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Uphaas bacha........
Jeevan ka bhoogol kho gaya
Paas mere itihaas bacha.
Na khushiyon ka anubhav baki
Na dukh ka aabhaas bacha.
Sab samman maan kho gaye
Peeda ke ehsas rah gaye.
Jitne tumne dard diye the
Wo aankhon ki raah bah gaye.
Jeevan ka sab kuchh hare
Paas sirf uphaas bacha...
Wo hi hamko bhul gaya jo
Sanso sang aata jata tha.
Ik andesha sa tha ’mann’ ko
Isilie ghabara jata tha.
Mita diya hai sab yadon ko
Thoda sa madhumaas bacha...
Cheer cheer kar hirdaya dikhaya
Par usne na ek suni.
Shankaon ki nayi kahani
Har din apne aap buni.
Agni-pariksha paar kar gaye
Fir bhi na viswaas bacha...
Jeevan ka bhoogol kho gaya
Paas mere itihaas bacha.
Na khushiyon ka anubhav baki
Na dukh ka aabhaas bacha.....
Manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2011, 06:59:19 AM » |
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Manjum ji ..bahut waqt baat itni achchi kavita padne ka mauka mila.. Great piece of work!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2011, 07:04:03 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya annuji.... bas ek prayas hai.... shukriya ki aapne samay dia aur pasand kia..... duaye dete rahie
sath raihe...
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2011, 08:14:19 AM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Anju ji..
Bahut Achi Kavita Likhi hai aapne
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2011, 08:27:29 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.....
aapka sath yun hi bana rahe....
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2011, 08:37:36 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji.....
duaye dete rahie.... sath rahiega....
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2011, 09:03:00 AM » |
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Uphaas bacha........
Jeevan ka bhoogol kho gaya
Paas mere itihaas bacha.
Na khushiyon ka anubhav baki
Na dukh ka aabhaas bacha.
Sab samman maan kho gaye
Peeda ke ehsas rah gaye.
Jitne tumne dard diye the
Wo aankhon ki raah bah gaye.
Jeevan ka sab kuchh hare
Paas sirf uphaas bacha...
Wo hi hamko bhul gaya jo
Sanso sang aata jata tha.
Ik andesha sa tha ’mann’ ko
Isilie ghabara jata tha.
Mita diya hai sab yadon ko
Thoda sa madhumaas bacha...
Cheer cheer kar hirdaya dikhaya
Par usne na ek suni.
Shankaon ki nayi kahani
Har din apne aap buni.
Agni-pariksha paar kar gaye
Fir bhi na viswaas bacha...
Jeevan ka bhoogol kho gaya
Paas mere itihaas bacha.
Na khushiyon ka anubhav baki
Na dukh ka aabhaas bacha.....
Manju "mann"
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2011, 09:07:56 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya shebaji....
sath rahie........
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2011, 10:07:08 AM » |
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bht khub……
daad dil se
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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2011, 10:07:27 AM » |
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bht khub……
daad dil se
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2011, 10:09:57 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji....
sath rahiega.....
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2011, 05:52:10 AM » |
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nice us maye*, ka koi jawab nahi manoj jo pilaye saaki teri gazel ki tarriff ke liye shabd nahi hai baki Uphaas bacha........
Jeevan ka bhoogol kho gaya
Paas mere itihaas bacha.
Na khushiyon ka anubhav baki
Na dukh ka aabhaas bacha.
Sab samman maan kho gaye
Peeda ke ehsas rah gaye.
Jitne tumne dard diye the
Wo aankhon ki raah bah gaye.
Jeevan ka sab kuchh hare
Paas sirf uphaas bacha...
Wo hi hamko bhul gaya jo
Sanso sang aata jata tha.
Ik andesha sa tha ’mann’ ko
Isilie ghabara jata tha.
Mita diya hai sab yadon ko
Thoda sa madhumaas bacha...
Cheer cheer kar hirdaya dikhaya
Par usne na ek suni.
Shankaon ki nayi kahani
Har din apne aap buni.
Agni-pariksha paar kar gaye
Fir bhi na viswaas bacha...
Jeevan ka bhoogol kho gaya
Paas mere itihaas bacha.
Na khushiyon ka anubhav baki
Na dukh ka aabhaas bacha.....
Manju "mann"
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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2011, 06:05:09 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya manojji.....
yun hi sath rahie.....
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2011, 06:07:28 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya manojji.....
tun hi sath rahie.....
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