Unki khatir....

by punam on June 06, 2008, 06:59:12 AM
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punam
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karenge nahi unse baat
thaan liye the dil me hum
unki khatir kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hum..

hai jisme unka bhala
uske liye kuch bhi karenge hum
dard seene me dabake muskurayenge hum..

nazar nahi aane denge aansoo kabhi
samjhe kuch bhi aaj woh hume
pathar dil kahe bhi to sun lenge hum...

samjhenge woh hume bewafa
par lab nahi kholenge hum
samjhne do kuch bhi yeh bhi seh lenge hum..

unki bhalayi ki khatir
yeh toh kuch bhi nahi
khud ko mita bhi sakte hain hum...
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2008, 07:23:07 AM »
Quote from: punam on June 06, 2008, 06:59:12 AM
karenge nahi unse baat
thaan liye the dil me hum
unki khatir kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hum..

hai jisme unka bhala
uske liye kuch bhi karenge hum
dard seene me dabake muskurayenge hum..

nazar nahi aane denge aansoo kabhi
samjhe kuch bhi aaj woh hume
pathar dil kahe bhi to sun lenge hum...

samjhenge woh hume bewafa
par lab nahi kholenge hum
samjhne do kuch bhi yeh bhi seh lenge hum..

unki bhalayi ki khatir
yeh toh kuch bhi nahi
khud ko mita bhi sakte hain hum...

bohut khoob punam ji

jinhe dil se chaha tha kabhi
unhe bhula denge aaj dil ne ye thana hai
jo shaqs kehta tha ki ham unke hain
aaj unka har aks b begana hai[color]
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2008, 07:49:26 AM »
Thanx kaushikbhawna ji ..nice lines from u ...
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2008, 09:48:46 AM »
Quote from: punam on June 06, 2008, 06:59:12 AM
karenge nahi unse baat
thaan liye the dil me hum
unki khatir kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hum..

hai jisme unka bhala
uske liye kuch bhi karenge hum
dard seene me dabake muskurayenge hum..

nazar nahi aane denge aansoo kabhi
samjhe kuch bhi aaj woh hume
pathar dil kahe bhi to sun lenge hum...

samjhenge woh hume bewafa
par lab nahi kholenge hum
samjhne do kuch bhi yeh bhi seh lenge hum..

unki bhalayi ki khatir
yeh toh kuch bhi nahi
khud ko mita bhi sakte hain hum...

bahoot achche jaabaat....khoobsurat peshkash......

unke liye ab ye bhi karenge,
jalayenge khud ko, dard bhi sahenge,
 
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2008, 10:07:18 AM »
Bohat khoob punam acha likha hai aapne..


Aapki khaatir hum dard bhi sahe lenge
Jo dard mila hai iss muhabbat men hum sahe lenge
Manga tha khushi aapne diye hai gum hum sahe lenge
Aapki khamoshi ka karan na poochenge
Aapki muhabbat ke khaatir hum zehar bhi pe lenge
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diya786
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2008, 10:47:48 AM »
Quote from: punam on June 06, 2008, 06:59:12 AM
karenge nahi unse baat
thaan liye the dil me hum
unki khatir kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hum..

hai jisme unka bhala
uske liye kuch bhi karenge hum
dard seene me dabake muskurayenge hum..

nazar nahi aane denge aansoo kabhi
samjhe kuch bhi aaj woh hume
pathar dil kahe bhi to sun lenge hum...

samjhenge woh hume bewafa
par lab nahi kholenge hum
samjhne do kuch bhi yeh bhi seh lenge hum..

unki bhalayi ki khatir
yeh toh kuch bhi nahi
khud ko mita bhi sakte hain hum...


jinhe dil se chaha tha kabhi
unhe bhula denge aaj dil ne ye thana hai
jo shaqs kehta tha ki ham unke hain
aaj unka har aks b begana hai[color]



Quote from: honeyrose on June 06, 2008, 10:07:18 AM
Bohat khoob punam acha likha hai aapne..


Aapki khaatir hum dard bhi sahe lenge
Jo dard mila hai iss muhabbat men hum sahe lenge
Manga tha khushi aapne diye hai gum hum sahe lenge
Aapki khamoshi ka karan na poochenge
Aapki muhabbat ke khaatir hum zehar bhi pe lenge

kya baat hai punamji, kaushikji, jayadi
sabhi ne bahut accha likha hai


Aapke sab sitam sahenge hum
pyar phir bhi aapse karenge hum
bhoola na sakenge kabhi aapko hum
hai humein aap hi ki kasam...
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syednaami
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2008, 10:58:13 AM »
Quote from: punam on June 06, 2008, 06:59:12 AM
karenge nahi unse baat
thaan liye the dil me hum
unki khatir kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hum..
.....................
unki bhalayi ki khatir
yeh toh kuch bhi nahi
khud ko mita bhi sakte hain hum...
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Kahte ho karenge na unse baat, -
Socha nahin shayad bigde aur bhi unke halaat, -
Jo bhi karoge par batla do unhen ek baar. -


Alag ho kar dard unka badhaoge, -
Dur rah kar Kaise unko himmat dilaoge, -
Iss tarah to apna nahin unka ka bhi dil jalaoge, -


