Unki berukhi ne ...

by NewYorker on December 29, 2004, 04:54:07 AM
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NewYorker
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Woh aate the aur sarmaate the
Aur kya-kya adayen dikhate the
Saare aarmano ko jhan-jhod diya

Unki berukhi ne
Sawan ko bhi mukh mode diya
kuch iss kadar apna dil tod diya
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nishita
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2004, 09:07:27 AM »
Teraa Khayaal dil se mitaya nahin abhi
bedard main ne tujh ko bhulayaa nahin abhi..

Kal tuune muskura ke jalaya tha Khudd jisse
dil se woh charaag bujhaya nahin abhi..

Gardan ko aaj bhi tere baaho ki yaad hai
chaukhat se teri sarr ko uthaya nahin abhi

(NM)
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2004, 12:18:34 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh both!!!!!!

aab to khud par bhi etbaar nahin,
zindagi se hume pyar nahin,
tu bhoole se kabhi hume pyar kare,
teri kasam iska hume etbar nahin! (NM)
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2004, 12:46:46 PM »
very nice meena g,nishita and newyorker.
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2004, 01:36:06 PM »
Bahut khoob.............Meena & Nishita...
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2004, 03:20:00 PM »
shukriya  :D
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2004, 03:28:30 PM »
Usual Smile thx
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2004, 03:41:48 PM »
u r welcome:)
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2004, 04:44:05 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh both!!!!!!

aab to khud par bhi etbaar nahin,
zindagi se hume pyar nahin,
tu bhoole se kabhi hume pyar kare,
teri kasam iska hume etbar nahin! (NM)


very nice....nishi...........yorker..........excellent ...meena........  :lol:

jo our kuch nahin tu koi taza dard hi mile
mein ek hi tarhan ki zindagi se tang aa gaya.............
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2004, 05:02:37 PM »
thanx waheed ji!  :D
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NewYorker
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2004, 06:32:05 PM »
Naaraj kyon ho humse
kis baat se ho roothe
Achcha chalo ye maana
tum sacche hum hi jhoothe

-- not mine....
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2004, 06:36:22 PM »
nice one new yorker!

 :D
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NewYorker
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2004, 08:44:52 PM »
Thanx. MeenaJi... Usual Smile
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Namkeen
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2004, 11:38:57 PM »
Apni Aakhon Ke Samunder Main Utar Jaane De.....
Tere Mujrim Hoon, Mujhe Doob Ke Mar Jaane De.....
Zakham Kitne Teri Chaahat Se Mile Hain Mujhko......
Sonchti Hoon Kahoon Tujhse, Magar Jaane De....N/M
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nikki
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2004, 12:16:40 AM »
excellent work Newyorker ji, nishita ji,meena ji, namkeen ji and waheed ji.
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