unke ane ka sapna dekha phir se...

by Meena on December 16, 2004, 05:13:06 PM
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Meena
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dil ki dhadkan humari tej hone lagi,
woh aa jo baithe hai mehefil me phir se,

jo nazar meri unki nazar se mili,
to woh purani yaadein aaj taza hogayi phir se,

sabse nazre chuka kar is sham ki ronak hai woh,
yuh laga jaise pyar mera samajhne lage woh phir se,

jab yaaron ne ki humse guzarish ek nagme ki,
to hal-e-judai sunane lage hum phir se,

samjha to tha ke ayegi unki ankhon me bhi nami,
par woh te jo muskura kar door chal diye phir se,

hum pukarte gaye aur woh door chalte rahe,
yuh nadani me hum une rokne ki koshish karte rahe phir se,

kafi der tak dekhte rahe apne armano ki chitta ko,
aur tanhai hum pe hasne lagi phir se,

dil ko to aab tak nahin yakeen unki is beruhki pe,
jo har raat unke laut ane ka sapna dekhte hai phir se.
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2004, 08:13:24 PM »
no comments?  :?
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nishita
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2004, 11:07:38 AM »
Awesome.. meena..

mat rooko humain aaye yaroon...abhi saans baki hai...
sab ki saans rok ke ik din choor jayenge hum....

(NM)
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2004, 11:09:57 AM »
thanx nishita sis!

 :D
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2004, 11:20:45 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
dil ki dhadkan humari tej hone lagi,
woh aa jo baithe hai mehefil me phir se,

jo nazar meri unki nazar se mili,
to woh purani yaadein aaj taza hogayi phir se,

sabse nazre chuka kar is sham ki ronak hai woh,
yuh laga jaise pyar mera samajhne lage woh phir se,

jab yaaron ne ki humse guzarish ek nagme ki,
to hal-e-judai sunane lage hum phir se,

samjha to tha ke ayegi unki ankhon me bhi nami,
par woh te jo muskura kar door chal diye phir se,

hum pukarte gaye aur woh door chalte rahe,
yuh nadani me hum une rokne ki koshish karte rahe phir se,

kafi der tak dekhte rahe apne armano ki chitta ko,
aur tanhai hum pe hasne lagi phir se,

dil ko to aab tak nahin yakeen unki is beruhki pe,
jo har raat unke laut ane ka sapna dekhte hai phir se.



beautiful work meena ji
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2004, 11:24:13 AM »
beautiful thought meena ji
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2004, 05:06:34 PM »
thank u thank u!

im so happy u guys really think ke its gud!  Usual Smile
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KaMaL
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«Reply #7 on: December 18, 2004, 05:55:31 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
dil ki dhadkan humari tej hone lagi,
woh aa jo baithe hai mehefil me phir se,

jo nazar meri unki nazar se mili,
to woh purani yaadein aaj taza hogayi phir se,

sabse nazre chuka kar is sham ki ronak hai woh,
yuh laga jaise pyar mera samajhne lage woh phir se,

jab yaaron ne ki humse guzarish ek nagme ki,
to hal-e-judai sunane lage hum phir se,

samjha to tha ke ayegi unki ankhon me bhi nami,
par woh te jo muskura kar door chal diye phir se,

hum pukarte gaye aur woh door chalte rahe,
yuh nadani me hum une rokne ki koshish karte rahe phir se,

kafi der tak dekhte rahe apne armano ki chitta ko,
aur tanhai hum pe hasne lagi phir se,

dil ko to aab tak nahin yakeen unki is beruhki pe,
jo har raat unke laut ane ka sapna dekhte hai phir se.


Very good Meena ji...
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2004, 05:59:57 PM »
thanx kamal ji!

 :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2004, 08:45:56 AM »
Bahut khoob by all.
one by me if u appreciate...

Ek kankad hu koi moti nahi,
Zindagi varna jahar boti nahi,
Aadmi ke shok yaa zid ke siwa,
Dard ki koi wajah hoti nahi.
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2004, 04:50:28 PM »
nice hate ji

 :D
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2004, 05:11:48 PM »
VERY NICE MEENA JI!
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2004, 05:29:42 PM »
thanx nidhi  :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #13 on: December 20, 2004, 06:54:48 PM »
Bohat khoob Meena..
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Meena
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2004, 05:30:25 PM »
shukriya aryan ji!

 :D
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