Aansu to bahaana rok lo ge tum, -
Sach kah ke ek bar hi unko tadpao tum, -
Jhoot moot se unko aur bhi sataoge tum, -

Yaad rakh Bewafai ka daagh ek bar lagta hai, -
Baat kahne ka maoqa bar bar kisse milta hai, -
Batla kar dur chale jana phir kisko gila hai, -


Khairiyat ab kis men hai sab ki, -
Yeh tum bhi khoob jaante ho ya nahin, -
Mita kar Khud ko unki qaatil bhi ban-na tum hi. -


(Syed Naami)

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Punam Saahiba, aaj dard men likha hai aapne par likha to buhat kamaal par niraashata ki bhawana is kavita men chhalak rahi hai...
Pasand aaya...
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pandit
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2008, 04:03:42 PM »
waah punam ji.
kya baat hai... sunny
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pandit
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2008, 04:05:55 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 06, 2008, 12:29:33 PM
Bohat Khoob Punam Ji Koi Aapse Sikhe Dil Ki Baat Ko
Shabdo Main Dhalne Bohat Khoon Ji Lagey Raho..

Aur Sayed Bhai Aapke Baare Main To Jitna Kahe Kum Hai
Bohat Achha Likha Hai Aapne Bhi Lagey Raho...

Baaki Sabe Bhi Achha Likha Hai..Lagey Raho..



Baaki Sabe Bhi Bohat Achha Likha Hai Lagey Raho.
sayed naami ji
aapne bhi khoob reply kiya hai..
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pandit
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2008, 04:10:35 PM »
sau dard bhi hai gawara hume unki khaatir,
kisi ilzaam ki parwaah nahi hai unki khaatir,
maana hai muhabbat ka khuda unko he,
ab jaan bhi haazir hai sanam aap ki khaatir.
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punam
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2008, 05:02:24 PM »
Thanx sanjeev bhai...chalo aap ko acha laga..

Thanx Honey di...aur aap bhi bahot acha likhe...

diya ji thanx...nice lines from u..

wow syed ji bahot acha reply hai..aap ka toh jawab nahi...

shihab ji thanx ..hum toh khud sikh rahe ...hehehe

Pandit ji thanx a lot...bahot khoob likha aap ne..
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punam
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2008, 05:09:19 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on June 06, 2008, 10:58:13 AM
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Kahte ho karenge na unse baat, -
Socha nahin shayad bigde aur bhi unke halaat, -
Jo bhi karoge par batla do unhen ek baar. -


Alag ho kar dard unka badhaoge, -
Dur rah kar Kaise unko himmat dilaoge, -
Iss tarah to apna nahin unka ka bhi dil jalaoge, -


Aansu to bahaana rok lo ge tum, -
Sach kah ke ek bar hi unko tadpao tum, -
Jhoot moot se unko aur bhi sataoge tum, -

Yaad rakh Bewafai ka daagh ek bar lagta hai, -
Baat kahne ka maoqa bar bar kisse milta hai, -
Batla kar dur chale jana phir kisko gila hai, -


Khairiyat ab kis men hai sab ki, -
Yeh tum bhi khoob jaante ho ya nahin, -
Mita kar Khud ko unki qaatil bhi ban-na tum hi. -


(Syed Naami)

=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
Punam Saahiba, aaj dard men likha hai aapne par likha to buhat kamaal par niraashata ki bhawana is kavita men chhalak rahi hai...
Pasand aaya...

bhalaai ke liye kuch karo to usmen burai kya hai
batlake karne se pata hai woh nahin maanenge...

par unke liye hamara door jana bhi utna zaroori hai...
juda hoke kuchh din men woh sambhal jaayenge

jaante hain woh hamari batonse khafa ho jaayenge
kuchh hi din ki baat hai woh samajh jaayenge...

aansoo to pee bhi lenge apne khwahishon ko daba ke
par unki khatir hum har dard ko seene se lagayenge...
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syednaami
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2008, 06:31:22 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on June 06, 2008, 12:29:33 PM
Aur Sayed Bhai Aapke Baare Main To Jitna Kahe Kum Hai
Bohat Achha Likha Hai Aapne Bhi Lagey Raho...

Baaki Sabe Bhi Achha Likha Hai..Lagey Raho..

Baaki Sabe Bhi Bohat Achha Likha Hai Lagey Raho.

My sweet brother... Tum mujhe aur hawa men udao baba... So nice of you....

Quote from: pandit on June 06, 2008, 04:05:55 PM
sa sayed naami ji
aapne bhi khoob reply kiya hai..

So sweet Pandit bhaya... Aap ka buhat mashkoor hun...
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syednaami
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«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2008, 06:39:03 PM »
Quote from: punam on June 06, 2008, 05:02:24 PM

wow syed ji bahot acha reply hai..aap ka toh jawab nahi...



Aap ka buhat buhat shukriya... Punam Saahiba....
Aap ka jawab bhi buhat lajawab sa hai,,,...
So nice of you...

Jawab dene ki koshish karenge... Shukriya
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punam
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«Reply #14 on: June 07, 2008, 10:15:04 AM »
sukriya ji...aap ko acha laga...
wait karenge ji aap ka reply ka...
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