-----/// Us din /// -----

by ~Hriday~ on October 07, 2010, 09:24:55 PM

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~Hriday~

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baithe the mandir ki sidhi pe hum us din,
thama tha haath tumhaaara maine jis din,

leke tumhaara haath apne haathon me jaana,
maine chuma tha tumhaara wo haath jis din,

yun jhatke se chhin liya tha apna haath tumne,
fir sharmaake dekha tha apne haath ko tumne,

sharm se aankhen jhukaaye jab baithi thi tum,
aakhon me khoob saara pyaar dekha us din...

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: -----/// Us din /// -----

«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2010, 04:23:08 AM »

beautiful lines,very nice,


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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2010, 08:11:45 AM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI KAPIL JI.....

JAB PAHELI BAR THAMAA THA TUMNE MERA HAATH JIS DIN
KASAM KHUDA KI POORI RAAT NA HAM SOYE THEY "US DIN"


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Re: -----/// Us din /// -----

«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2010, 08:22:30 AM »

thanks a lot...!!!

Quote from: Muzammil, on October 08, 2010, 04:23:08 AM

beautiful lines,very nice,


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Re: -----/// Us din /// -----

«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2010, 10:09:14 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji...!!!

Quote from: cara on October 08, 2010, 08:11:45 AM

WAH KYA BAAT HAI KAPIL JI.....

JAB PAHELI BAR THAMAA THA TUMNE MERA HAATH JIS DIN
KASAM KHUDA KI POORI RAAT NA HAM SOYE THEY "US DIN"


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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2010, 01:05:14 PM »

Bahut khubsuart lines likhi hai kapil ji.....


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Re: -----/// Us din /// -----

«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2010, 01:18:36 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 08, 2010, 01:05:14 PM

Bahut khubsuart lines likhi hai kapil ji.....


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«Reply #7 on: October 10, 2010, 03:17:04 PM »

Bahut achchhi peshkash hai aap ki Kapil


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«Reply #8 on: October 10, 2010, 06:40:54 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh hi... aap kahaan missing the itne din se...?


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