Us hath ko dhundhti hu....

by brokenbyluv on February 28, 2010, 06:52:30 PM
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Apni ankho se jab apna bachpan dekhti hu,
tou kandhe pe rakhe us hath ko dhundhti hu,

jab bhi giri hu khud hi sambhali hu,
jisne shayad hi kabhi sambhala ho us shakhs ko dhundhti hu,

hamesha waqt k pahiye ko ghumte dekhti rahi,
kisi ne kabhi kuch samjhaya ho us baat ko dhundhti hu,

kisi andhere ko saamne dekh piche mudi hu,
tou mujhe hausla deti us raat ko dhundhti hu,

bhataki hu chalte hue kayi baar raho pe,
mujhe thame hue us sath ko dhundhti hu,

haqiqat mein jo kabhi mila hi nhi mujhe..
aaj bhi us khokhle se ehsas ko dhundhti hu......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2010, 07:03:14 PM »
thnx alot shihab ji...
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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2010, 07:20:05 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahaut khoob Geet jee...Waise toh puri achi lagi lekin dusra shaer toh bas bahaut bahaut acha tha...
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2010, 07:32:52 PM »
thnx alot rahim ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2010, 09:53:35 PM »
Wow too good Geet ji.great and very touching creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2010, 02:32:47 AM »
BAHU  UMDA HAI BROKENBYLOVE JI. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 28, 2010, 06:52:30 PM
Apni ankho se jab apna bachpan dekhti hu,
tou kandhe pe rakhe us hath ko dhundhti hu,

jab bhi giri hu khud hi sambhali hu,
jisne shayad hi kabhi sambhala ho us shakhs ko dhundhti hu,

hamesha waqt k pahiye ko ghumte dekhti rahi,
kisi ne kabhi kuch samjhaya ho us baat ko dhundhti hu,

kisi andhere ko saamne dekh piche mudi hu,
tou mujhe hausla deti us raat ko dhundhti hu,

bhataki hu chalte hue kayi baar raho pe,
mujhe thame hue us sath ko dhundhti hu,

haqiqat mein jo kabhi mila hi nhi mujhe..
aaj bhi us khokhle se ehsas ko dhundhti hu......
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2010, 03:56:13 AM »
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Geet !
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riyaz106
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2010, 06:27:11 AM »
Bahaut achhi poem likhi hai BBL ji. Nice creation. Bachpan se haseen koi zamaana nahi hota. Lekin yaad aane par lagata hai kal hi ki baat hai.
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2010, 06:43:18 AM »
Dard Bhare Yeh Ehasaas Baar Baar Padhe Geet Ji.. Ek Udaasi aur Ruswaai Nazar aaye Aapke Yeh Qalaam Me.. Behad Khubsoorati se Apne Dard Ko Lafzon Me Utaara hai aapne..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2010, 09:39:19 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya riyaz ji,madhuji,surresh ji,sophiji n mann ji ki apko merri ye kavita pasand aayi..bus y hi bite kal mein dekha tou alfaz ban gaye aur apke saamne pesh kar diye... notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2010, 09:48:42 AM »
 Clapping Smiley   Applause   Applause
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #11 on: March 01, 2010, 09:56:26 AM »
Shukriya think ji...
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cara
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«Reply #12 on: March 01, 2010, 10:05:28 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI.......


US HAATH KO DHUNDHTI HU JO BACHPAN ME
HAMESHA BACHON KE KANDE PE HOTA HAI

US HAATH KO DHUNDHTI HU JAB BACHA KABHI
GIRTA HAI JO HAATH BACHE KO SAMBHALTE HAI

US HAATH KO DHUNDHTI HU JO BACHPAN MEIN
MERE KABHI NASEEB MEIN  THA HI NAHIN

AAJ BHI MEIN US HAATH KI KAMI MEHSUS KARTI HU
BATAKTI RAHTI HU "US HAATH KO DHUNDHTI HU"
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«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2010, 10:10:30 AM »
thnx cara ji n very nice lines...
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