unki tasveer

by nishita on July 24, 2004, 10:36:29 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Author  (Read 3329 times)
nishita
Guest
unki tasveer ko seene se laga lete hai,
is tarah hum judai ka gum mita dete hai..
kisi tarah kabhi unka zikr ho jaaye
to bheege palkho ko chupke se jhuka dete hai..!
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2004, 06:55:20 AM »
bahoot khub nishita!!!!!

lo ajj bhir unki yaad palke bheega gai
lo ajj bhir unki yaad, darad ki lahro mai jhula gai,
roj meri ankho se barsane wale,
roj meri ankho se barsane wale,
Ek bar to muje palat kar dekha hota
Logged
nishita
Guest
«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2004, 05:54:29 PM »
thanks pooja ...but meri creation nahi thi..banane wala ja jawab nahi...
Logged
Ricky
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 8
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
4 days, 3 hours and 56 minutes.

Posts: 2455
Member Since: Dec 2003


View Profile
«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2004, 03:22:35 AM »
yaa . Nishita .. That very good..

but should have mentioned earlier that it is not by u!! anyway you said later. it is also good !!
Logged
nishita
Guest
«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2004, 10:24:38 AM »
thanks guys
Logged
muneeb
Guest
«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2004, 10:30:41 AM »
Usual Smile Nishita your shairi is gr8 Usual Smile

unhain bhool na ke khoshess ke main nay
per Dil na kaha unhain yaad karta rahana
woh hamare fariyad suna na suna
per apna tu farz hai unhain pyar karta rahana :oops:

 sad5  ya kaisa hai nishita
 glasses2
Logged
nishita
Guest
«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2004, 10:32:38 AM »
nice one muneeb
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2004, 02:28:15 PM »
Unko bhool jau, yah jaroori to nahi
Unko hasil kar pau, yah jroori to nahi
wo ho sirf hamare, yah jaroori to nahi
Inke bin chalati rahi yah saanse, yah jaroori to nahi
Logged
zindagi_kal_ho_na_ho
Guest
«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2004, 02:49:52 PM »
bewafaee ka dard humko hai mila ,
tanhaeyo mein  dard bhene laga ,
 milfilo mein palke juhka ke ,
labbo ko khamosh bana deti hoon ,
apna gham  ko loggo se chupa leti hoon ,
tanhaeyo mein hi aankhe naam kar deti hoon ,
bewafa se aaj bhi mein mohabbat karti hoon ,
uss bewafa ko aaj bhi mein yaad kartiu hoon ....
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2004, 02:57:55 PM »
lub khamosh rahe uski bewafai per
ankh num rahi uski judai per
dil ko raha intzaar uske jaane ke bad
ruk gai kaynaat uske laut anne per
Logged
waheed_rose2004
Guest
«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2004, 06:50:00 AM »
rooth kar aap humein bhulane lage,
itne door hue ki aap bahot yaad aane lage,
kaise bhula doon aap ko ek pal mein,,
jab aap ko paane mein humein jaamaane lage
Logged
mnajmi
Guest
«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2004, 10:37:27 AM »
kya baat hai waheed bhai
Logged
Ricky
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 8
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
4 days, 3 hours and 56 minutes.

Posts: 2455
Member Since: Dec 2003


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2004, 10:51:05 AM »
Me too agree with mnajmi!!
Good job wahid !!
Logged
muneeb
Guest
«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2004, 06:18:31 PM »
aankhon pe aansoo ki lakeer ban gaee,
socha na tha aisi taqdeer ban gaee,
umne to phairiin thiin ret main ungliyaan,
ghaur se dekha to teri tasweer ban gaee.
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2004, 06:33:36 PM »
Jaise unki tasweer hamne deewar se nikali hai,
kash ussi tarah usko bhi dil se nikal paty
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 07:26:07 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.094 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer