai tere hatho be-izaat
Phir bhi tujhi ko chahte hai
Pyar kahe kaya isko hum
Ya bas unhi jiye jaate hai

Her dukh mila hai tujhse
khushi kyun tere sung hi paate hai
Zindagi kahe kaya isko hum
Ya bas unhi jiye jaate hai

Tanha tanha sa ye mera jeevan
Tere hote hue, tanha jiye jaate hai
Khud ko ek zinda lash kahe hum
Ya bas unhi jiye jaate hai

Na kuch tera na kuch mera
Phir kis liye jhagre jaate hai
Insaniyat ka her rang bhoole jaate hai
Hum bas unhi jiye jaate hai….
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2008, 06:10:24 PM »
Dard aor dil ke darmiyaan kaya rah jaata hai
Her taraf kyun tera hi aks najar atta hai
Zindagi meri se, her noor ko churane wale
Ajj bhi dil tere intzaar main, najar atta hai!!

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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2008, 06:54:35 PM »
Lajawaab Shayeri Pooja..
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2008, 07:08:34 PM »
Shukaria Aryaan ji.. mujhe to laga shayad yah kisi ko na samjh aai hai na hi pasand!! kisi ka koi commnets hi nahi mila...
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«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2008, 07:12:01 PM »
Hote hai tere hatho be-izaat
Phir bhi tujhi ko chahte hai
Pyar kahe kaya isko hum
Ya bas unhi jiye jaate hai

Her dukh mila hai tujhse
khushi kyun tere sung hi paate hai
Zindagi kahe kaya isko hum
Ya bas unhi jiye jaate hai

Tanha tanha sa ye mera jeevan
Tere hote hue, tanha jiye jaate hai
Khud ko ek zinda lash kahe hum
Ya bas unhi jiye jaate hai

Na kuch tera na kuch mera
Phir kis liye jhagre jaate hai
Insaniyat ka her rang bhoole jaate hai
Hum bas unhi jiye jaate hai….


Dard aor dil ke darmiyaan kaya rah jaata hai
Her taraf kyun tera hi aks najar atta hai
Zindagi meri se, her noor ko churane wale
Ajj bhi dil tere intzaar main, najar atta hai!!



BAHUT KHOOOOB POOJA...BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE.. Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: March 18, 2008, 10:17:17 PM »
Bohot achcha likha hai Pooja Applause sorry main pehle dekh hi nahin paayi..pehle waali poem to bohot hi achchi hai....
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2008, 12:06:29 PM »
bohot khoob pooja..kya depth hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2008, 02:58:44 PM »
shukaria khwaish ji, TALAT AND RASHI!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2008, 07:27:48 PM »
Ghar se office, office se ghar
Beet gaye din, beet gaye varsh
Ankho se dekhu sadkein wahi nit
Chintao ki jalati man main chita nit

Sawal kai per jawab nahi hai
Khokhli baato main koi jaan nahi hai
Beekhari beekhari in sanson main
Hansi main ab wo praan nahi hai

Thaki thaki subah, dari dari raatein
Khud se hi karte rahte hai dunia ki baatein
Dunia ke najaro se bhi anjaan nahi hai
Chalti in saanson mai koi jaan nahi hai

Ghar se office, office se ghar
Beet gaye din, beet gaye varsh….
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2008, 07:47:44 PM »
Ghar se office, office se ghar
Beet gaye din, beet gaye varsh
Ankho se dekhu sadkein wahi nit
Chintao ki jalati man main chita nit

Sawal kai per jawab nahi hai
Khokhli baato main koi jaan nahi hai
Beekhari beekhari in sanson main
Hansi main ab wo praan nahi hai

Thaki thaki subah, dari dari raatein
Khud se hi karte rahte hai dunia ki baatein
Dunia ke najaro se bhi anjaan nahi hai
Chalti in saanson mai koi jaan nahi hai

Ghar se office, office se ghar
Beet gaye din, beet gaye varsh….


Bahut Bahut khoob!!!

"Beekhri Beekhri Inn saanson mein,
Hassi mein ab woh Praan nahi.."

pooja, aapne sadhaaran se aksharo mein bahut gehri baat likhi hai. Applause Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2008, 07:52:07 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukaria Khwaish ji!! Kuch dino se aise lagta hai jaise mera likha ajkal kisi ko samjh hi nahi aa raha hai... padte bahoot hai (view# se pata chal jaata hai) magar comments koi nahi deta !!

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